One Piece: The King of Black Dragons

There are many problems with this novel. First, the Black Dragon Fruit is too awesome and destroys the balance. It is not the ability of a normal fruit at all. Second, the Black Dragon Fruit is so awesome but the protagonist cannot be awesome. The protagonist is too useless. He actually said plausibly that the protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life.

Dark fiction? Don't embarrass yourself, just leave now. I was drawn in by the dark fiction, but it turned out to be a comedy. I don't know what to say. Comedy is comedy, I won't say anything, but please don't use dark fiction as a pretext, thank you.

Fellow fans, do you know why Luffy's reputation is declining in fanfiction? Besides the fact that readers are growing up and developing more mature understandings of One Piece, another reason is that the author's writing style forcibly lowers the protagonist's intelligence and gives Luffy mindless power-ups. Readers, seeing things from the protagonist's perspective, become increasingly frustrated and gradually develop resentment towards Luffy.

Stop fawning over him. What have you been writing lately? Is it just to highlight Carter's stupidity? With such a huge power gap, he managed to destroy his headquarters factory. Who is the protagonist anyway? If you continue to write a villain like that old lady, I'm dropping this book.

I once saw this novel on QQ Reading. The rating was terribly low. I read a few chapters and thought, "No problem, no problem, this kind of novel is good. I'll study hard and maybe I'll have a chance." Then I read about the protagonist's low intelligence and terrible talent. Even if he's terrible, it's okay, since a Devil Fruit can compensate. But... How should I put it?

This ending... Is hardly flattering! Extremely poisonous... Even Sheng Nong couldn't cure it... Let alone Shen Nong...

Is it really a dark theme? It's more like a comedy. The main character didn't give me that dark feeling at all; instead, he seemed like a goofball.

Chapter 105 already... And the protagonist is still a nobody who can't even make it on the Grand Line. He runs away when he encounters Garp; he talks his way out of Shiki's attacks, leaving one of his companions to learn swordsmanship; and then his hand is severed in one strike... Although he manages to reattach it... Emmmmmmm... You might as well have a cheat code like a Rumble-Rumble or a Dark-Dark Fruit.

The last few chapters have been terrible, forcibly giving the main characters' team overpowered abilities; they lack awareness. Someone of Carter's caliber, even without Observation Haki, wouldn't react if someone got right next to him and exploded? Are you kidding me?

This is really ridiculous. They can't just let Luffy off the hook because he's the protagonist... This is a dark story to begin with, what's the point of keeping Luffy around, given his unreasonable behavior?!