One Piece: The King of Black Dragons

There are many problems with this novel. First, the Black Dragon Fruit is too awesome and destroys the balance. It is not the ability of a normal fruit at all. Second, the Black Dragon Fruit is so awesome but the protagonist cannot be awesome. The protagonist is too useless. He actually said plausibly that the protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life. Come on, let me analyze the starting point for you. When everyone is a baby, others don't understand anything. You have the thinking of an adult. When others don't know the world and have no vision (in fact, most people don't know what the world is like, and their vision determines their height). You know a lot after watching One Piece. When others start to practice hard, you have a bug. Make it clear that you are soul-transported and reborn, not flesh-transported, and then start practicing directly. After so many years of life, you should be no different from the aborigines except for knowing a little more information. You're such a waste and you still have the nerve to say that

Dark text? Don't be embarrassed and withdraw as soon as possible. I was attracted by the dark wind. The result is to tease Biwen. I don't know what to say. If you tease Biwen, just tease Biwen. I won't say anything, but please don't use the guise of dark wind. Thank you.

Fellow Taoists, do you know why Luffy's reputation is getting lower and lower in fan fiction? In addition to readers growing up, their understanding of One Piece develops more mature ideas. What's more, the author's writing method forcibly reduces the protagonist's intelligence and gives Luffy unreasonable tricks. When readers see it from the perspective of the protagonist, they will become more and more frustrated and gradually resent Luffy.

Stop kneeling and licking. What have you written recently? In order to highlight Carter's stupidity, the absolute difference in strength actually destroyed the factory in the base camp. Who is the protagonist? If you want to write the main character as a villain like Auntie, then abandon the book.

I once saw this novel in QQ Reading. The rating was terrible. I read a few and it was okay. It's okay. It's okay. This kind of novel is quite good. If you study hard, you'll have a chance. Me. Then I saw something about a protagonist with low intelligence and rubbish talent. It's okay to be rubbish. After all, the fruits can make up for it, but. What did I say at that time? It's considered a half-star, and it's still a content that can be watched by most genres, but it still can't be watched by love. The author is still arguing hard, how are the results? I didn't click on the AC number. More than 600 photos, 1.96 Million clicks per month, you are a god. It's really well written. To be honest, fellow pirates, it doesn't really matter whether you have talent or not. As long as you have a good brain and a chance to find a good fruit, that's fine. But I really can't help it, you piece of trash.

This ending... I can't praise it! It's extremely poisonous... Even Shen Nong can't cure it... Let alone Shen Nong...

Are you sure it's the dark wind? The style of comedy is pretty much the same. The protagonist doesn't give me that dark feeling, but instead looks like a funny guy.

Chapter 105. The protagonist is still a scumbag who can't get along with the Grand Line. He ran away when he met Garp. He ran away when he met the Golden Lion. He left a companion to learn the sword and his hand was cut off with a knife. Although he took him back, emmmmmmm, you might as well give Goldfinger a thunder or a secret fruit.

The last few chapters have been terrible. They forcefully cheat the protagonist's team without any sense. At Carter's level, even if he didn't turn on his sex act, he wouldn't react if he was touched and exploded? Are you kidding?

This is really true, it is impossible to let Luffy go just because he is the protagonist. . . This is originally a dark story, so why would Luffy be left to do something so unreasonable? !