King of Pirates Black Dragon

I want to ask what your relationship is with the fire dragon and ice dragon next door.

There are many problems with this novel. First, the Black Dragon Fruit is too awesome and destroys the balance. It is not the ability of a normal fruit at all. Second, the Black Dragon Fruit is so awesome but the protagonist cannot be awesome. The protagonist is too useless. He actually said plausibly that the protagonist was an ordinary person in his previous life. Come on, let me analyze the starting point for you. When everyone is a baby, others don't understand anything. You have the thinking of an adult. When others don't know the world and have no vision (in fact, most people don't know what the world is like, and their vision determines their height). You know a lot after watching One Piece. When others start to practice hard, you have a bug. Make it clear that you are soul-transported and reborn, not flesh-transported, and then start practicing directly. After so many years of life, you should be no different from the aborigines except for knowing a little more information. You're such a waste and you still have the nerve to say that

Dark text? Don't be embarrassed and withdraw as soon as possible. I was attracted by the dark wind. The result is to tease Biwen. I don't know what to say. If you tease Biwen, just tease Biwen. I won't say anything, but please don't use the guise of dark wind. Thank you.

Fellow Taoists, do you know why Luffy's reputation is getting lower and lower in fan fiction? In addition to readers growing up, their understanding of One Piece develops more mature ideas. What's more, the author's writing method forcibly reduces the protagonist's intelligence and gives Luffy unreasonable tricks. When readers see it from the perspective of the protagonist, they will become more and more frustrated and gradually resent Luffy.

Stop kneeling and licking. What have you written recently? In order to highlight Carter's stupidity, the absolute difference in strength actually destroyed the factory in the base camp. Who is the protagonist? If you want to write the main character as a villain like Auntie, then abandon the book.

I once saw this novel in QQ Reading. The rating was terrible. I read a few and it was okay. It's okay. It's okay. This kind of novel is quite good. If you study hard, you'll have a chance. Me. Then I saw something about a protagonist with low intelligence and rubbish talent. It's okay to be rubbish. After all, the fruits can make up for it, but. What did I say at that time? It's considered a half-star, and it's still a content that can be watched by most genres, but it still can't be watched by love. The author is still arguing hard, how are the results? I didn't click on the AC number. More than 600 photos, 1.96 Million clicks per month, you are a god. It's really well written. To be honest, fellow pirates, it doesn't really matter whether you have talent or not. As long as you have a good brain and a chance to find a good fruit, that's fine. But I really can't help it, you piece of trash.

This ending... I can't praise it! It's extremely poisonous... Even Shen Nong can't cure it... Let alone Shen Nong...

Are you sure it's the dark wind? The style of comedy is pretty much the same. The protagonist doesn't give me that dark feeling, but instead looks like a funny guy.

This is really true, it is impossible to let Luffy go just because he is the protagonist. . . This is originally a dark story, so why would Luffy be left to do something so unreasonable? !

The last few chapters have been terrible. They forcefully cheat the protagonist's team without any sense. At Carter's level, even if he didn't turn on his sex act, he wouldn't react if he was touched and exploded? Are you kidding?

Chapter 105. The protagonist is still a scumbag who can't get along with the Grand Line. He ran away when he met Garp. He ran away when he met the Golden Lion. He left a companion to learn the sword and his hand was cut off with a knife. Although he took him back, emmmmmmm, you might as well give Goldfinger a thunder or a secret fruit.

After reading a few chapters, does the author have to be so unique? The superhuman system must be written as the superhuman system. Everyone is familiar with the superhuman system. I also read some comments saying that the protagonist doesn't want to make progress and is poor at physical skills and dominance, so I'd better skip it.

There is a difference between being confident and calm and being lazy. Calm people are attractive, while lazy people are just disgusting. The author of this book is a person who regards laziness as calm. The protagonist never trains his physical skills and fighting skills. He sleeps in all day long and is too lazy to do anything. He doesn't care when he is exhausted and only relies on his devil fruit ability to act stupidly. Secondly, he is obviously a villain who kills people without blinking an eye, but the daily character of the protagonist is a combination of Luffy and Zoro. Luffy and natural, it is too inconsistent. This book is filled with a lot of old jokes and bad jokes that are not funny at all. The author thought they were funny, but inserted them into it, making it very embarrassing. Funny should be about designing interesting plots and reversals, rather than piling up Internet jokes.

Since the introduction says it is highly toxic and be cautious before entering, I won't fall into the trap.

From the beginning to the end, it was basically torture and all kinds of frustration, and in the end it ended with Wang Lufei dying together. There is almost no climax or blood, and I doubt that Wang Lufei is the protagonist. .

The main character is trash from the beginning to the end. Every time the strength improves, it is described as if it has passed a few levels, and then it only improves a little bit. In the end, it finally becomes awesome, and it does not appear for a few chapters. After the final boss is invincible, it disappears inexplicably. It has always been rubbish and it has finally become invincible without pretending to be a comparison. Not recommended.

Devil Fruits have souls, and darkness cannot be fused with each other. It's like two devils who don't obey the other, and every Devil Fruit has flaws. If it could be fused so easily, someone in the One Piece world would have eaten two fruits with the same attributes!

So fucking awesome

What are you doing! Quickly kill the Straw Hat Pirates 👊\^O^/

What the hell, it's all in the clouds. If you can't write, you can go to the factory and get food and lodging included.

I was scared away by the comments. I hate this kind of driving high and going low.

The introduction was so awesome that it turned out to be nothing.

Although I strongly recommended it, the ending was still unfinished because Luffy was forcibly defined as the boss. . .

This is dark writing, completely hilarious, and written with no logic.

I can't stand it. I can't beat anyone.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong, all of whom are great swordsmen and compete with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

The author of this book is very imaginative, and he actually thought about it so much without finishing it. Not many One Piece works are outstanding, because the early setting of One Piece was eaten up by Oda. The definition of strength from beginning to end is very confusing, and it is still very messy 2 years later. And this is an open world, and world conquest is very powerful, and everyone is unhappy when it keeps stealing development. However, the ending is still a bit quick, and I feel like it would be better to write him as an invincible novel. Really recommend it, very good fanfic,

After reading the comments, I was so scared that I ran away.

Shouldn't I continue writing? The Stars and the Sea is the beginning of this book. The rest is all up to imagination.

You can even write about going to a parallel world.