Endless Lost Things

The writing is great... Occasionally, I thought about it word by word, and I found that it was really well-intentioned. A story full of mysterious shadows, a protagonist who is desperate to survive, and a road ahead filled with shadows... Great praise! Of course there are flaws, for example, there are always betrayal subplots: the heroine doesn't reveal any important information when she comes out, the sword always vows not to disclose anything, the liar hums... Of course, I don't rule out that the author has designed some overtones, I didn't catch it. One or two The first time I tell you the truth makes me proud (I am also a person with secrets). The third or fourth time makes me tired (I'll go and you don't say anything, why are you wasting energy). I feel that since I have been reborn, I don't know any information behind the scenes, but I wait for the information to expire, so I am being petty? What should we do if future generations are pushed into the ditch by fate... What I don't say now is just for your own good. This situation is not normal. Well, this hole must be filled carefully, for example, if there is dirt that can see the memory. Otherwise, it will be a little less rigorous. Finally, thank you for such a high-quality story!

I hope the author will keep writing this book together. I really read it well. I really like this book.

A work without a soul In fact, the title of the book is more appropriate: The Legend of Long Aotian, which is composed of unrelated and independent chapters. Look at the article, except for the protagonist, who is awesome, the rest are all weak fighters. In addition to being awesome, the protagonist is also stupid. Otherwise, why would you spend a lot of money to get some mercenaries who are good at fighting as guards, so that they can call for help from time to time so that the protagonist can experience the pleasure of being a baby daddy? In addition, the protagonist is still a cold-blooded animal with no heart of gratitude. When the protagonist was humble and penniless, the temple sponsored a huge sum of 50 gold coins. Otherwise, the protagonist could not even afford a kitchen knife and might starve to death on the streets. How would he have the chance to fight monsters? But when did the protagonist ever think about repaying the favor? A girl from the temple gave money and favors to the protagonist, but after she died, the protagonist had no interest in digging a grave or erecting a monument for her. I made a bunch of unrelated stories. A passerby and passerby B wrote related and confusing stories. For example, a noble xx was arrested and disappeared. A bunch of people looked for it but couldn't find it. It's over. The xx officials tried hard to find the person, but they were carried back unconscious and the rest were gone. A certain girl from the temple was going to the xx forest, and later died. ... Too many useless and useless plots.

I'm a little confused. In the past six months since the review, the dirty (monster) side was described to be powerful and planned so many things, and killed a lot of people in and outside the city, which made a lot of noise. And in the timeline before the flashback, why does the city where the protagonist stayed for three full years seem to be as if there is no such thing, and there is no trace of having experienced this disaster? Could it be that it was solved quietly by the city's higher-ups? (And the protagonist has no memory of this incident, and just remembers some kind of trickster with the will of the relic that never appeared again after looking back...)

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I don't know what I wrote, so I left.

I feel like it would be better for the author to start over...

Author, I think your writing is very good. Life is never smooth sailing and must be full of various setbacks and incomprehensions. Many people think you abuse the protagonist, but I don't think so. What the protagonist needs is to grow up through various events. I think most people's image of the protagonist in online novels is too one-dimensional. They think that either killing them all the way or pretending to be cool all the way is considered abusing the protagonist. In fact, the protagonists in all major classics grow up in various hardships and confusions. I hope you, the author, can stick to your own ideas and write down, and just refer to the readers' suggestions on the plot. Who hasn't had an adventurous dream, to be reborn as a demon hunter? Someone gave me a chance to save the world, and I was willing to do it. Some people always regard the world they travel through as a normal world and people as human beings. In fact, I think the protagonist has integrated well into this world and become a part of this world. Then we need to abandon the previous world and keep it hidden in our hearts. Your novel is not like those novels about a world where people travel through time. If you can't integrate into this world, you can't write it well. It's best to hope that the author will continue to persevere. It would be great if he could update once a day (I don't expect you to update twice a day).

I feel so bad when I read Chapter 9!! I am also very timid. I remember when I was about 10 years old and half asleep, I saw a figure beside the bed. I was so frightened that I punched him. In fact, it was no figure, it was just a shadow on the wall. At that time, I was still a child. When I encountered such a strange thing, even the first person in the world knew how to punch it. Where is the pig's foot? What else can you do besides being afraid of running? Yes, of course I can run, but the problem is that I can't run! Besides, isn't there a sword? It's true that the unknown scares people, but after seeing it a few times, you still can't swing a sword?