Rebirth of the Original Alien World

No matter how bad an author's first book is, as long as there are people who read it and support it, and patiently finish writing the first book, you will gain the first batch of fans, and then the second and third books. The first condition is to finish writing. If you don't believe me, go read the author of Dawn of the Ages. It took several years to write, but it is finished. The newly opened books have good results now, but the updates are a bit slow. Don't disappoint those who support you, and don't give up on the original intention of your book. Come on

In Qidian novels, there are many Black Pangu, Black Hongjun, Black Sanqing, Black Zhunti Yingyin, Black Nuwa, Black Emperor Juntaiyi, and Black Tathagata, but no one comes out. If you don't like watching, just retreat silently. You have many things to believe in God.

This farming novel is unusual, it's primitive, it has alien monsters, and the male protagonist still has the kind of character that I admire. Novels similar to the character of the male protagonist include "Awesome! My Primitive", "I Have a House of Horrors", "Flag of the Evil God", "Come to Another World to Become a Demon King", "King Kong Skull" and so on. The protagonists of these novels are all kind, just, respectful people who respect love and have no harem. Unlike the male protagonists in most novels, the original world is an ordinary person. After time travel, he is so cruel. He kills people at will, kills if it is not in his interest, kills if he doesn't like it, kills if he is offended, and buries a lot of people with him. I don't know if you have seen the American movie "The Big Brother". The male protagonist in it is just like the protagonists of those cruel novels. He thinks that he is right and he can kill others if they want. I hate these scumbags so much, I feel disgusted. Of course, I never criticize the author in reviews of those novels. They are creative people, and there is nothing wrong with creating a scum character. However, when they preach that it is natural, I despise and disgust them. However, I will only give some suggestions and opinions of my own, hoping to reduce the impact of such unpopular ideas on some people's worldview and values. One of my junior high school classmates is quite nice, a bit lonely, but he really believes that it is right to "do not punish others for themselves". His views on some things always refresh my understanding of him. Compared with the "innocent heart" in our country, although it seems to be the mainstream, there are not so many people who actually do it and regard "innocent heart" as the correct value. Online novels are not just for entertainment, they can also change the minds of students in the future of our society. Whenever I post those suggestions, there will always be a keyboard warrior who says, "Here you go, Holy Mother Bitch." Kindness is considered a "Holy Mother Bitch," which is so chilling. I don't know why people who are kind will not harm you even if they can't help you. Why is the saying "Holy Mother Bitch" so popular on the Internet. Sometimes people will comment on me, "This society is about the jungle. Even if I am killed, I won't blame others, I will only blame myself for being too weak." Well, I'm not going to argue with the school kids. But why didn't anyone think this way when I was in elementary school? Even my elementary school students would think this was weird. How long has he lived in primitive society? . Nowadays, many primary and junior high school students have mobile phones, and the impact of novels on them is gradually increasing. As adults, let's stop being so childish. I also like to read violent articles, but don't judge them from a show-off perspective. These are the reasons why I am always short of books.

Didn't you say that you were thrown into the street? I thought he was a eunuch눈_눈

Faith is not the same as belief in religion. Those who persist in their faith unwaveringly are great men, and those who persist in their religion unwaveringly are fools.

I will also build a recommendation building. 5 Recommendation votes per day. Come first for one month's vote.

Author, please keep at it. You write well.

In fact, we should respect other people's beliefs. I believe in myself. The Bible says there is only one true God in the world. If you don't believe it, you are a heretic. Therefore, those who believe in Christ and those who do not believe are naturally at odds with each other. Do you think it is wrong for me to scold someone who thinks in his heart that we are heretics?

You can also create characters. There are ready-made words and you don't have to re-create them one by one. You really have nothing to do when you are full. Why don't you just start teaching Chinese characters? As long as you know the meaning of the characters, you have to waste time and effort to start over again? Writing not only represents inheritance, Oracle Bone Inscriptions, and Bronze Inscriptions, why did I change them into Dazhuan and Xiaozhuan and then simplify them into Simplified Chinese? Just because of the need for tools for writing records and the inconvenience of communication caused by the tediousness, the protagonist comes to create new oracle bones one by one! Really smart too! Now there are fewer people saying it, but in the future when there are more people, we will simplify it over and over again? What a waste of time and life!

Can you guys stop confusing God with Jehovah? God is the orthodox god of the Han people. Jehovah is not God. Jehovah being called God is just a trick played by foreign missionaries...

The book fell apart when the author added the Bible to it

The beginning of the chapter was good, and the author's writing was also on point. It started to fall apart after the story of Extraordinary, (the writing went off topic) ~ No matter how good the subject matter is, it will be ruined if it goes off topic. Maybe it can't be said that it's off topic. It should be that the subject matter is Western fantasy (the height and cave issues should be a foreshadowing). However, the opening and introduction are too original, so that people who read it are reading it for the original article... (For example, me) ~ So as soon as the extraordinary comes out, the demons disperse~ In fact, there are still many people who like the original article. What is there in primitive society? There are vast mountains, turbulent rivers, raptors and ferocious beasts, poisonous insects and giant snakes, strange plants and super-effective drugs. There are also environments more terrifying than Shennongjia, Daxing'an Mountains, African grasslands and the depths of tropical rainforests. You start with a few primitive people naked and struggling to survive. There is no intrigue. Everything is created by the protagonist, which is equivalent to drawing on a blank piece of paper! Summary: The original text is a nightmare version of wilderness survival~ Hey, it's a pity that I can't find any better original text to read. The ones written by male authors are all about becoming gods or fighting for hegemony, while those written by female authors are all about romance, love and fighting. I am now a junior, the only one with a bit of a primitive flavor. I have been moving around in the middle period, and in the later period I also went to the grasslands to hunt lions and build cities... Well, I saw a Bible. If it is wrong, the author can delete it. I am just complaining...

I'm a little afraid to read it. When I read the book reviews, there were a lot of nonsense about faith. I'm afraid. JPG

Students who say that religious people are bad and those who don't believe in religion are breaking the law. According to my country's "Regulations on Religious Affairs", it is illegal to instigate conflicts between religious believers and non-religious citizens. In addition, if a religious student preaches how good it is to believe in Christ, then the issue of illegal preaching is also involved. I just read the beginning of this book. If it does not involve discriminating against religious believers, but only criticizes Christianity itself, then you can't find anything wrong. As long as it does not involve discriminating against believers and sowing relations between believers and non-believers, there is nothing wrong with just promoting science and getting rid of superstition.

To be honest, the most disgusting thing is all the Christianity stuff.

In fact, humans have already learned to use open fires when they can carry out complex communication through language. Before, humans needed several hours to chew food... Cooked food roasted over fire is easy to absorb, allowing apes to obtain richer nutrients, and cooked food makes apes less susceptible to diseases. Get nutrition to evolve your brain faster!

Well, I can't hold on anymore, I'm very tired, and I don't want to code anymore. In fact, it doesn't matter. If the eunuch writes a complete statement or writes an outline

To be honest, there are many places where the logic does not make sense and there are many bugs. For example, the language is too fluent.                                It is ten meters thick at the beginning of winter and more than twenty meters thick at the end. What is the concept? No matter what is there, it will be covered. It is understandable that plants can survive when covered, but how can animals live in the forest, and the protagonist has gone out several times to pick up corpses, and some of them have been buried long ago and are still waiting for you to pick up? There are also calendar issues, the number of days, and age are all written clearly...

I'll automatically set it all first, and let's watch it together.

As soon as Extraordinary Power came out, it became boring and turned into an ordinary alien cultivation text.

It was a bit too much when I wrote that the main character was timid. It turned out to be useless when I really went too far. I felt angry when I looked at it.

The original text is the original text, why the hell did you come with extraordinary power, good guy, forget it, why the hell did you come with the power of law? Adding poison to poison

Although the author's writing skills need to be improved, the plot is still quite interesting. But there are some things I still want to vomit. It's just that the author is a bit casual and often complains about this and that in the book. . . There is no sense of immersion at all. Although the public chapter can be ignored, how many people will persist in subscribing? It's more like a storyteller telling a story than a novel. Next is the dog section, which is a bit too much, and that section is really uncomfortable to watch. I am not a dog lover (quietly: I have eaten dog meat...) Then came the stage when the super power started. I read the author's message saying that he started to lose fans. It was originally a good farming article (it seemed relaxing), and then various super bosses began to appear (abuse the main article?). Although it was said to be based on the plot needs and the outline, it was a little caught off guard, and those who couldn't stand it started to give up. After that comes the section of the Bible. . . I can't stand it anymore. If I don't grasp the plot well, it's really useless. Although according to the author's idea, the plot requires it, as a reader, it is still a bit unbearable to watch, and there is also a pre-meal prayer. . . Then will you lecture on the sutras every day and then do nothing else? I only saw this, and I will read it later. The author has made it clear that he is at work again and has updated two more novels. Obviously the quality will be difficult to control, so let's catch up on it first. After all, the writing is still good. If it is released, we will see how it goes and whether to subscribe or not.

Author, I'm all set, come on, author

To be honest, I was attracted to it at the beginning, and the supernatural power after that was okay. But that last part was too messy. Just write magic directly

I heard that one way to get salt is to mix it with animal blood

It can be seen that the author has been improving, mainly because it is rare to complain in chapters. Every time I read a book, I draw pictures in my mind while reading, and when the author's comments suddenly pop up, I will be brought back to reality. . . Also, if you make typos, just make typos. If you see someone complaining, typos are still acceptable as long as you can understand them. It would be uninteresting if the book only described how the protagonist left a legend, but it would be interesting if he became a legend and retreated behind the scenes to watch the development of history. And there can also be a second part, where the protagonist has problems with his cultivation and sleeps for thousands of years. When he wakes up, things have changed. Various cultivation systems have evolved in the world, and there can be another story about the protagonist's strong return or travel.

I will still vote for the daily recommendation. After all, compared to other books I am pursuing, the results of this book are really dismal, and I don't lack my recommendation votes for other books at all. Also, has the author overlooked an issue, that is, the problem of toilets? Before, I only briefly described building toilets, but there are also things to pay attention to when building toilets. The key is that it can be used as fertilizer.

No updates for nine days! Are you a eunuch?

Your Excellency, Chief of Infantry, please tell me the rules for additional updates first. We are more concerned about this