The Destiny of Destiny

I advise newcomers not to fall into this trap. Many of the plots are about working part-time for free, or doing long-term work for free. Play with the reader.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I personally think it is very good. The biggest difference from his article is that I have many friends, so this description feels more in line with life.

There are also comments on Qidian. It's funny that some people are bragging about it when it's written like this.

Sad writing style that feels like an outdated style from ten years ago

The storyline is pretty good, but can you check for typos before publishing? It's okay for you to use the voice function, but it's impossible for a machine to distinguish the same word. Read it yourself first! Guessing words is so tiring!

From the beginning to Chapter 27, there are pitfalls everywhere for the protagonist to lose his wits. The first pitfall is that after traveling through time in a daze, he was playing death for fun. Without observing the situation of the world clearly, he rashly sought out the old men in the same village to seek immortality, and gave up on the promising path of studying and taking the imperial examination. Being too outstanding led to being brushed with dirt, and then I went to private school belatedly. I didn't study seriously when I went to a private school. I looked down on this and looked down on that. My family arranged for me to study with the accountant of the grain store, and I was very good at it. My experience in the White Horse Gang was okay, but then I lost my IQ when I entered the world of cultivation. First he was robbed, but when he resisted the robbery, he failed to snap the robber, leaving him to force a conflict later. Please tell me how many people in the White Horse Gang have been killed before they still make this mistake. Buying Bigu Pills is even more intelligent. I took three pills without asking questions, and then made a joke because I was so full. No normal person with this kind of intelligence would make such a low-level mistake. Taking on tasks to earn money later becomes even more clever. The young owner of the largest elixir shop in Fang City is actually a virgin bitch. Then I suggested skipping directly to Chapter 40, which was another pitfall. He was so extravagant about spiritual stones that he even gave weapons worth dozens or hundreds of spiritual stones to a friend he had just met. Don't you know how poor you are when you first entered the world of cultivation? He became a saint in just a few days. With this IQ, I give up the trap decisively.

I read dozens of chapters. I feel like it's well written, much better than many other works by Shui Platinum. Some people say that the sense of substitution is not good. I think it is pretty good and I don't feel there is anything wrong with the sense of substitution. It is said that it is difficult to agree with others, so the author should continue to improve according to his own style.

Such fake comments, can you pretend to be more realistic? Treat readers as fools

The author has a rare writing style and plot in this book. The writing skills are solid and profound, and it is beautiful.

From the beginning to Chapter 27, there are pitfalls everywhere for the protagonist to lose his wits. The first pitfall is that after traveling through time in a daze, he was playing death for fun. Without observing the situation of the world clearly, he rashly sought out the old men in the same village to seek immortality, and gave up on the promising path of studying and taking the imperial examination. Being too outstanding led to being brushed with dirt, and then I went to private school belatedly. I didn't study seriously when I went to a private school. I looked down on this and looked down on that. My family arranged for me to study with the accountant of the grain store, and I was very good at it. My experience in the White Horse Gang was okay, but then I lost my IQ when I entered the world of cultivation. First he was robbed, but when he resisted the robbery, he failed to snap the robber, leaving him to force a conflict later. Please tell me how many people in the White Horse Gang have been killed before they still make this mistake. Buying Bigu Pills is even more intelligent. I took three pills without asking questions, and then made a joke because I was so full. No normal person with this kind of intelligence would make such a low-level mistake. Taking on tasks to earn money later becomes even more clever. The young owner of the largest elixir shop in Fang City is actually a virgin bitch. Then I suggested skipping directly to Chapter 40, which was another pitfall. He was so extravagant about spiritual stones that he even gave weapons worth dozens or hundreds of spiritual stones to a friend he had just met. Don't you know how poor you are when you first entered the world of cultivation? He became a saint in just a few days. With this IQ, I give up the trap decisively.

How long has it been since the sailors' troublesome hearts were finished? They are still too thin and fattening up to watch again.

After seeing Chapter 49, practicing in a cave for half a day can be compared to one year outside, I decisively gave up the book.

I looked at 200 pictures and it seemed so bland. They were all auctions. There was an auction every other time, and my personality was also speechless. I was always being plotted by others. Those who plotted against me were all unintentional disasters. Forget it once or twice. I felt like a broom star.

It's a chronicle novel. The author graduated from elementary school. The comment section is full of brushes, which is a waste of time.

The writing is great and the content is quite attractive. I'm in the process of updating... Come on 🌹

The protagonist is the good old man + the Holy Mother + the pig teammate.

The novel seems a bit messy and not smooth. The main points cannot be grasped in the description of the plot. Also, the plot always likes to be expressed in terms of memories, which makes it feel that the plot suddenly breaks off and is too stiff! There is a reason why the popularity is not high. I hope the author will write better and better.

To put it bluntly, isn't it the same as the Green Gourd Sword Fairy, selling dog meat with a sheep's head, martial arts?

Chapters 1 to 24 can still be read by those in the book world. By Chapter 25, just knock out a monk who robbed you and forget about it. You are just waiting for someone to take revenge (you have killed more than two people in the gang, how can you still be so vicious?). Then, when you enter Monk City, you have to hand over a spirit stone to get started (you agreed to work for three days if you don't hand it over, but the author still handed it in, which is very generous. The author also forgot that he got 10 spirit stones when he resisted the robbery), and then in Chapter 26, it is said that there is one spirit stone left. Stone, because the Bigu Pill in the storage bag smells mixed with it, I refuse to eat it, so I sell it, and then buy a new one, haha (ಡωಡ) hiahiahia, laugh to death, anyway, you are all gods if you can pass chapters 25 and 26

It's very well written, without any clichés or forced pretentiousness. It's a rare good book.

You are already a cultivator, so why don't you outsmart the singer? Your strength is no better than outsmarting her. If you want to outsmart her, go to the historical literature. It makes me sick when I see it

Give it up, it's all typos, so I won't mention it. When writing a novel, you don't write dialogues or expressions. You rely entirely on describing the narrative. This is an autobiography, and there is no sense of immersion. Furthermore, the writing style is hard to explain and bland. The protagonist is obviously from time travel, and sometimes he is stupid and sometimes he is smart. The introduction has no background at all, it's just a novice's article

The protagonist is a weapon refiner. He never wants to refine weapons for himself, but only for others. Every time, he only thinks of refining the weapons after they are smashed by others.

The plot in the novel is properly set up and can always capture the reader's heart appropriately.

It's a miracle that trash like Enemy Nine is alive. Pig's feet are typical of the Virgin (not the Virgin, there is a difference between the two bitches) sending warmth everywhere

Upstairs, I have also fallen, and I hope the follow-up plot will save me.

Was this written by AI? It's all narrative

The main character has a good name, "Tian"! In ancient times, the emperor was the Son of Heaven. You will be the Supreme Emperor when you are born. Just lie down and wait for the royal family to pay filial piety. Why should you work hard?

I just looked at the character notes and they are all supporting characters. Is there no protagonist in this book? Anyone who has seen it can tell me. Evaluate whether you can stand it

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]