Pirate's Swamp Fruit

Natural fruits are all manifestations of some phenomena of nature, so the natural fruits represented by those dangerous and mysterious natural phenomena that humans cannot grasp are naturally more powerful. Although swamps are not as scary as extreme weather events such as earthquakes, tsunamis, volcanoes, floods, and cold waves, they are still as dangerous as deserts. But whether it is a swamp or a desert, when they become fruits, they are weakened and not as scary as the prototype. The Shasha fruit has lost the ubiquitous high temperature in the desert, and the swamp fruit has lost countless deadly poisonous insects that can carry diseases. This is the embarrassing thing about Shasha Fruit and Swamp Fruit, they lack their trump card. Especially the swamp. Without the cooperation of poisonous insects, if you can get through it with a stick and just explore the way, it is definitely not a dangerous place. So I suggest that you consider getting a scientist to use the containment properties to hide something inside.

It's good. It has the feeling of Magellan. The protagonist's current strength is considered to be at a higher level than the general. Now the general's strength in the fan fiction is already very high. Many fans set a general to be close to the Yonko, not much weaker. A pirate group that can defeat the Yonko group except the Yonko, such as Disk Shadow and Dark General, so I hope the gold content of the general in this book is not too low.

Whether you are strong or not is a matter of one version, and whether you are handsome or not is a lifelong matter. Author, how can you make Swamp Fruit more handsome?

I hope this book won't undercut the natural system too badly! Natural elementalization is obviously a passive skill but it is always written as an active skill (although it can be triggered actively!), But it cannot be defeated without domineering! Don't talk about reactions, the reaction is to actively transform into elements to avoid domineering attacks!

I saw Chapter 16 and I don't understand it. Can anyone explain to me that the people imprisoned in Impel Down City are all bastards and scum. For example, the original person killed five villages and was imprisoned in the second floor. How much blood does the person on the fourth floor have to have on his hands? After all this, the protagonist still sympathizes with them? Do you still apologize for finding them cute? ? ? ? If you want to be black, then be black to the end. What on earth is this nondescript person going to do? Can anyone explain it to me?

These chapters of Prison Break don't feel right? Is the protagonist that strong? Or do you look down on the navy and government? How dare you break out of prison in a traitor's way and dare to destroy the prison and go to the battlefield? It's too ostentatious and arrogant, and it's much contradictory to the previous setting of the protagonist. Are you forcing yourself to do it for the sake of comfort? I'm a little disappointed. I don't know how to write it later. It doesn't have the strength of a general, but the damage is greater than that of Whitebeard. It doesn't make sense to think about the following pursuit lineup without a general. Maybe the navy can't spare time, but CP0 must be dispatched, right? This is the face of an upright world government. It is Imperial after all.

The exercise at the beginning is too fake. There is not so much food for you to consume in the prison, and there is no food and nutritional supplement. . Exercise to become a bamboo pole?

The main problem of this novel is the strength of the protagonist. Most of the other protagonists start their adventures from Novice Village. Even if they are not good enough, there will be a cheat system or something, which makes people feel the approximate strength of the protagonist. But in this book, the protagonist has been struggling, and he has beaten prisoners and guards who have no strength. Until the top, the plot of the book finally begins to unfold. As a result, the author should have continued to struggle, but the author insisted on not doing so. The protagonist with that level of strength forcibly participated in the plot... In the end, the pretense failed, and it made people feel like they were choking in their throats. They couldn't get up and down, or when it was immediately put on the shelves... To be honest, I couldn't understand this operation. Originally, the author's writing style was also good. It didn't matter that the protagonist had a lunatic character, but he had to fix it up and forcefully participate in the plot. Wouldn't it be better to run away honestly, or would it be wrong to silently do things behind his back 😒

Downstairs, it's completely OK to just develop the natural disaster ability honestly. Don't talk about molecules or anything. There are so many weird developments in the pirate world. There is only one bear. Please respect the fruits you eat.

What did the protagonist do? 😰 If you have to become famous, you will cause a lot of trouble, you won't get any hair, and you will almost lose money. If you don't have the ability, why do you need fame? If you have the ability, you still have to worry about not being famous? Do you need fame to recruit pirates? Just hit and that's it. If you really want to fight, top and Impel Down, Black and White Beard, Ace Luffy will be crippled even if you don't die, and you still worry about not being famous?

But since you are writing an ambitious protagonist, you cannot let the protagonist kill him casually. There has to be a motive for killing. You disrespect me, so I'm going to kill you. This is not a careerist, this is Long Aotian. I'm going to show force, so I'm going to kill you. This is not careerism, this is lunacy. So I don't understand why Chapter 42 killed Ivankov's three men to add uncertainty to his meeting with Ivankov. What you describe here completely conflicts with the character you created before. And it seems that none of Ivankov's men in the original work are normal. They are all ladyboys, and Ivankov also attaches great importance to ladyboys, because these are the so-called new humans. It's impossible for three people to be killed and the result to be indifferent.

I can read it, but the writing is not very good. Xiao Baiwen, anti-social, self-righteous, pig-footed character! If you can accept it, you can take a look.

The partition that the protagonist pulled down turned into a swamp, but it didn't collapse?

This bug is too obvious. The condition of the Empress is to meet Ace once, and she did, so Luffy and Ace should escape from prison together. If Ace is sent away early, Luffy will go directly to the Navy Headquarters. And do lv6 leave so many people alive for recruitment? The protagonist has such a huge advantage just to have a chance to escape from prison? First, he deceives Blackbeard, and then he has the magical skill of disguise to replace a marine soldier for a few minutes. This plot is really fascinating.

"Uh-huh-heh" is the laughter in the original novel, why is there still a stick to persuade people to quit?

I don't know why I feel a little bored after chapters 7 and 80. Goodbye

The latest chapters are a bit useless. They forcefully follow the plot and just keep it up. 😒 It's okay if you have the strength of a general, but if you don't have to get in on the top, you're too good at seeking death.

How can the author not just make the protagonist laugh when there is nothing wrong? The score of this book will definitely be much higher than it is now. Of course, what the author wants to write is none of my business. Not much bb

Pretentious writing, although not pretentious, but pretending to be pretentious in the heart, as if the protagonist is mentally ill

Even though I'm already done with it, I still can't help but think that the main character went to war to work for Whitebeard as a wage earner? There are no benefits. After the fight, you will definitely be in trouble. Without Luffy's background, you are even more arrogant than Luffy. The World Government will kill you unless you do it.

Have you read... Feng Qiyue...'S novel? His dark novels are good to read,

I thought it was updated... It turns out I decided to cut it.

Brother author, don't you want to write anymore?

This book is okay, why isn't it updated

The plot arrangement of the characters seems very contradictory. It can be seen from the first few chapters of the book that I thought I was going to keep a low profile and then suddenly pretended to be a small role to show my strength and gain promotion. I guess the author himself can't stand it, so the author tj is normal.

The author has quite some ideas. Although I am a eunuch, I still leave a message to support it. I read some of the previous chapters and expressed my thoughts. The point of your article is that it is not interesting enough. Since you thought of using Straw Hat and Blackbeard to escape from prison and also proposed not to flap your wings at critical moments, what is your starting point? Why kneel down and lick the protagonist? If you don't take action, Luffy will still get in and fall off, so what's your role? Do you mean that you have been holding back for so many years just to destroy Impel Down and pretend to be a bum before leaving? It doesn't make sense. And the biggest profiteer in Impel Down is Blackbeard. . And you also described Blackbeard being poisoned by Magellan, and then did nothing? It is entirely possible for you to ask Magellan not to release Shiliu of the Rain and then kill Blackbeard yourself. What's the point of jumping out in the middle? And there is a problem with the time node cutting. After 2 years, Luffy will become the Pirate King and save the world. Your operability will be basically gone. Breaking away from Xiao Baiwen's worry is that all enhancements must be logical, otherwise everyone is like Luffy, Roger, who can meet the emperor and the world's greatest swordsman when he goes to sea? There are only three pirate groups like this, the red-haired, black-bearded and Luffy. Oda personally killed them. If you find any talented person, you can become a master in the new world after mastering Haki. Among them, Luffy is the most exaggerated. The organizational comparison is that of Doflamingo, who selects talents in Beihai and then trains them with various resources and fruits, but in the end he still pulls his hips. It's not that the protagonist can't have this kind of luck, but you're a fan, and you need to plan everything to get the fun. In one case, don't believe this sentence. There are no weak fruits, only weak people. This sentence is pure fart. How could Kaido survive without eating the carp fruit? Would Doflamingo be weaker than Aokiji if he ate the frozen fruit? The swamp fruit gets stronger as time goes by, and the upper limit is just like that. If you hold it in your mouth, you will finally get through Whitebeard, and then what? Become the Pirate King? That's what Oda can do, but the boss of the spin-off is the World Government, not you who defeated the Four Emperors and became the Pirate King. So even if the midnight snack fruit is developed and is stronger than Whitebeard, you still won't be able to defeat two generals. This way you will have no chance, so the reason why it is difficult to write a pirate article is that the positioning is not good. Many people make garbage fruits or play with their imaginations without eating the fruits. . Are you talking about that steel chain finger and that zipper, or is it just a joke? In the end, when you wake up, even a zipper can beat Whitebeard? Can you overthrow the government? No matter how strong your physical skills are, you still have Kapu Liu? So what if it exceeds Garp? Can you defeat 2 generals? So Swamp Fruit is very strong but it also restricts you, so although the idea is good at the beginning and the writing is a lot, if there is more logic or the article is more refreshing, I think you will have a lot of fans.

After looking at a few pictures, I don't know what it means. Pretending is the most deadly thing.

I found out that this book has been cut, so I will put the final word on what I think is wrong with this book. It feels like the protagonist is very weak in developing fruit abilities. He can develop such strange attributes, but the protagonist always uses it as a cake fruit. In addition to entangling the armed color, there is also the entangling armed color. The plot is quite satisfactory, with no major breakthroughs and overall it's a bit mediocre.

Can't you write some better fruits? Dogs won't eat swamp fruits, right?

I want to know how to use the swamp ability in the ocean?