Hymn of Blood and Fire

The main character is really unlikable.

It's so beautiful😭😭😭!

The protagonist gave me the feeling from the beginning that he was a smart and down-to-earth born aristocrat. He was no different from other aristocrats in this world in terms of their obsession with family and attitudes towards the people and the country. Of course, there is nothing wrong with this. Some authors like to be realistic and some will mix in modern things, but forcibly adding a time-travel background makes reading uncomfortable. This background will bring some readers into modern thinking, so the reader market for the work itself is a bit misplaced. After all, Some readers like to read this kind of Machiavellian novel in which the protagonist's values ​​fit with ancient concepts. Some readers like Long Ao Tianwen who travels to another world and uses certain modern concepts to transform the other world. But in fact, there are more people like the latter. Although the former likes to criticize various works in comments and has a loud voice, in fact most readers do not always comment. They pay more attention to the feeling of pleasure when reading novels, and they do not put too many requirements on rigor. Writing a protagonist who is too aristocratic will not bring a sense of involvement.

This book has been shaping an interlocking and closely connected design and plan, and the plot is described under the pressure of this plan. But, in fact, this kind of plan or conspiracy is impossible to exist at all, because he will fail 100%. Any plan involving multiple people cannot escape the influence of "people", the most unstable factor in any world at any time. Therefore, the more sophisticated the plan, the easier it is to fail.

In this book, we can see the living conditions and mentality of three nobles. They are feudal aristocracy, ruined aristocracy and spiritual aristocracy. Two of them are in the main text and one is in the comment area 🤭

If possible, I hope this novel can be finished well and not end rashly because of the performance. This work is worth it. I've only watched 12% of it, but I'm already hooked. Some comments said that the author failed to create the protagonist's specialness and personality. But I think the author's character creation has been very good. In the first ten percent, Duke Nick, the father of the beloved protagonist, has a tense conversation with Duke Eric in Chapter 2, Section 26, which can be called a classic. Later in the royal conference hall, Duke Nick's mediation between the nobles and the emperor showed his dedication to maintaining the operation of the empire as the prime minister of a precarious empire. His character and choices are very three-dimensional. Readers can not only understand, but also feel a politician's ideal and realistic choices. The author can enrich the character list and add these charming supporting characters. I can't wait to show my heart to the Prime Minister.

There are a few words that I don't want to say out loud. First of all, I find it unpleasant to watch. Why? The protagonist is always passive. . From the beginning of being involved in a murder case, being forced to go to the battlefield, being forced to cooperate, being assassinated, to being passively in power. I have always been led by others. Isn't this very unpleasant? Secondly, regarding assassination, the front or main characters have been assassinated or killed by conspiracy. It feels like except the protagonist, other characters die in just a few times. Isn't this too random? But there is no assassination of the villain. Isn't this setting inappropriate? Especially the assassination at Lion Castle. Is it too easy to assassinate a powerful duke in a capital city? In addition, there are too many assassinations, which seriously lowers the momentum of the work. Again, regarding teleportation, this one is even weirder, like a trick the author specially set for the villain. This is best reflected in the assassination of Sir Yale. It is unimaginable that as a crucial pass, there was no space teleportation barrier, which resulted in the death of the top officer from an assassin's teleportation assassination. But the Blood Eagle is still needed to transmit the message, and there is no configuration space for transmission? How will the war be fought in the future? Just teleport some people to the opponent's headquarters or supply camp to set fire or poison, and what else can you do? Don't tell me, but you can achieve space blocking in the field.

It's a pity that an epic Western fantasy novel is qualified for publication. It was serialized in Qidian. It was a waste. You have to be an old man to read the book and find it interesting. Being unhappy at Qidian is the original sin.

It's well written. It's rare for a book to bring the main character and supporting characters to life. The conspiracy and betrayal throughout the story are so heart-wrenching to watch. It's really just two-and-a-half-year-olds. The overly heavy writing and ink make the tone too gloomy. I was choked after just reading the first two chapters.

In fact, the writing is very good, maybe not too refreshing, but dark and true. When I saw those noob pretentious articles on the ranking list, I thought this book was such a pity.

The human mages in this book are all fake. All I read are the orc mages. It's okay. One magical human died tens of thousands, and then a magical human died tens of thousands again

Ah, halfway through watching it, I suddenly realized that I couldn't stand it anymore. The identity of this time traveler is seriously questioned. After becoming a lord, he made various moves and described his pursuit of power, which is not much different from Xinda. It's really uncomfortable to watch. It's better to just cultivate immortality. Why bother writing about being a lord? Isn't it tiring for such a person to write about being a lord?

It feels like the protagonist is not a time traveler, so just don't add this setting.

The writing is indeed good, especially the characterization is relatively realistic, but in an era where cool writing is rampant, this kind of work is destined to be difficult to become popular, which is a pity.

This is a good book, but many of the developments are strange. For example, the empire at the beginning, I think, is very similar to France before the French Revolution. The French king also promoted many people who bought noble titles and fought with those traditional lords and nobles to ensure the transcendence of royal power. For this reason, they called the traditional nobles the sword-wielding nobles and the new nobles the robed nobles. Then the businessmen also had a lot of influence and wanted power, and there was also a chancellor who was originally a big banker. It is very similar to the novel, but the situation is completely different. When various disasters occurred in France and the royal power was not powerful, both the sword-wielding nobles and the robe-wearing nobles united to divide the royal power. The big business elites also followed suit and wanted to benefit. Finally a revolution was made. Yes, the revolution was actually created by the nobles themselves, just to force the king. They thought they could control it, but obviously, they failed to control it in the end. And what about the imperial emperor in the novel? It can be said that the lyrics are not as good as Louis XVI. What's worse, there are many, let's just say the simplest one. Louis XVI had many relatives, and they all said that World War I was a family civil war. It was similar at this time, so the nobles could only use public opinion to force the king with revolution. Otherwise, there may be no need for the king to ask for help, and kings from other countries will come to help themselves. That king does not want it to happen to him next time. As for the emperor of the empire, he has no relatives and his own military force has been abolished, but he is still so arrogant. Even the centralized Chinese emperor would not dare to be so arrogant. Not to mention leading the army to confront the orcs. It is more possible to become a puppet of a constitutional monarch. The six nobles really don't feel like politicians or nobles. But as for the die-hard loyal minister, the author has always denied it. Later the emperor died, leaving only one prince. There is war outside, rebellion among powerful officials and warlords inside, the old emperor has died and the new emperor has not yet ascended the throne. There should not be too many similar things in ancient and modern times, both at home and abroad. But things turned out differently than I knew. The emperor was not abolished and the emperor was established, and the emperor was not coerced to order the princes. And the most favorite thing among Western nobles is to change the king (in the West, most nobles often express that they don't like this person to take the throne, and they will replace another person with royal blood as the king, such as the protagonist who is a cousin). In fact, changing the emperor was very suitable for the time. When the world's largest country becomes like this, there will always be a scapegoat. The dead emperor is very suitable, and the emperor has great responsibility. It can be said that it is justified not to let the emperor's heir. But none. Glory Force is also very buggy. What kind of program can unify all classes and make people loyal to it, killing their compatriots at the expense of their own lives. Even after they were disbanded and served various warlords, they remained loyal and did not even reveal a program. The force of brilliance is somewhat like Danzo from Hokage. Danzo was created by Oda to fix bugs and take the blame. Before, there was no trace of this character anywhere. Also, Konoha always had one master and three disciples. This was true for Kakashi and the third generation. For the second generation, there was an extra Danzo, making it four people. So Radiant Force is very similar to Danzo, they both fix bugs, but Radiant Force is an enhanced version. I only saw the elves attacking the Suk Plain, and I don't know what happened next. Many people may think that I say so many unreasonable things and it is really a dark novel, but I want to explain that I actually like this novel very much. After all, it is impossible to make it fit perfectly in an illusory world. This book is much better than most. As for why you have to say so much? I can only say that I can't help myself. It's precisely because this is an interesting novel that is both coherent and organized. I didn't consciously reason about the follow-up while reading it. But I found that many of the reasonings were different from those in the novel. After reading more, I had a strong desire to talk. In reality, there was no one to talk to, only book reviews. As a result, I wrote a lot, but there was no one. 23333

It would be much better if the protagonist is not written as a time traveler. The protagonist is written like a native, or even worse. Modern knowledge, insights, and thoughts are not included at all, resulting in a very poor sense of substitution. Also, the author let himself go and lost focus, imitating Game of Thrones but not doing it well. The beginning was okay, but the more I read it, the more I finished it. The central protagonist of the novel was marginalized, and the author got excited about writing about other people. He made rapid progress on this road. I don't know if they can come back later, but I persuaded a lot of them to retreat in the early stage.

As a time-traveler, no battle is won heartily, all are difficult to give birth to. Moreover, in this book, the assassins are too powerful, right?

How can this kind of writing achieve this result? I hope the author can stick to it. If it is too real, it will be a lot less enjoyable, and this will result in fewer readers who are spoiled by Qidian Xiaobai's cool articles to subscribe and enjoy it slowly. Hey

The writing is very good 👍, but it feels a bit like writing a history book, and Western history is too boring 🥱. Sometimes history books will also write some plots that deepen the feelings of heroes, but the author really has a way of passing it by in this aspect or purely relying on the readers' own imagination. Sometimes the readers The emotions and sense of immersion also need to be exaggerated by words 😡. In fact, it can be a little more passionate. For example, when facing the invasion of orcs, the individual descriptions of the soldiers' unyielding determination 🪖, as well as the ignition of spontaneous organizations among the people, or the exaggeration of the honors obtained by the protagonist are all fine. As a bookworm of nearly ten years, the overall IQ of this book is online. In the early stage, I was looking forward to the follow-up plot because of the protagonist's own strength and unexperienced passion. However, entering the war plot is just as boring as I said before 😴. Maybe it is really better than Other novels are relatively good, but we cannot blindly pursue plots and various forced sanity, and there is too little description of the protagonist's own psychological growth. In addition, the only cool point in the early stage is the protagonist's force value, which was reduced in order to highlight the powerlessness of personal force in war. Writing, overall, when I see the war part, I want to jump to watch it. The main reason is that I have an indescribable sense of depression, 😵 Especially when facing the underground organization, if you arrange some plots, for example, let them rely on their own force or conspiracy when they provoke the protagonist. Allowing them to suffer a little loss to vent can release these repressions, and in this way a small limit can be achieved, so that the whole battle will not be fought without any ups and downs, the protagonist will not get any honors after the battle, and a war scene will come to an end in a dull way. Also, the protagonist and the nobles as a whole are led by the underground organization. It feels like they will kill anyone they want except the protagonist. The Duke was assassinated and died. From the existing information, it can be inferred who else besides the Tower of Dawn 🤔? The major forces are not prepared at all because of the war 🤔? As for the heroine, if you write her to be beautiful, will it affect your description of her soul? It feels like it's just to highlight the character traits of the heroine and give up on men's emphasis on beauty. Most of the people reading this book are men. Wouldn't it be great if you could describe her more beautifully 😍? Since ancient times, haven't men been pursuing power and beauty? This is a book with a single heroine. Of course, readers who read these comments should not misunderstand that the heroine described in the book looks good. I have only read half of this book. Overall, I feel that it is good and worth reading. It is these problems that make the book less enjoyable, but it is much better than most of the so-called cool articles nowadays, but it also goes to extremes. This style of writing reminds me of the style line of "Purple River", which has high personal force but has little impact on the war. However, compared with "Purple River", it lacks some love and passion for children. The author has written so much in this book now. There is no way to change it. I will learn from this type of writing in the future. I will definitely be a loyal fan by then. I hope the author will make more progress and increase his writing skills to bring us more good books like this one 😃 It is not in vain that I write such a long review 😎 Come on, there is still a lot of room for improvement ✊

Idiom solitaire? I'll come first and do whatever I want. Please take it.

This book mainly has characters that drive the plot. Whether it is the Deputy Minister of Defense, the Imperial Grand Duke, or the Emperor himself. They were all assassinated by an organization in this book. Don't ask, just ask, it's faster

The time traveler was unreasonable at the beginning. Even if an adult with a certain way of thinking traveled through the past and lost part of his memory, it would not affect the people around him at all. He would just grow up. I don't understand why my sister wants to get married. It's already the highest level. Going one step further would be rebellion. The risks outweigh the benefits. The protagonist didn't express his opinion on this at all. Either it starts with all the natives. Will you, a modern person, accept your closest relatives to marry into the pit of fire (the emperor's family) without any resistance at all, when you have every right to refuse? When writing about time travellers, don't write about family members. If you want to write about sacrifices for family interests, just write about the original stories of aborigines.

I still like Machiavellian novels, especially A Song of Ice and Fire, and I have read a lot of fan fiction about A Song of Ice and Fire. I was very surprised when I first read this novel. The author's writing is excellent, and it felt like a Song of Ice and Fire at first. But the long war that followed made me doubt that I was reading a military novel. Of course, it is also possible that this book is a military novel. The lackluster portrayal of the protagonist in the novel also made me not very satisfied with the novel. Although it has portrayed many people, none of them left an impression on me, including the protagonist. It can be said that this book is a conspiracy novel. As a military novel, it is too long-winded and lackluster. As a group portrait novel, it also failed to create many characters. They are all just a taste, and unimportant or unattractive characters really take up too much of the book. Of course, everyone has different opinions. I think the author obviously wanted too much. He wanted to write about machinations but also about grand war and epic feeling. He wanted to write about group portraits but ended up with a lackluster protagonist. In the end, nothing was written well. There are also... There is too little description of the environment. Whether it is the gorgeous castle or the magnificent border, the author has not written anything at all. It is just like writing a historical record. He only knows what happened to the empire and what people did. The sense of substitution is really bad, and the sense of epic has also weakened a lot. To put it bluntly, 90% of the whole text is like writing a running account.

Do you have a brief map?😭

Increasingly intense and unexpected, great book! There is no God's perspective + golden finger crushing that is common in time-travel novels. What is even more rare is that the fusion of fantasy and reality such as politics, economy and people's livelihood is perfect.

When I first read it, I felt it had an epic feel, which was different from a simple novel. I could see that the author had put a lot of thought into it. But after reading it, it became boring. I will briefly talk about my personal feelings. If you don't like it, don't complain. 1. The assassinations in the novel are too powerful, there are a lot of assassination plots 2. When it comes to writing the war plot, the plot is a bit streamlined, the pace is too fast and there is no highlight. 3. It's all machinations. Maybe the problem is that I am not used to this kind of plot 4. The protagonist has no highlights and is relatively bland.