Pirate's Fire Dragon Roar

I've finished watching it all, there's no heroine, nothing too toxic, it's quite interesting.

In the early stage, it was a very original fan novel written by Fei. However, in the middle and later stages, it may be that the author was in a bad mood and became too violent, especially the plot after Wano Country (probably the reason why the author predicted the outcome of the plot and was slapped in the face), and the writing lost its flavor. The plot before Wano Country was particularly well written, and the masculinity of the pirates was written out, but the plot after Wano Country made me can only say that the protagonist is just a man like this. To be honest, I really don't understand why the author arranged for the protagonist to be treated like a villain on an empty island? Even if it is to arrange for the protagonist to be able to understand ancient texts, it is a bit too much.

First couplet: A beer bottle hits the Yonko, and he steps on the future Pirate King. You want to ask me who I am? I am the bandit king of the East China Sea! Second line: I bit off an arm of the four emperors, swallowed the bandit king of the East China Sea, and asked me who I am? I am the king of the East China Sea! Horizontal review: King of kings

What do you want me to say? What the hell is this written about? Is a Pirates fan who doesn't have a harem, doesn't appear invincible and doesn't pretend to be a slap in the face still a Pirates fan? That's right! So damn classic! I have to say good books! Worship(＞＜)

I don't understand why there are so many people complaining. To be honest, I have read these two books no less than three times. The personal charm of the protagonists in these two books is simply overwhelming. I think the writing and plot are second. Even if the personal charm of the protagonist is not limited to two-dimensional novels, this protagonist also left a deep impression on me. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to write pirates anymore.

First of all, there is no absolute justice in this world, whether it is comics or the real world. Although there are scum in the navy (such as Colonel Mouse in Nami's hometown), most of the navy still protects the people. Even if they have to obey the orders of some Celestial Dragons, they can still be said to represent the righteous party on the whole. Even if they want to criticize, they are criticizing the World Government and the Celestial Dragons, not the navy. Do you want to criticize the military if officials in the real world are corrupt? The second is the issue of stance. If the protagonist of this book is a revolutionary army or something, then there is still a stance to criticize the navy (to maintain a corrupt regime), but as a pirate, what stance does the protagonist have to criticize the navy? Is it true that a bad person who does one good thing after doing ten thousand bad things is a good person, and a good person who does one bad thing is a bad person? Even if Luffy's pirate group seems to be doing good things all the way, in fact the impact is extremely bad. After people learn about his pirate group, whether they form it with the purpose of following or being inspired, it will bring disaster to the people. Luffy and the others can be said to have done no bad things, but what about the other pirates who were inspired by it? Who should be blamed for their mistakes? If you really want to have a pure adventure, can you set up an adventure group? If you want more complete justice, join the revolutionary army. Since the protagonist is a pirate, he has no right to criticize the navy's justice.

Killed her companions in front of baby5, and forced her to be tied to the ship using her setting that she would satisfy other people's demands. . . And also having fun doing it. . . You might as well kill her like this, it's just torture.

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Empress, Robin, Nami, you have to accept one. In the end, you are single, and you are instantly out of mood.

The protagonist of this book does not look like a time traveler at all. Instead, he looks like a person from the world of One Piece. Compared with those brainless and wise fellow pirates, there is no comparison at all beyond a section.

Did the author offend someone? I obviously look very good, why do so many people criticize me? 😰

This novel may not be the most beautiful, but it is the purest novel I have ever read (I am talking about words)

Looks good o(#￣▽￣)==O))￣0￣")o Golden Steel Flying Fist~!! The consequences of not liking it (๑＞ ㉨ ＜)☆

The laughter "Uhahahaha" is in the original novel, but there are actually a bunch of sticks telling people to quit?

Five years later, I saw this book on the bookshelf again. Recalling the memories of catching up on it at that time, I was really moved. This book can be regarded as a masterpiece in One Piece fan fiction. The uninhibitedness of a man, the boldness of a sea boy and the occasional little humor are just like the excitement I had when I was following the One Piece animation.

I have to say that this is the fanfic that has the most original One Piece style in terms of character portrayal (although the setting is a little overturned, but it's still okay, I think). Like the protagonist's laughter, the prominent characters in One Piece all have weird laughs, which is a characteristic of One Piece. Dover's Furofura, Blackbeard Thief, Haha, Caesar Shura, Whitebeard Library, Hahaha, very normal.

The only fic that matches the original painting style. It's not just a show-off and a slap in the face. It's a bold and somewhat funny style. It's very good. Everyone agrees~

The back stab was too harsh. This western fire dragon fantasy beast species is completely inferior to the blue dragon. Kaido can use wind, thunder, fire, flame clouds, and can breathe in water.

I feel that the author is a bit whimsical. Although the Weapon Fruit can be transformed into a weapon, it will consume physical strength. That is to say, the more powerful the weapon you transform into, the more physical strength will be consumed. If you become Pluto, just imagine it. If you say that Akainu can release lava to destroy the world, the Gravity Fruit can destroy the world. Depressing, freezing The fruit can freeze the sea. Is it possible? The vibration fruit directly makes the continent become a continent. It's a beautiful thought. Do you think that the Momo fruit can become tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands times? You don't need to write it down, just think about it. There is a limit. If you say Kaido's weapon fruit turns into Pluto, I believe it.

It was okay at the beginning, the characters are fleshed out, and some of them have their own backstories.        ，，，，，， Although there are reasons for Oda's backstabbing, for example, Oden is still alive and looks reliable, and Kaido's ability is like his nickname of a reformer with the ability of hundreds of beasts. After all, this was written early, these are actually Oda's fault. But Kutan Orochi is a general who wants to revitalize the country of Wano and want to be prosperous and powerful. Im's wish is world peace, which is still a bit outrageous.

After reading the first few chapters, I didn't want to read it. I didn't even have the feeling of being a king, and I still wanted to dominate. No matter how powerful the fruit is, if you don't have a domineering look, you will always be a younger brother who can't be domineering. Kaido can kill you with one hammer.

Fire dragons can't do it. The official setting of One Piece is that animal-type fruits (including "phantom beast species") cannot elementalize themselves or control natural elements or natural forces. Only natural-type devil fruits can elementalize and control natural elements.

You awakened your human-animal form just after eating the fruit. You are more awesome than Kaido. Kaido has been developing it for ten or twenty years.

Are there any similar novels that are not so dark, do not play tricks, but are purely adventurous and have a strong pirate flavor?

The author's language proficiency needs to be improved, words are often repeated, and rhetoric is excessively exaggerated. I still use some kind of audio book, and I listened to 4 and a half chapters word for word. The description of the main character's fire dragon form at the beginning of the fifth chapter is really embarrassing and can be called torture. As for other... I don't want to talk about other issues.

He couldn't stand it and had no brains. He went to set fire to the Celestial Dragon territory without the strength of the general. He was also arrogant and thought that the government would never know it was him without seeing his face. Come on, Pig's Knuckle's ability is so discernible (the immortality of fire), even if no one knows about his move at the Golden Emperor (haha, unless the Five Old Stars and the Navy's intelligence network are doing nothing), his subsequent moves will definitely be discovered.

For me, who listens to novels, the modal particles written by the author are really annoying.

In terms of content, it's actually pretty good. I couldn't stand it when I saw the war on the top and kept helping the pirates. Ace and Luffy are both alive. Apart from these, the other writing is OK, but it's a bit watered down.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...