Immortal Road to the Sky

If the author likes to write like this, it would be more suitable to change the book to success, virtue and enlightenment.

Well! I can write it even if it's not passionate or stimulating. I can't make any money at all. Only a few thousand people can read a book. I wonder if I can transfer 10,000 yuan. It's better to just do it honestly.

The book was okay at first, although it was a little bit like the Virgin. Then when I saw the Son of Heaven and Earth, it almost poisoned me to death 🥵🥵🥵

The author is younger than me. Holy Mother, I guess elementary school students can still read it. The setting for killing the robbers is unreasonable. The robbers are too easy to kill and can be killed with third-rate kung fu? ?

Since this book was written, the one most complained about by readers is Xiao Ling, the dragon Aotian 😆 The reason why such an invincible Xiaoqiang is arranged to be the villain is because the protagonist has two difficult obstacles on his way to attain immortality: the golden elixir and the soul. 😠 Therefore, the significance of the existence of this dragon Aotian is to use his invincible luck to help the protagonist overcome the difficulties of the golden elixir and the soul, so that he can soar into the sky, prove immortality, and become a true immortal. 😁 When Long Aotian helps the protagonist break through the door of immortality and become a true immortal, it is the day when Long Aotian's historical mission is completed and completely wiped out. 🤭 Therefore, the so-called Long Aotian is just a poor man who is a pioneer for the king and opens the way for Allah! 😃 Moreover, the follow-up plot has been decided, and there are many manuscripts saved. Even if I want to modify it, there is nothing I can do. The amount of work is too huge, and I really can't do it. If you really don't like Long Aotian's scenes, you can skip it directly 🤤

It's not bad at the front, but why is it always looking for trouble in the back? There are too many grudges and fights, so there can't be a few more good people, and there can't be more cooperation and win-win situations. Maybe I made it clear. Are all those who cultivate immortality evil-doing people with evil thoughts? Maybe there will be, but ultimately it will be a minority. I hope the author can write more about positive characters and explore the world of cultivating immortals, and less about the sinister human nature.

The first poisonous point can be completely overcome.

After reading the first chapter, I feel that the writing and knowledge accumulation are very good. Why are there so many people criticizing it in the book review section?

After reading hundreds of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. Just say that you just traveled through time. You have lived in the new world for several years. Why do you still feel so out of place? I don't understand your loser temperament.

The first chapter was pretty good, but the second chapter was so written that I didn't want to read it. The style is completely different.

Since you have described the protagonist's path of cultivation as so bumpy, you might as well consider the idea of ​​being reborn as a soldier, dissatisfied with cultivation in one life, cultivating for three lives and three lives, and achieving perfect merits and virtues, so that the protagonist does not level up too quickly and loses interest. He will delete his account and reconnect after dozens of levels. Of course, he must lose all his memories, just bring his own imprint, and the three lives will be perfectly integrated with memories.

Were the two parts written by the same person? This style has changed so quickly. It looks good from the front, but why is Long Aotian so different from the back?

Luo Yin: Author, please come out and let's talk. Before the performance, we agreed on the leading actor, agreed on a tyrannical and cool character, and agreed on a peerless beauty as his wife. What about now? I almost died of old age when I got a pill, and I was almost trampled to death when an enemy came out. There is a wife who wrote five or six hundred chapters and met three or five times, and now she lost it. As a result, she got the cheat and she was beaten to pieces before she even started showing off! I'm not going to act anymore! ! You are cheating me! Chapter 609: The Right One Luo Yin was slapped to death, and the people in Linghai got the book of life and death. From then on, they made great progress and rose to the immortal road! Complete book~

As soon as the fifth volume comes out, Long Aotian wants to get his lunch box. . . . . In memory of the tragic student Long Aotian, as a villain, your performance was very successful and successfully aroused everyone's hatred~

Regardless of whether the author believes it or not, I must tell you the truth. The best thing written in this book is the first paragraph "Looking for the Immortal Road" and the middle paragraph "It is difficult to prepare the elixir but you will lose your life". You can feel that these two paragraphs are full of emotion, while the others are relatively indifferent, especially Long Aotian's illogical logic.

Alas, I don't know how to put it. I felt really good after reading the first volume. From the second volume to the Xiao family, I started to lose sight of the messy things. Generally speaking, I still like the author's writing style, but some of the plots are really too routine. I'll see you again when I have the chance. Good luck, author.

Long Aotian... His name is too bad! I can't even stand it when I look at the name**

You have no brains, holy bitch, so you can make promises. If you didn't have the aura of the protagonist, you'd have died hundreds of times.

Are you still giving up resources? Don't you know that resources are precious? , And people have taken advantage of it many times. It's hopeless.

Finally found a good novel🤭🤭

Recommend you 3 votes😡

Isn't Long Aotian's rhetoric just like the vulgar memes on the Internet? 😥 Even if it is an 18-year-old novel, if you put this thing in a novel about cultivating immortals, it will be extremely poisonous. If it appears in the introduction, it will poison people. No matter how good you write it, it will be useless... It is rare that the previous road to immortality is interesting 😒

Author When can I find Luo Fu?

Will Long Aotian be defeated? ? ?

Why didn't the author write more? Luo Fu was portrayed very well in this book.

Mortal Stream"Half Demon Immortal Fate" uses treasure land to promote books The protagonist's IQ is now, not a stud. If it bothers you, please delete

The main character in this book is so poorly written.

Actually, I think this method is not good and insidious enough. If it were me, I would do it. First, they used mediation as an excuse to invite that idiotic venerable person out, and then several venerables took action, secretly captured it, controlled it first, and then sent a venerable person to pretend to be him to control the grassland, secretly contact the demon clan, and ask for the balance. It doesn't matter whether the Monster Clan gives it or not. It depends on the Monster Clan's next move. There will definitely be demand for the other party to bribe the grassland people. However, no matter what, if the Monster Clan secretly captures the Second Silly Master, the Monster Clan can take the opportunity to fight back if they want to use the grassland to make a fuss in the next step.

The poisonous point that none of you have discovered, the coincidence of various plot arrangements, the probability feels like winning 5 million ten times in a row, forget it once or twice, the plot is designed like this from beginning to end, just one routine is really going to be poisoned to death. Of course, other than this, everything else is okay. Personally, I feel it is better than most novels written in Qidian.

Ah, I have been too busy recently to read. I didn't expect that the book review section was occupied by someone else. . . . . Alas, my wife went back to her hometown. On Chinese Valentine's Day, she went to station B to watch seven or eight dog food programs at home alone. . . . .