The White General

After reading more than 110 chapters, I feel that the writing is quite good, but there are still too many loopholes in the protagonist's first battle. First, the Northern Qi emperor decentralized power so much that it is unimaginable. This is the "Han" dynasty (of course this is barely logical, after all, there are similar ones in history); second, the troops mobilized are so strange. To attack Qi Guo in the south and mobilize the border troops in the north? And the time is wrong. How can we go from the north to the vicinity of the Yangtze River so quickly? Could it be that the march could be hastened by another 600 miles? Thirdly, the Eighth Prince of the Northern Qi Dynasty was in danger of marching. Such a superior force was so desperate to use troops (of course there were some who used troops to take risks); fourthly, the crossing of the river was so smooth, with 40,000 to 50,000 people carrying horses, how could they cross the river so fast? The people of Qi State didn't realize it at all. They were worse than pigs. No matter how lightly we took it, this situation would never happen. Fifth, when the Northern Qi Dynasty had just crossed the river without deploying its troops, more than 10,000 Qi people were killed in the battle and more than 10,000 were injured... Unable to complain. Sixth, the two countries of Qi and Qi, which had fought with the Yangtze River as their boundary for decades, had no navy? There are no naval figures in a war of this scale...; Seventh, I feel that the weapons used in the article are not grenades, but mortars. Where grenades can be thrown that far, they can usually be thrown thirty or forty meters, and the range of bows and arrows should generally be one hundred and fifty meters. In short, the bombardiers cannot go up at all (and there are bugs that other military formations deal with here); Eighth, the gunpowder is made too fast. Can ten children prepare the gunpowder for three thousand mines so quickly? There are many other loopholes that I won't go into details one by one. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing war plots. It is better to describe it sideways or briefly mention it. But this was a plot that happened a long time ago, and it's useless to talk about it again. The reason why there are so many Bibi's stories is because I've run out of times to talk about them in this chapter.

I saw the big climax again, so I couldn't help but shamelessly write a book review 😁😁😁 First of all, I still have to complain about the military arrangement. All the 100,000 forbidden troops have left the city 😥😥 This is true...; The other is that there are not many guards around the emperor. Logically speaking, the emperor usually needs to take a thousand with him when he travels. Then he will be chased to the city gate. After leaving three to five hundred, our Prince Su will definitely not be able to enter the city. Well, these arrangements must have been made by Empress Xiao, it cannot be the famous general Wang Xiang, nor the author Jun 😏😏😏 Then there is Chen Jingzhi. For literati like Chen Jingzhi in history, I personally understand intellectually but disagree emotionally. To be honest, it would be better if this kind of person died as soon as possible. It's unpleasant to look at him. But this guy was really smart, and he committed suicide with a sense of justice. Otherwise, even if Prince Su let him go this time, the young emperor would still kill him in a few years. It would still be too late by then, and of course Prince Su couldn't wait a few more years. Then there is the choice of the protagonist. As we always say: unexpected, reasonable. Let's talk about what makes sense first. This is an official spoiler from the author himself. He briefly said that the main character is only the prince, and the author has no choice. In addition, Zhao Xian's psychological activities that appeared many times in the previous article are whether he wants to be Cao Cao, or simply Zhao Xian is biased to be Cao Cao, so it is not surprising to have this choice; another point is that if he chooses to be emperor, he will have to kill his nephew, and Zhao Xian probably won't be able to do it. Besides the unexpected, this should be the thinking of many book friends: I think the protagonist should just be the emperor. First of all, since a coup has been launched, then go straight to the sky without stopping to avoid long nights and dreams, because in Qi State, the protagonist has the theoretical right to inherit the country. If the emperor dies, and his nephew is dealt with, there will basically be no problem. Kill those who are dissatisfied. History has proven that killing is very effective. Secondly, no matter how powerful the regent is, there are two inevitable paths in the end. The first is to seize the throne through another coup, and the second is to end badly. This has been practiced by all the regents in history, not to mention someone like Zhao Xian who has launched a coup and even has a good death. How will future generations deal with it? Then, Cao Cao is not so easy to do, especially in the current environment. Cao Cao "holds the emperor's hand to command the princes." What are princes? It is a country of its own and does not belong to the power of the emperor. Zhao Xian's next step was to "hold the emperor in order to order the ministers." The ministers belonged to the emperor's power. Although Zhao Xian held several key positions in his hands, the people below were dissatisfied. The ministers were loyal to the emperor rather than the regent. This was a difference in stance and even interests. The ministers are not so easy to control, and most of them are acting in disguise. After all, Zhao Xian is not the emperor, and his reputation is not justified. Once the little emperor seizes the opportunity, he will be overturned. It is like the belt edict in the Three Kingdoms. It is impossible to guard against it. If it succeeds, Cao Gong will overturn. However, as a non-Qi nationalist who traveled to the past in modern times, maybe Zhao Xian can give us a surprise, just like he said to Xie Kang: Maybe I did it? Therefore, I look forward to more exciting plots from the author in the future.

Blast furnaces are used for making iron, the raw material is iron ore, and the product is pig iron. Steelmaking uses open-hearth furnaces and converters.

The beginning of this book is nonsense. The royal palace has no rice to cook with. Isn't this nonsense? Even a broken ship has three-inch nails, and a skinny camel is bigger than a horse. Writing a book should be more practical. Leave

I hope I can collect 10,000 words in five updates a day

I can't finish ten chapters. The male protagonist's character is so bad and completely inconsistent with his identity before time travel. Moreover, the female protagonist is really disgusting. The white lotus and the virgin bitch are just right.

Someone please help me, I'm already frothing at the mouth and falling to the ground after reading 20 chapters.

The writing is like shit, drunk, novice writing, primary school logic

This Xiao Ling'er is too poisonous. The protagonist is like a beauty she has never seen before. She becomes a licker when she sees her. Even if she gives money to the protagonist, she is not wholehearted. The protagonist is already good enough for her. The author insists on making the protagonist respond to her requests. This is extremely poisonous. I have died from the poison.

How do you say this at the beginning, and what is the background? In this context, do you dare to say that etiquette is not important? So here comes the question, no matter how stupid or stupid a member of the royal family is, as long as they are not explicitly abolished, a dignified prince and son will be bullied by a government servant at the beginning? I forget what rank this chief officer is, and he came up with an excuse to go out for three months. His political opponents joined the court, and none of them could escape. Does the royal family have no face? You can say something like that, but it represents the face of the royal family outside. Don't say who instigated it. You can secretly drug him or sap him. If you do it openly, are you kidding me, author? This has nothing to do with the modern thinking of the protagonist, but only to do with the surrounding environment. After experiencing the unification and division of the First Emperor, some legal concepts established by the First Emperor still exist, as well as the First Emperor's title class. In a dynasty that grew up in such an environment, how could members of the royal family be treated like this openly? This is immediately ruined from the beginning.