From the Abyss

Let me talk about my feelings first. The writing of this book is very good, the plot has twists and turns, and there are many foreshadowings. The background is probably a modern world where magic, blood and technology coexist. It is written with great care and is a rare source of food. But the shortcomings are also obvious. 1. Update is slow. It may also be that the author is saving the manuscript. But updating once a day is too slow, and it is difficult to keep up. 2. The pace is slow. A too slow pace cannot make the protagonist become stronger quickly. The plot is really, really, really good, but what about the fun? Internet articles are fast-paced literary works, and they need to be fast and exciting to attract readers, so I hope the author can speed up the pace a little (personal opinion, please forgive me if I disagree) 3. There are too many plot lines. Please read and think patiently. This is certainly a good book, but there are too many characters. Everyone can't remember the names of the characters and feels confused. Who is this person? What does he do? It is recommended to reduce the number of factory characters. I hope the author Jun Yue will write better and better 👍

Well, it's a question of writing Indeed, the most reasonable arrangement is for Duy to immediately add energy storage every time he gets it, but such an arrangement is not conducive to control and reading. You can think about it, Du Yi will gain stored energy every day when he practices the breathing method. So should I write out this daily enhancement? If you write about it, some people will definitely think it's water (every time I write about strengthening now, some people will think it's water, but if I don't write about strengthening, how can I tell you about the improvement in the protagonist's strength) If you don't write it out, then I will record it. After a while, I will describe the data and strength that the protagonist should have. Some people will definitely question why the protagonist's strength has reached this point without strengthening it before? {In fact, I strengthened it every day, but I didn't write it down} In addition, with the improvement, the imprint enhancement is doubled, and the energy storage consumption is 2, 4, 8, 16... So it must be written, and writing involves the issue of water or not. Take exam When everyone reads books, they are following many books at the same time. Some of the contents are easy to get confused, let alone the data. This accumulation of strengthening over a period of time will help me control the protagonist, and it will also help everyone have a clear understanding of the improvement of the protagonist's strength. After all, the confusion of the protagonist's strength is the beginning of the collapse of a book. Thank you for your questions and suggestions, and thank you to everyone who cares about this book 🌹🌹🌹

It still feels good, but it's a pity

It feels pretty good! ! ! The service industry is really tired! The author should arrange his time reasonably!

It's too slow to update. The plot should be easy to write now.

Let me reward you one last time. After all, the writing is still very good.