Hunter's Heart of Noah

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Has the author read the personality analyzes of people with various telekinesis abilities on the Internet? Writing like that will probably make the character's style more obvious and specific. Because I don't have money to read the original version, I can only give you this advice (whisper)

Actually, this is a torture novel. Although it was not intentional by the author. A mysterious organization that beats up enemies. Forget about beating up enemies, there is a mysterious organization, and it happens to be infinitely powerful. Even if he has great personal strength, he still has huge power. One of the subordinates inside could beat Biggie or something. The protagonist has no future at all. Once I realize that I can't control you. Then I will destroy you. And can the protagonist escape from this clutches? Are you leaving now because I intentionally let you go? You can't escape the Buddha's palm. The main reason is that it makes you feel tired. The same goes for your telekinesis ability. The limitations are too strong. Your telekinesis ability is weak anyway. There is also a mysterious organization watching you all the time. Do you think this looks a bit abusive? To be honest, novels are all about having a good time, whether it is a small pleasure or a great pleasure, especially fan fiction, and fan fiction is all about having a great pleasure. Because she has one of the most exciting points, and that is the prophet (plot). I know good people and bad people, and I know where there are treasures that can make me strong, but this book doesn't. For example, a treasure like Bee Gee can make you stronger, but a subordinate of a mysterious organization can PK you with Bee Gee. There is also the ability to predict the future. What is the use of knowing the future? The huge force of my mysterious organization is watching you all the time. I can know what you want to do no matter where you go, I can judge it. I feel tired, watching. It's rare to find an excellent fanfic

I feel like I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 170. I skipped Chapter 200 and haven't returned to the main story. I don't have anyone or anything related to anime anymore. I made up the plot all by myself. You either write fan fiction or write about a different dimension. It's inevitable to be addicted to the street. It feels like a rhapsody of your own world. It's hard for readers to get your G-spot. It's a bit of a running story and a bit different, and it feels like an anticlimax! I started to think it was a good book

The birth of Pandora previously involved the "creation" ability of Noah's heart, so here is a bold idea... Noah can use the particularity of "creation" to develop a new telekinesis ability, which can be called "One Man's Legion". The essence of the ability is to extract the character's personality/spiritual consciousness and use it as the core to transform it into a telekinesis beast. Memory, skills and telekinesis abilities are all preserved, and the only thing added is the oath of absolute loyalty to Noah; Noah can choose to share his complete memory with him, or choose to transfer part of his memory to him, and Noah himself can read all the other party's memories and gain the right to use the opponent's telekinesis ability; among them, Mir and Pandora are the leaders of all legion telekinesis beasts, just behind Noah. This telekinesis ability is inspired by Marvel's Omega-level mutants - the large group and the release type "Eleven Under the Roof" Xia Qimono. The main purpose of the design is to "resurrect" the killed characters and companions for their own use, and create an "undead army" and "portable army" exclusive to Noah. In the original work, many interesting characters were killed, which is regrettable, such as Pike Notan with the trait "Memory Exploration", Wo Jin with the enhanced "Super Destruction Fist" type, Bokuer with the "Seven Color Bow and Arrow" release type, Nitro with the enhanced "Hundred Styles Guanyin" type, and As well as the face of the "God Doll", the Knight, Kubip, Nyon, the Three King Guards, or Kate who is the embodiment of the "Crazy Clown", all of these dead characters can be extracted by Noah, resurrected in the form of mind beasts, and transformed into their own combat power.

When I first started reading, all the team members I met and bet on with the protagonist were all female. You wrote this novel so that if you don't have a female character, you will die, right? As a butler who beats enemies and guests, you can let people live in the butler training camp casually. It's really too long to live.

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The protagonist has no freedom from the beginning to the end. He works hard to become stronger in order not to be swallowed up. In the end, the traitor's words are too different from the villain's magnanimity. The protagonist's efforts for hundreds of chapters are as funny as the clown's.

Do you agree with me? The author of "Hunter" originally wanted to express passion, but as soon as he wrote the fanfic, he went astray.

As a novel, can the pace be faster? The fighting plot is very boring and depressing. If I have to focus on the dialogue of wits, the actual fighting can be slowly ignored. Focus on ability battles. The abilities do not need to be too complicated at all. Simple is best. I have seen some before, but I don't know what it is. I gave up the reason, and now I came back to read it without knowing where I was looking. I just clicked on a few chapters and read it. I have to say that it kept me skipping. Please focus on the plot and save the fighting if you can. Even the fighting in the animation is always read when I fall asleep. The fighting in the novel is even more complicated. I don't want to read it carefully and I don't want to burn it.

The character of the protagonist I read about ten chapters There is a master who knows how to practice qi, and he even wrote a special article about being able to control every muscle in the body and then he can't fight. Can you believe it? I practiced alone for a month or two and practiced hard every day This kind of person can't fight 😅

Regarding the protagonist's abilities, I saw some people criticizing the protagonist's abilities as rubbish and rubbish. First of all, these people, you must understand the original intention of developing this ability. The protagonist is from a family of assassins, and his knowledge of the world of full-time hunters only comes from the memories of anime and comics in his mind. He also clearly knows the gap between himself and the killers who beat the enemy Hakka. He thinks that he does not have the talent to completely crush the people who beat the enemy Hakka in terms of strength. The biggest feature of this ability is that it ignores the opponent's telekinesis ability. This means that if the protagonist's strength can reach a qualified level, he will be able to gain a strong advantage when using this ability to fight against those who beat up the enemy Hakka. It may even offset the strength gap between him and the opponent. The rules and effects of this ability are entirely developed to deal with the enemy Hakka, not to deal with other telekinesis users. This is what I thought when I first thought about ability (It is also shown in the rules that no detailed information is required. Just filling in one item for each item is enough to activate. 72 Weaknesses are placed on a person. Think about how much chance this will have to win) In addition, the housekeepers he learned would basically stay at the enemy's house and beat up enemies, and rarely go out, so don't always talk about dealing with others. That's right, I personally don't think there's anything wrong with this ability, not to mention that as the protagonist's strength increases, his abilities will gradually be improved and strengthened. Finally, I still say the same thing. I humbly accept the garbage you criticize about my plot and characters, and I won't say anything about it. After all, I am a novice writing for the first time. It's rubbish. It's okay if there are any mistakes. Of course, it's better if you come up with some solid information when you criticize me, such as some practical suggestions. I don't care if you read the pirated version. As long as it is a real suggestion, I will accept it and put it at the top to remind myself. As the saying goes, the road must be walked step by step, and the meal must be eaten one bite at a time. I'm sorry for finding these weird places to start with. I don't want to serve you. I suggest you write your own book or find another one to read.

When I saw it hidden in the book list, I thought there really was a book on food It turned out to be the notes of a junior high school student. Reading it carefully will lower your intelligence and attack 1. I promised to obey the master's instructions and started to lie to the master in the first few chapters 2. The butler is not a killer. Before Killua learned to read, he just killed ordinary people. Wouldn't Ilmi directly challenge those with telekinesis ability? Do you want the housekeeper to help you kill him? 3. The most ridiculous thing is that trainee housekeepers can take two weeks off and one week off. The curly-haired girl is also a trainee housekeeper. How can she be so pitiful and have to stand there all day?

The subject matter is really uninteresting. You run to be someone else's subordinate (trainee butler) and leave your life in the hands of others. If you do something wrong unintentionally or the owner is in a bad mood, you may die. This is a natural slave. . As a time traveler, you know the direction of the plot, and you still have some strength. If you take the hunter exam or do other things, there are many ways to become stronger. You have to be a slave and become a slave.

I think the protagonist's abilities can be further developed into something similar to the "Death Suit", which consists of the assassin's notes, the hand that creates accidents, the eyes of the secret peeper, and other complementary abilities to form a complete set of ability systems. Since the Assassin's Note needs the target's information, an ability that can obtain the target's information is developed to cooperate. It looks a lot better

Hunter is a good subject. Well, there is nothing wrong with it. But what is interesting about this book is that it is a hunter fanfic. The main character only appears in the 300th chapter. It is so witty and witty. From now on, when I write a fanfic about The Deer and the Cauldron, I will start writing it from the beginning of Pangu. After writing about 5,000 chapters, Wei Xiaobao will be born.

If you haven't seen it, go away. This stuff is totally meaningless. It's just a bunch of original characters playing house.

I probably know why it's a little off-putting. In terms of ability, it doesn't matter. The problem is that the protagonist is too strange, she is a woman, and she has a slightly different name, but basically (in all aspects). Really sad

Chapter 1 It seems that the original work does not appear as a number one character like myself. This is a strange statement. After all, it is impossible for anime to mark all the supporting characters. Isn't it strange that I have no impression?

I read the chapter review while eating just now To be honest, I very much hope to receive comments from readers. I can accept you saying that the plot I wrote is boring and boring, and I can also accept that the protagonist I wrote has no character, is hypocritical, and is confused and confident. These are all the comments you give after reading them, and I am very willing to accept them. However, I will not make you feel comfortable with some comments that are full of malice and seem to be just looking for trouble. Don't think that I won't criticize people. Some people may simply dislike me and think I am stupid and what I write is rubbish. Then they grab a "setting" and take off, as if they are holding on to it for legitimate reasons. That's right, what I'm saying is that the protagonist can see the place "Cang" before he learns to read. In my impression, in the ant chapter, the old spider who was killed by Xiaodi caught Bakuku'er's telekinesis arrow when he had not learned to read (is it called Bakuku'er, right? Or is it called Bakuo'er? 😏) They could all sense the life energy in Baku's body at that time. I set up a protagonist with a special physique who can see the qi in people before he learns to chant. Is it really so difficult to accept? Is the "setting party" so strict? Sorry, okay, I don't have anything to say. As for the malicious comment from a second- and third-eyed reader, "The protagonist is born with dog eyes," and the other chapter reviewer who encouraged me to write a novel. Tsk tsk, I won't delete it, I'll keep it here to wake myself up. (When I update in the evening, I will make a record in the work related section. This is the first time I have received a negative comment ~ Thanks to Ersanmu Book Friends)

Name of telekinesis ability: "Toy Collector" Ability type: Trait system Ability description: The user materializes a deck of 54 playing cards, each card representing a slot for "materialized props" that can be plundered. Through specific conditions and restrictions, users can plunder the props of other people with embodied telekinesis abilities and seal them in playing cards for their own use. When a prop is successfully sealed into a playing card, the pattern on the card will change accordingly, clearly displaying the key features of the prop or the key information of the original owner, making it easier for users to identify and manage. Ability activation conditions and restrictions: 1. Target limitation: It can only be activated on props of people with embodied abilities, and is invalid on props of people with other abilities. 2. Information acquisition: All information about the target must be ascertained in detail in advance, and the process of displaying its abilities must be witnessed with one's own eyes. 3. No resistance state: The plunder can only be carried out when the target loses its will to resist, such as after the target is seriously injured. 4. Time limit: The looting timer starts and must be completed within 1 hour, otherwise you will have to wait 24 hours before trying again. If the plunder fails, whether due to factors such as timeout or successful target resistance, the user will suffer backlash and will be temporarily unable to use playing cards for a period of time, or directly lose a card slot. Rules for using props: 1. Quantity limit: Only one prop can be unsealed and used from playing cards at a time. 2. Consumption of telekinesis: When using props, in addition to maintaining your own telekinesis, you also need to consume a certain amount of extra telekinesis. The specific consumption depends on the ability strength of the prop. Ability Advantages: 1. Unique looting mechanism: Focus on looting materialized props rather than abilities themselves, closely following the theme of "toy collectors", and looting objects can be both items created by ability users and unowned objects with thoughts, which greatly expands the scope of application of the ability. 2. The symbolism and strategy of playing cards: in line with the character of a "gambler", the limit of 54 cards adds a sense of ritual. Users need to be familiar with the sequence of the cards, and the strategies are displayed during the playing of cards, just like the strategizing of a gambler when he cheats. 3. Powerful restriction balance: Strict restrictions balance the strength of abilities so that they are not too overwhelming. At the same time, they increase the challenge and drama of using abilities, making combat and ability use more exciting. 4. Advantages of prop survival: plundered props will not disappear due to the death of the original owner, ensuring the long-term availability and collection value of the props, which is fully in line with the characteristics of "collectors" who value collections and hold them for a long time. Application scenarios: 1. Combat plunder: During battle, target materialized opponents and plunder their key props, such as Kubi's copy ability props, Xiao's "Convenient Big Wrap", etc., To weaken the enemy while strengthening your own combat effectiveness. 2. Diverse tactics: Use different props to deal with complex battle scenes, such as using a "convenient large wrap" to store supplies, and using Kubi's ability to copy props to create avatars to confuse enemies or lay traps. 3. Psychological game: Steal the target's cherished props, attack the opponent psychologically, and even use it as a bargaining chip to force the target to compromise and surrender, subduing the opponent without a fight. 4. Collection and trading: Treat looted props as precious collections, exchange and trade with other telepathic people, and expand contacts and resources.

Mainly for new authors, there will always be this or that problem when writing for the first time. If you have any questions or suggestions, such as which part is poisonous, or which part is unreasonable, or if there is any discrepancy with the original work, you can ask it. I will look at it carefully, and then answer and modify it accordingly~ Please forgive me and support me~ (PS, that author account is not experienced enough to post, stiff!)

The protagonist knows the information and has developed this ability, which is very suitable for...

Readers have three consecutive questions: reward, collect, and nourish.

After the protagonist escapes, he will be fully pursued by the Hakka family 😅. In order to be a deterrent, the protagonist must kill the pursuers, which in turn will inevitably lead to a deadly feud with the Hakka family. Killua must also stand in an irreducible opposition to the protagonist. And have these plot writers thought about how to deal with it... After all, failure to handle this aspect may cause the plot to collapse.

The type of mental ability is determined by the nature of the idea. The essence of the idea of ​​the trait type is a strong obsession with something. Since the protagonist is a trait type, I hope that the protagonist's obsession with the weaknesses of others can be reflected in the story.

Must we leave? How about trying not to break away completely and become an outsider who beats the enemy? You are usually free, but do you want to help the enemy family collect intelligence, or do some tasks, such as protecting Killua?

Embodiment system + trait system A dagger in the shape of a tiger's tooth appears. Restriction: The dagger itself can only attack targets on the hunting list. If it attacks other targets, it will suffer the same damage. But if you kill the target on the hunting list, a ghost will be formed. The dagger can store nine ghosts, and the ghosts can use the telekinesis abilities of the people they kill (the number of places can be changed). The power of the telekinesis ability depends on the percentage of information obtained from the hunting list. If the information obtained is only 10%, then the power that can be exerted is only 10%. If the information obtained reaches 100%, then the ghost's telekinesis ability will also be increased and the power will be 100%. Additional ability: Help the tiger You can choose one ghost every day as the ghost behind you. The ghost behind you can use telekinesis on enemies not on the hunting list, but the restriction is that once you select the ghost behind you every day, it cannot be changed.