The Mysterious World of Steampunk

It feels like looking at flowers in the mist. I feel that I am not writing a story about pig's feet, but about these gods who don't know anything. It was a waste of time at the beginning, and the disappearance of the accessory brain was also a failure. Part of the reason why the Chip Wizard wrote a book about becoming a god is because the data can intuitively express the growth and power of the pig's feet, which makes it more immersive! ! Abandoned! ! ! Well! !

From a reader's point of view, the subject matter of this book is novel. It is a Crusu theme. This is the story of a traveler from Blue Star who comes to another world with a second brain (equivalent to a chip, maybe?). The world is comprehensive, but the problem is that the power system is chaotic and there is no main line. It looks like a piece here and there, which is not very coherent. It feels like I traveled to a dream world halfway through, and when I was looking for something, I found it very abruptly, and then came back, and lost my memory. I was quite dissuaded from seeing it. I have read about 200 chapters, but I haven't read the rest. Those who are interested can still read it, because I haven't finished it, so I won't ask for leave 😁, please read it by yourself.

The outline and world view are well designed, but the plot is too stiff, giving people the feeling of memorizing English instead of reading a novel, making it difficult to continue watching.

Personally, it feels very good. Personally, I feel it is much better than the one currently ranked No. 1 In monthly votes. You should have started writing novels of this type among the first few. The interspersed scientific and technological civilization feels a bit awkward, but overall it is still very good, except that the description of the battle scenes is a bit unsatisfactory! It's a very good novel, but I don't understand why it's not popular?

The protagonist lost his memory in the dream world. After reading many chapters, he couldn't find it back. He was very depressed and wanted to know what kind of memory it was.

Also, the protagonist's power system is a bit unclear.

The biggest flaw in this novel, after I read at least 250 of it, is just four words: there is no main plot! The protagonist always goes with the flow. After getting involved in various things, he just plays there. After playing out, he doesn't know what to do. Then I walked around and inexplicably entered another event circle. In short, there was no upgrading flow like a normal novel. It didn't feel like it was mainly about improving strength. Instead, it felt like an adventure diary. It's not a question of slow popularity or not, it's a question of whether anyone likes to read this kind of novel with a complicated network of relationships. If someone likes to read it, then they must continue to read it. Some people just don't quite understand the various relationships in it and feel it is very complicated, so they don't want to use their brains to remember it. Because when the author wrote this book, he also wrote about small events one by one (similar to I am God!), Which means that after this event is over, you may not need to remember several people, but if you did remember them before, it is difficult for people to accept. It's okay to look at it when you're bored, but if you want to treat it as a normal grass jelly, then save it!

First of all, the signing of the new book has been completed. Congratulations to myself! Congratulations! The second issue is the update of the new book. Before it was put on the shelves, one chapter was updated every day, at 7pm, and the word count should be more than 4,000. After being put on the shelves, there should be two updates for a period of time, each chapter is more than 4,000, at 12:30 noon and 7:00 pm, or 7:00 pm and 11:00 pm, which one is more suitable? As for the ninth-rate idlers who don't know how to be eunuchs, they just focus on new books after get off work and can only find time to code a little while at work, so updates will be very unstable and there is no fixed time. I have also tried to imitate other people's dual-player, but there are always situations where the plot characters of the two books are confused. Xu Changqing will appear as a guest star in the new book for no reason, so as Cai Shaofen said, I can't do it! ! ! Finally, I hope we can spend another nine years together!

The protagonist does not improve his own strength and participates in useless things every day. It is unacceptable and he can accept his slowness. However, the protagonist is too independent. Strength is the king. Shouldn't biochemical people pursue power more? Then there is that old man who paid a negligible amount of words and asked the protagonist to go to such a dangerous world to get feathers. He is a typical uneasy and kind-hearted person and gives him feathers? It's a dream, what you give is not proportional to what you get, and there is an obvious concealment. The protagonist's life is not taken seriously at all. The protagonist is shocked when he comes out. If he has the strength, he should be killed by that old man. There is nothing wrong with it.

The male protagonist was quite intelligent at first. . I don't know why it happened later, maybe the author got married or something happened. It started from the male protagonist killing decisively alone to leading the cheerleading team to conquer the world. The female protagonist was quite independent at first, but later she became a cheerleader who followed the male protagonist to pick up things. . . This is leading the cheerleading team to conquer the world. Why do you ask? It's been a long time since I've been single to conquer the world, and I'm starting to feel uncomfortable and itchy.

First of all, Jiucheng-kun's ability to write stories is acceptable, but for some reason due to work, he added the wrong skill points over the years, and he went from a seedling who could become a great god to the water god he is today. Ninetowns' standard water methods are the extension method and the copy method. Pig's Foot meets passerby A while walking on the road. Generally, novels will briefly mention it and then continue with the main line. Nine Cities is different. It describes A's psychological history, blood origin, and family background, and then develops B, C, and D from A's body, and then unfolds it in the same way on Bcd's body. After describing it, you will continue to open dungeons and describe it to passers-by... Don't do this kind of writing anymore, okay? No one is interested in knowing about a side character who only appears once, so why don't you just write about the protagonist honestly? It can be said that the later period is getting more and more complicated. Can you tell the story well? Don't talk about the setting anymore. Moreover, there is no main line at all. The protagonist has no purpose at all. It is a big step back from the previous book.

Why are there no fan novels by Jiu Liu Xian Ren? The world view in them is so grand and rigorous that any character can be written separately.

This book is as confusing as Jiu Liu Xian Ren. Jiuliuxianren is not bad, it is a masterpiece in the early stage. The back is full of garbage. It's better to overthrow and rewrite Jiuliu Xianren, which will definitely rank first in monthly votes.

As long as the main character has amnesia or loses his memory, the novel is basically cool. You don't need to read other novels. After all, the readers are reading it well. However, the protagonist suddenly loses his memory and has no sense of immersion. It is also frustrating to read. Basically, few people will insist on reading it. It's okay if you have short-term amnesia. Once you lose your memory, it will be hundreds of chapters. Who can endure it?

First of all, Jiucheng-kun's ability to write stories is acceptable, but for some reason due to work, he added the wrong skill points over the years, and he went from a seedling who could become a great god to the water god he is today. The standard water method in Ninetowns is the extension method and the copy method. Pig's Foot meets passerby A while walking on the road. Generally, novels will briefly mention it and then continue with the main line. Nine Cities is different. It describes A's psychological history, blood origin, and family background, and then develops B, C, and D from A's body, and then unfolds it in the same way on Bcd's body. After describing it once, there is a cycle of constantly opening copies and describing it to passers-by... This brings too much bad reading experience.

It's well written and full of love. Strangers who have been deserters together for less than ten days can be regarded as life-or-death friends. The protagonist gives most of the trophies he fought hard to his male doctor friend, and gives the title in exchange to the male doctor. He lets the male doctor publish his life-saving knowledge. The protagonist selflessly dedicates himself to helping the male doctor. It's a bit of BL, but it's a bit bad. Why doesn't the protagonist give his golden finger brain segmentation technique to two friends who are deserters together, so that they can have cheats and have stronger survivability?

What you wrote is quite long. I just entered high school in 2017, and now I am even more

To be honest, the writing, storytelling, and setting of this book are all excellent, but I always felt very irritated while reading it, and always wanted to skip reading. Later, I suddenly realized that this book has no main line, and the protagonist has no purpose in doing things. I always feel that I am involved in some things inexplicably. Everything There is no main thread connecting the dungeon and the story. They are fragmented. I haven't finished reading it yet and I don't know what will happen next. In the early stage, I always thought that I should sue the count in order not to join the army. However, after some chapters, I always felt that this reason was ridiculous given the things and existences that the protagonist came into contact with. In particular, the description of the 100 chapters of the dream world is even more confusing. The new map is obviously not it, and the copy map is written too much, which makes people confused. It's okay to almost forget all the characters in the main world. Of course, it only represents my own feelings. And I always feel that each chapter is too detailed, as detailed as the number of words, and the description does not need to exist. .

This book is written like a game. There is a hint here and there, and there is no main line. The combat power completely serves the plot, leading to inconsistencies.

In fact, the book is still okay, but the biggest problem is that there is no main line, everything is drifting, the protagonist is a cyborg without his own protagonist, and it is even more amazing later, there is a reincarnation 😥 Are you not going to come back?

The protagonist is familiar with most of the knowledge of the universe. He goes into various secret and dangerous places as if he were in an uninhabited land. He pursues all knowledge. He is a master of various gift packages. His power is chaotic and he relies on chance to advance.

Many questions had no results, and I ended up on another map for no apparent reason.

After dozens of pictures, it became more and more ugly, with a lot of nonsense, and it basically relied on solving crimes to upgrade. It felt messy, and it felt like the author was deliberately lengthening the word count, which was annoying!

I hope to finish Jiu Liu Xianren. Of course, I have followed The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality and Jiu Liu Xianren. They are both very good books, but it is a pity that they have been banned.

A ninth-rate idler can become a god in one book! What a pity! It's been almost 20 years and I still miss it!

I can't read it. There's too much content about the past life. No matter what I talk about, it's all about the Federation. It's still too long to mention. It's so long-winded and endless.

After the protagonist loses his memory! Even the author has been replaced by another person, does it look like he has a split personality? ! I can't stand it anymore

It was very interesting at the beginning, but after reading more than 700 chapters of weak and strong, I felt that I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's character was too ruthless. So many innocent scholars died. The protagonist could easily deal with those monsters, but the protagonist just watched from the sidelines, and those scholars mutated and then dealt with it. This kind of plot has appeared several times before. I don't know what the author thinks. It doesn't matter, or he doesn't care, but such a picture makes people unable to stand it.

Super Virgin, I didn't realize it was a biological weapon. It should be the Holy Mother Weapon!

Settings are constantly thrown out, but the rationality is mostly only on the surface. It cannot withstand deep digging. It has buried many holes that are not filled. I don't know what the meaning of the settings is. There are too many holes.