The Second Immortal Path

This is the best mortal novel since I read Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. I don't care what other people think of it, but this book accompanied me through several years of high school and was my spiritual food during the book shortage years. At that time, I didn't have much awareness of copyright. After reading this novel later, I realized that the score was very poor, so I found a starting point to comment on it. As for those who have bad reviews, it's just that they can't accept the slow pace and the previous mortal chapter. This is a joke in itself. Isn't it funny that there is no mortal chapter in Mortal Stream? Finally, author, this book is really beautiful.

, Every time I write about being plotted by a woman, the portrayal of the protagonist fails extremely. The characters I dislike the most are his two monks and the little ice phoenix, especially the latter who has no need to appear at all. To put it bluntly, it is just a low number, and there are too many holes dug, some of which are not filled in.

My opinion as the author is {"NickName":"Original Prisoner of Chu","UserId":307512798} The plot of Zhu Chiyuan and the mortals is so important and so beautiful! ! ! Every reader can guess the life after cultivation, but the description before that reminds me of Dream of Red Mansions, which has a bit of that flavor and the atmosphere of aristocratic families. Although it is imitating ordinary people's flow, don't be rigid about it, just follow your own style. Come on! I hope you can write better works in the future!

The author writes well. I like to read it. Two chapters a day is not enough.

It's a very nice book. I feel that the author is writing it carefully. It was very slow in the early stage. Now it has more than 800 chapters and is almost 900 chapters. It feels more like the author has made more progress: the process is not delayed, the details are wonderfully described, and the concept has its own ideas. It's worth following up, but it hasn't exploded, but it seems to be updated continuously 👍.

There are too many indifferent descriptions, and people think too much.

This ended a bit quickly, but it was not easy. I would like to thank the author for his continuous efforts. I feel that this book is not well written at all. It is because I am a second-generation cultivator that I should write down more attributes related to Han Paopao. After all, I am called the second generation and the contract was signed successfully. I feel that there is no need to dodge and evade. I can write some relevant content openly and above board, so as to establish some relationships and attract some popularity and reading points by virtue of the style of the pioneer of the mortal stream. Read the points. It's very important. The same lineage is more important, but I don't know if Fatty Han will mind (if he does, we can communicate. If we can't communicate, I can't blame you, I understand you). I think he won't mind. He will be his rich generation, and we will be our cis second generation. I don't think it goes against social ethics at all. A rich father can have a son with money to spend. So I feel that this book does not make good use of these "resources" at this point. This is purely a personal opinion, please forgive me for any inaccuracies. This is my first time to explain my personal views in such a long way, so please forgive me!

Because I haven't read The Mortal's Journey to Immortality, this book is not very friendly to me.

It makes me sick to watch. Seventy percent of the essence and blood of the monster was taken away by the spider. It lived for less than two hundred years. The maid who had been with him for decades was snatched away by the spider. There was no reaction afterwards. He just regarded it as the maid's disaster. He didn't even think about dealing with the spider. He gave him whatever he wanted. From the moment he saw the spider, he was like a son. Are you dead? You have to treat it as it should be. I am poisoned to death. I am a grandson from the beginning to the end. After cheating in the middle, I have always been a dog. I am really convinced. No matter how good the writing is, it is useless. I can't stand it. Mortals who cultivate immortals do have to be forbearing sometimes. When they get the opportunity, they have to be forbearing. When they are beaten, they don't resist. It's better to be a mortal than to be forbearing for the rest of your life.

Explain the inner sect and outer sect disciples. The inner sect disciples are the disciples who practice in the sect's protective formation and have a better cultivation environment. The outer sect disciples are mainly people outside, dealing with chores. Their cultivation level is generally lower and their number is relatively large. As mentioned before, those whose cultivation base has been stagnant and have no future will be sent out of the sect. Yu Yanlu mentioned it in a previous psychological activity!

I don't write the main story, I fill the space with water, I just change the visuals and write about irrelevant things.

Let me explain the misunderstanding between elixirs and cultivation. If you have good qualifications in cultivating immortal spiritual roots, the main thing is to refine spiritual energy and demonic energy quickly. It also has various physical bonuses, most of which have similar effects. Elixirs are independent of qualifications, that is to say, overall, whether the qualifications are good or the qualifications are not good, the mana increased by taking a pill is about the same, and the difference is not much different. So, a genius who takes pills will not be faster than Han Ming who takes pills to practice. As long as he takes more pills, he can naturally catch up. Refer to the model worker's several years of foundation-building practice speed.

Here comes the new book. The giant tree hung with stars fell down, and a hazy shadow emerged from the cold corpse. The boundless flood flooded the earth, and the dragon with broken wings fell. Warriors who are good at archery take up their bows, and the red sun that sets in the west will never rise from the east again. The slaves who kneel and sing praises hold their stone axes and play funeral songs for the great gods. There is a black gold sword named Slaughter City, the sun and moon are in the sky, the empress is named Zhao, the Liujiazi of the Ming Dynasty, the fifteen emperors serve heaven and become benevolent, the emperor guards the gate of the country, the king dies in the country, a coffin suppresses the dragon's veins, and a sword cuts the overpass.

The protagonist is so useless that he is speechless, and his mentality is shattered 😓. After seeing one hundred and fifty years, he is still practicing Qi at the fifth level for more than ten years. It is so slow. If you write that you can advance to the foundation building by practicing Qi at the 9th and 10th levels, you still have to write at the 12th level 😵

There is a reason why this book is not popular. The main character is so unlikable! The last time I saw such a disgusting person was the protagonist of a book named Yue Qianchou a long time ago. At that time, I don't know how many people wanted him to die. And the author's book is not so much about the ruthlessness of the road, but rather that the protagonist is such a waste. His emotional line is even more of a mess. I don't blame others for calling him a scumbag. Dirty and wasteful.

I gave up after reading more than 50 chapters I didn't learn the essence of the story of mortals cultivating immortals at all The whole chapter was just "little smart trash and wretched cultivators", which was boring and uninteresting

At seven years old, you entered primary school. On the day of school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At the age of thirteen, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you still have the air of a naughty kid in your every breath. Like those fifth-grade children, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong men in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school masters, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, if you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips, it's so scary. So you made up your mind to enter the realm of junior high school At the age of sixteen, you reached the realm of junior high school through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the restrictions of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the heavenly tribulation of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal body and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the Great Way. But under the current world trend, the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin that it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary; if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year agreement with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. Your heart is roaring and roaring. The veins on my hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood! In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big cow. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I have seen strong people working hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of mysterious old men, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from university. They have all become your driving force to move forward Three years later, the situation was calm, and the woman was at home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she has refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's face changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the final analysis it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. My father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously where the mansion was. The answer was, Taiyi Xianfu (urban area) in the magical city, so the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man with glasses named Ma visited me riding a penguin. -After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map of the Righteous Way Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. One can hear that I am not interested in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn 100 million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

Garbage, warning, brothers, please don't read any further. The ending was rushed, and the protagonist disappeared without explaining several pitfalls clearly. It's just rubbish, worse than a eunuch. If there is a way to apply for book closure, I would really recommend this book. You are among the top three movies I have watched in recent years, but they are rubbish!

I originally wanted to curse a few words. Seeing that everyone was scolding me well, I stopped scolding him. I wrote dozens of chapters in a secret realm, and during the Qi training period I was kneeled down and licked by the invincible power of the universe.

There is no foundation building in more than 300 chapters, and the full text is more than 1,100 chapters. The power system collapsed in the first secret realm. When I saw that Yu Yanlu was abandoned, I gave up decisively.

This book is a bit disgusting. If they are men, they will be killed and if they are women, they will be kept. How shameless is it to say that the protagonist must retaliate for his anger, but there are so many women who have not been dealt with completely, so he must retaliate for his evil?

Why are there two male protagonists? I instantly don't want to watch anymore.

It's really disgusting. The pig's feet I wrote are not as good as my brother's in every way. She also always likes to highlight how handsome other people are and how good women are and how good they are. Why am I so ordinary? I can't stand looking at it anymore

No cheat code? Too boring

When I saw the description of the heroine as the master of the harem, my first thought was that this is a stallion story. Then I read the comments and got a lot of scoldings, so I didn't want to read it.

Explain the female characters in the book. What I want to write about are various characters, either without names or just the same person. Ran Qixi's red pink skull is cruel at heart and murderous, similar to the female devil Nan'er, Chun'er is obedient and obedient, a little maid type, with a narrow vision and unable to achieve big things. Yu Yansu is kind and innocent, with an innocent heart, a representative of truth, goodness and beauty Chen Yuxin, the opposite of Yu Yansu, is unscrupulous and similar to Han Ming, but her bottom line is even lower. The concubine is proud and willful, and accepts death Ying'er is moody and decisive in killing Forget Zhuang Yun and Yuan Ling, their main function is to deliver things. Anan, the eternal white moonlight. This is my positioning, but it's hard to say whether I can write it down. You may feel that now, when you go around giving things to women but never get them, Han Ming is an old virgin, an old monk, and a bit poisonous, but what he gives away is useless, and he just leaves it alone, and it is a transaction, and Han Ming does not lose money, although he is just making excuses. Getting back to the subject, dual cultivation still requires dual cultivation. I guarantee that I will master it before and after Nascent Soul, and I will speed up the process of Nascent Soul as soon as possible, but I have to fill in the previous things, and I can't mention it too fast. People say this book is too slow, but it's not that slow. Really, you'll be able to tell after Nascent Soul.

I kept watching until the foundation building failed, and I was disgusted by the double-cultivation deal with Chen Nuxiu. You said that you arranged Yu's double break earlier, which is disgusting enough, and there is no bottom line. The protagonist should be chosen by himself. If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. The protagonist's character is ever-changing, and he has no self-awareness. He still has to explain it with the number of words. The plot is also forced to make up the number. I gave up.

Lao Chu, you can give other characters a slight IQ +1. After all, the characters are all teenagers or above 🤐😁😜🤭😊🤓

Vote 3 votes, stick with it, don't let down the fans who read the book

When you see the royal capital, tell me about it 1. There are some intelligence manipulations at the beginning, but the protagonist is an aborigine and the child's immature mind can be understood. But I don't quite understand why the protagonist doesn't go home to see him after he gets better. From the beginning when he was in Wu State, he obviously had a lot of time, as if he had no family after running away from home. 2. The elders of the sect compensated the protagonist, and one of the compensations included a dual monk. Not that this is unreasonable, but it makes people feel uncomfortable. 3. The plot in Wangdu felt very intellectually depressing. When the protagonist discovered a problem, he did not report it to the sect, or even reported it secretly. He only reported it later when he discovered the opportunity and wanted both the sect and the other party to suffer losses. Moreover, the protagonist wants to fish in troubled waters, but the protagonist practices Qi, and the other forces build five or six foundations per person. The protagonist's magic weapon is still clearly identifiable. I don't understand what the protagonist is thinking. How can I expect the other party to die. —————————————————————————— Another behavior that did not conform to my three views occurred later. In order to take revenge (doubtful) and repair the blood evil gourd ghost pet, he gathered more than 3,000 horse thieves and killed him. The protagonist's bottom line is constantly declining. For me, it can be said that there are all kinds of little poisonous points, so I gave up.