Naruto: Thousand-Armed Seiye

Someone pointed out in this chapter that the second generation was in Konoha and could directly sense the existence of Uchiha Madara. But in the novel, I set the range to be one thousand meters, without referring to the original work. Is this a BUG? Do you really think that the original work will not make mistakes? If the second-generation perception range is really so large, then why do we need to set up an ANBU and an intelligence unit? As soon as he turns on his perception state, doesn't he know everything about the five major countries? Then why didn't he know that the Golden Horn and Silver Horn were going to launch a coup when he went to the Kingdom of Thunder to attend the talks? Do you want to conduct an investigation without turning on the awareness state during the entire journey to the enemy's country? Kishimoto is also a human being, and he can also draw bugs. You can't just follow the script, you have to make your own judgment. He probably wanted to vomit out how powerful Uchiha Madara was at that time, and his power was so exaggerated that the second generation could detect it from such a distance.

I rubbed it, and it ended up looking like this. I thought it would continue to be written based on Chengye's growth, but suddenly a main character came up, and I was instantly indifferent. I've seen a lot of unlimited streams and doujins, and many authors want to create things out of thin air that don't depend on the plot at all, but most of them, well. . . . I haven't seen anything like this before. The previous writing is very good, normal growth, unlike those messy fan fiction, such as five-year-old Jonin, eleven or twelve-year-old super shadow, haha, although Naruto is precocious, but think about the ten-year-old child living in seconds, the picture is too eye-catching, even the children of the plane are not so showy. It was good before the restart, I subscribed to it, and it will depend on whether the author has superior control over the writing.

If you don't travel through time, there will be no sense of immersion. . .

The author estimates that he has failed to improve the speed of air combat effectiveness by writing so much. Leading to premature combat strength reporting. In the later stage, there was no other way to make room for the gods. In fact, it is best for the protagonist to be one to five years older than Naruto, or someone who directly participated in the war with the Toto generation and does not know the plot. In this way, he can write some daily descriptions of the characters, and let the protagonist unintentionally modify the original tragedy. It would be great if Naruto comes out and the protagonist is on top. Or it would be very interesting for the protagonist to become the Hokage after the death of the fourth generation. After all, the Hokage and Uchiha are almost at 70% now. A Thousand Hands would be more attractive.

This title gives people a feeling of being extremely low-key. First of all, Jono is better than Seungye. Japanese names are not given like this. You can't give Japanese names. Writing Japanese novels will be very embarrassing, just like writing Western novels in ancient Chinese dialects. The novels you have not accumulated enough in life have no connotation. What do you think, do you just rely on pretending to slap girls in the face?

Will this book be sold out on October 4th?

The sudden appearance of the time traveler just makes one drop out of a pot of delicious porridge... Sigh╯╰

Who is Ryota? He studied well. Suddenly such a person appears. It feels like eating shit 😢

In fact, in the original work, there are only 6 people who opened the kaleidoscope, Madara, Izuna, Itachi, Sasuke, Obito, and Shisui. If we count the ancient times, Indra is barely included, but I remember that Indra doesn't seem to need to open the kaleidoscope. I am able to play all the full-scale Suzu games, and in the anime, it seems that Sasuke's father has opened the kaleidoscope. In fact, there are only 8 people in total. For thousands of years, only 8 people have opened the kaleidoscope after a large family has continued. You can imagine how high the qualifications required for this thing are. We all know that the requirement to open the Kaleidoscope Eyes is extremely violent emotional fluctuations, but in fact, the original work emphasizes the qualification issue many times, and it can also be seen from the number of opened eyes. You said that after so many years of chaos and war, are only 8 people in Uchiha suffering from violent emotional fluctuations? It is estimated that there are so many people who have encountered that situation, but there are still only these 8 who have opened the kaleidoscope. This shows that the qualification requirements for this thing are extremely high.

The plot chapters have half as many subscribers as the battle chapters. What is the problem that makes me afraid to write about battles? 😭

I am a Shennong who tastes all kinds of herbs in the world without dying. I am invincible and lonely. When I encounter this book now, I feel that my opportunity lies in it. Onlookers said: This book is extremely poisonous and will kill anyone who touches it. I snorted coldly: Hum, I am a divine farmer, invulnerable to all poisons, and I am possessed by Brother Chun. How can you understand my realm? When I conquer this book, I will lead you to ripple in it. Yang. Yang. Yang. Shennong died

Isn't it a time travel story? Then don't watch it ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

There are too many flaws, and the strength of the ninja has been weakened by grading. It feels like a child fighting

During World War II, Ghost Lantern Huayue had already died. There are 1,000 people in a brigade in the original book, but you only have 30 people in a squadron here? A captain has dozens of people under his command? The Mist Ninja landing force only has three squadrons and 90 people? Is this a war or playing house? If a Jonin casts a B-level ninjutsu, will he lose his mana? Just come to Uchiha and open the kaleidoscope at will? After reading thirty chapters, there are so many flaws. If I read further, I will go blind.

It's not time travel, it's not rebirth. The protagonist has grown to the level of the first version of Chaoying at most. The problem of eyesight is not the same as before. If you are not a time traveler, don't say that you don't know if there is a higher level than Chaoying. Even if there is, you don't know how to improve it.

To sum up, no one wants to watch Aboriginal people.

Are you still writing the book? It has been sitting there for several years...

It makes sense to have mediocre grades

Brothers, please read a book. It is also a Naruto fan. The protagonist is the fusion of Senju Tobirama and Uchiha Izuna. In the early stage, he was called Tobirama, but in the later stage, he became similar to Hashirama. The female protagonist is Tsunade. In the end, the protagonist takes the body of Otsutsuki Kaguya.

Recently, several audience members have some doubts about Senju Ryota's mission. The author gives a clear answer here: First of all, Ryota's background before time travel was that of an otaku who had lived on earth for twenty or thirty years. The author put himself in his shoes and thought about how he would behave if he suddenly traveled to the world of Naruto. What Liang Tai did in the article was the product of A-chan's thinking. Before writing this novel, A-chan had read more than ten Naruto fanfics. What was more unacceptable among them was that in some novels, after the protagonist traveled through time, it didn't take long to integrate into the Naruto world. He started practicing at the age of three or four, became a chuunin at the age of seven or eight, and became a jounin at the age of eleven or twelve. From that point on, he would defeat everything. Is it appropriate to live as a modern person for decades and then be able to erase all traces after time travel and immediately transform into a murderous and fearless perfect ninja? After all, Senju Ryota represents all the bad qualities in A-chan's heart that she dare not expose in real society: selfishness, greed, lust (loving the harem), etc. And Cheng Ye is the most perfect ninja in A-chan's mind: handsome, innocent, brave, and extremely talented. In fact, A-chan feels that everyone is a contradictory combination of Cheng Ye and Liang Tai, with an extremely dark side and a side that yearns for perfection. As for why the character Ryota was added, it was actually because A-chan felt that there were not enough contradictions in the novel. The contradictions in the world of Naruto have already been explained in the original work. If this novel only supplements the original work from another angle, it would be superfluous. Therefore, the appearance of Liang Tai can add two more contradictions: 1. The contradiction between modern people and the indigenous characters in the Naruto world. 2. The conflict between changing the plot (represented by Cheng Ye) and maintaining the original plot unchanged (represented by Ryota). These are things that A-chan did not think of when writing the introduction to the novel. Even if some readers find it difficult to accept it, A-chan also hopes that everyone can be gentler... That's it for now, let me make another aside: this year's level 6 listening test is really abnormal! 😆