Dajieguo

The writing is very good, the plot is well connected, and there are no mentally retarded supporting characters. The farming story is very heartwarming! Praise! But the suspense left is not enough. Although the suspense of the main plot is sufficient, the suspense of the branch plot can basically be guessed from the beginning, middle and later, and there is no sense of divine twist. And the relationship between the male and female protagonists always feels a bit awkward. Moreover, the excessive feeling between the spirit planting competition and going to the secret realm is not good. Going to the central realm feels like the protagonist is driven by the plot, not the protagonist's own wishes! The protagonist's golden finger currently uses spiritual stones to expand the spiritual springs and spiritual fields of his beads, while the central realm's current attraction to the protagonist is only the elixir that changes the spiritual roots. The dangers in the central realm are obviously not something that can be manipulated during the Qi training period, and the teammates are from other sects, so the dangers and rewards are not proportional. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger is an unlimited resource type, and the quality of the spiritual roots actually has little impact on the protagonist. But being a new author is absolutely awesome! I present my monthly ticket in my hand.

The pace is indeed slow, but I don't hate it. What I want to see is not how fast the protagonist upgrades, how to clear dungeons, or how to change maps. To be honest, I am tired of seeing these routines. Almost every fantasy novel is the same. This book is roughly the same formula, but I can feel that the author is carefully shaping the world and each character in the story, and is also trying to write something different. After reading so many books, most readers actually know that the protagonist will definitely soar all the way, not to mention the Nascent Soul Mahayana Void Realm and so on. They also know that there is a big map after the Novice Village, and that in the later stage, he will soar, break through the void, etc. After all, the plots of all fantasy novels are like this. So why not write the story in more detail? As an old bookworm, the protagonist has been upgraded very quickly. , Slaps in the face and the like can no longer bring me pleasure. Every time I open a new book, I look forward to new stories, even if they are similar routines. Therefore, this "slow pace" is the most suitable for me to watch

I have read Chapter 142, and it is also the New Year. By the way, I can really tell from reading Da Jie Guo from the beginning that this is a very thoughtful book, and the author will seriously consider many details. Although many book reviewers have raised a lot of questions, it is normal. After all, there is no comparison between one person and a group of people. I also like to write, and I have been reading books for more than ten years. I always feel that the author's strengths are not fully utilized. Maybe he deliberately made them up to cater to some characteristics of online articles, such as some cool and pretentious ones, but these are more incompatible with the author, a very inconsistent feeling, and it does not match the Dajieguo. The writing is a bit tough. What kind of author is what kind of book. It is good to have a master to teach you, but I feel that the author himself is restricted. He should obviously be one. This is a book that should make people more moved and like the protagonist more. It is a book that focuses on the relationship and depicts more characters. The plot of Xianxia is a line, a world view, and a means of enriching the story. But the main dish should be those emotions that stir people's hearts. From the lines, I feel that the author should be more emotional at heart, so use your strengths. I want to see a Dajie Guo that people can still remember ten years later, and a Chen Mo that people can still remember ten years later.

It's quite good. I personally like novels that are neither impatient nor impatient, and are slowly upgraded with plug-ins. I hope the author will keep an eye on you.

Can't everyone be a little patient? Without the foreshadowing of various geniuses, how would you feel that Chen Mo is so incredible that even geniuses cannot surpass him? Moreover, with the comparison of other geniuses, Chen Mo's performance later will be even more amazing. How difficult would it be to find a book these days where even the supporting characters are so carefully crafted and not just the same? Some people think that writing supporting characters is just water, but I think the author's care and sincerity can be felt in every word. Please read it patiently, maybe you will be happy when the protagonist explodes.

It's interesting, and it's really worth looking forward to. The author's writing skills are very profound.

There is indeed a foundation for writing a book to this level: the whole chapter is rigorously conceived and linked closely. Reading this book is like practicing spiritual practice yourself: Brilliant! Great book! I believe that although there are not many chapters in this book, I can still see the clues that the chapters will become more and more attractive and exciting; great gods are just like this; #Hope to keep going all the way; stay optimistic and keep going!

The story is told in a eloquent way. The environment and characters are well-detailed and detailed, and the writing skills are not like those of a novice. I have read many works about cultivating immortals in Dakai Dahe, and the writing style of this one is quite refreshing. I look forward to it.

The author is so annoying, I look nervous, I obviously see hope, but the author just won't let the male protagonist succeed easily, what can I do!

Write a good book with care and diligence and support the author. Good books are rare, support with 10,000 points

This novel adopts the routine of mortal flow, but reduces the inherent coldness and jungle law in mortal flow. The appearance of the character Ye Piaoling, the senior brother, undoubtedly adds a lot of warmth to the novel. The author's description of the senior brother is not very deliberate, but it naturally makes people feel the warmth of the senior brother. The author's writing style is very good, and he has a good control over the rhythm of the article. Although the story has just unfolded, it has already given people a general understanding of the background of the world. However, there is no such thing as spending a whole chapter introducing the world. Invisibly, people have already understood the general background. Moreover, the dialogue between the characters in the article is very well described, without making people feel awkward, and full of strong ancient style. Regarding the golden finger, the author still made restrictions, but the intensity of this restriction is not very high. I don't know how the author handles this problem, but I feel that if it is not handled well, it is likely to cause the collapse of the world in the later stage. My suggestion is that the author can downplay the existence of Golden Finger like in "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". Guiding the story to the characters and plot, I think with the author's skill, this novel may become a masterpiece. (This is my homework. If there is any offense, please forgive me)

Okay, it's a bit like watching mortals back in the day. Sanjiang is finally reliable for once.

Use the sticker as proof. Daily recommendations. Monthly tickets are only given to Mr. Lan. Master Lan updates a chapter and rewards once. It's not about being too much, it's about perseverance.

I gave up decisively around Chapter 20. There are too many words, too many malicious speculations, there is nothing wrong with the protagonist, and opportunities are given too casually. Interesting? How about I just give you an earth?

I really like this book, and I can see that the author is very serious about it. I think I should write my own opinions so that the author can understand the psychology of some readers who may be like me. Why do you feel that describing the protagonist in such an incomparable size is a waste of time? If you think about why Naruto is so bad in the later stage, the battle between Konoha's twelve small and powerful ones can only clear out the OB. We don't know the positioning of Liu Jian and Hua Li at all. According to tradition and previous habits, we speculate that Chen Mo is used to playing alone, which makes people feel that writing about these people is nothing more than a stepping stone to set off the protagonist and a prop used to entertain readers. If it's just for the pleasure of pretending to be slapped in the face, who would want to watch you spend a long time portraying a few characters who can be thrown away after use? But if these people will become rivals who are also friends and foes, grow up with the protagonist, and have a long-term role, then there is nothing wrong with describing them in detail. However, the world setting of Dajieguo is so grand, and the current Kongsang sect is only at the bottom level. According to this upgrade expectation, not to mention these geniuses, the Kongsang sect can say goodbye soon, and the senior brother and master Qin Lao will have to withdraw without using hundreds of chapters. As they enter the new map, they will become history. In this routine mode, why should readers project emotions on the supporting characters? Wouldn't it be over just to watch the protagonist develop alone and pretend to be bad all the way to the top? I don't like upgrading routines at all, but good books have a clear purpose. Tiandao Library pretends to be neat and tidy, one after another, and I finish it quickly with five or six pieces of daily fun. Although it is so white that there is no suspense, it is a pleasure to read. So the question comes back to Da Jie Guo. What kind of novel do you want to write? Can you control the many supporting characters like The Shepherd God? If not, just follow the novel setting of Lingzhi and honestly write a refreshing article for readers. If you want to break through simple writing, then this path cannot be achieved simply by writing about people and things in complex and detailed terms. Personally, I am very disappointed with Tuogu after reading it now. Everyone has already guessed that the village was massacred. No matter how deeply you wrote Chen Mo to have a deep relationship with the village, I can't accept the matter of being left alone. Originally, having two lolita with you could write a lot of plots about sects and daily farming, but it's a pity that you gave up. I only saw the name of protection, but in fact it was just to get rid of the hindrance and facilitate the protagonist to level up quickly. All the emotional descriptions were reduced to deliberately finding an enemy for the protagonist in the early and mid-term. Although you wrote some plots where Chen Mo collects equipment for the two of them, it is not about sisters or close relatives, but it is like how we habitually build equipment for followers in the game.

The writing style and the rationality of the plot have surpassed most great masters!

New wine in old bottles, but the writing is wonderful, it is Benxicao

I gave you the monthly passes for the only two chapters this month, come on

The Spiritual Planting Competition is really well written! It's true that it took so long to prepare for it, but it's even more uncomfortable to have to refresh it every day. It's not enough to watch! ! !

I'll give you an update. Your level is pretty good. I'll give you a reward 😄.

After catching up to this point, I feel more and more that the author's writing power is extraordinary. In less than 30 chapters, the characters of the characters are all established. Whether it is the protagonist Chen Mo, who has a forbearance and tenacity that is beyond his peers, but also has the character of a young man, or the senior brother Ye Piaoling, master Li Yan, and Mr. Qin who occupy only a few chapters, each character has a different and distinct three-dimensional personality. It is not easy to achieve this. Come on, author, if you are a newcomer, becoming a god is just around the corner!

It's rare to see a book like this. Senior brother, Zhou Qingxuan, Mr. Qin... Even the various characters that Liao Liao has introduced in a few strokes are so vivid and lively. Keep it up, and hopefully they will become gods.

Upon first reading the first few chapters, you can easily find that the writing is anything but casual. The further you look back, the more you can appreciate the charm displayed by words.

The title of the book looks like Daguoguo😅

Would a big family that monopolizes two-thirds of the country's medicinal herb business live on a war-torn border?

It's too long-winded. It's all about the protagonist's conjectures and psychological activities. Write more storylines and narrate more facts. You can count it yourself to see how many psychological descriptions there are in a chapter, and this is what your routine looks like~~ If hypothesis 1, hypothesis 2, hypothesis 3, in the end I will still follow 4. So isn't this description of 123 nonsense? It's so confusing to watch. If you continue like this, you will never write a good book. Go and see mortals. Mortals simply don't have so many psychological descriptions. In fact, there is a very short part relative to its story. The female ones are too long.

Although there are not many of this theme, each one has its own characteristics and will not make people feel outdated. There are still many innovative places.

I am really happy to find a real book among the vast sea of ​​books.

Why don't you arrange such a good senior brother for Dumb?

That's a bit bullshit! Is it worth it to look at you twice more? ? Pig's feet halo🤭🤭🤭