Poor Family and Noble People

It's similar to the plot mode of The Rise of the Han Family, but it's also quite interesting. After all, The Rise of the Han Family is also based on others. That's right?

The plot is getting less and less reasonable, and I can't stand it anymore. It's pretty good in the early stages. It's deceptive and too sudden and too shrewd. Some plots are unnecessary or should be changed. It was painful to watch. I quite like some of the previous chapters. I can't stand it anymore anymore. The general environment of the book is quite good. Pay attention to the plot and hope you can think about it carefully and not be too brainless.

Separate the families as soon as possible. The parents are short-sighted and can't be bothered. If you write about family, no one will read it.

From the morning until three o'clock in the morning~ Then I was ready to give up~ The following became more and more unreasonable, and the plot was all kinds of little poisonous, which was a pity~

Some suggestions about this book 1. I have read more than a hundred chapters of this book, but the label of the book is Cultivation of Immortality? Yisi Q Simi? It doesn't look like it's a novel about cultivating immortals at all. It talks about trivial family matters throughout, and it looks like a palace battle drama. I suggest the author move this book to a romance novel about women. After all, Mother Xue and Mother Zhao are the real pigs in this book. 2. The author, you are trying to sell yourself like a sheep, trying to label yourself as a cultivator. I seriously doubt that the author is either a woman or a sissy.

In the beginning, the protagonist's family has a hard time solving the problem of food and clothing. They can't even eat meat and they clamor to become immortals. My friend, although cultivating immortals depends on qualifications, it is still a money-burning job. It's like a beggar who doesn't have enough to eat and says he wants to make 100 million first! Not to mention, make a stick, no worries. Stop writing books. Really, the reality is don't set small goals or anything like that. Just be a down-to-earth person, author!

Rubbish setting (I rarely scold you like this, but this rubbish family view is very bad guidance)

After watching it for more than 70 years, I was scared off by the resourceful lady! Alas, what should I say? This approach should mean that the author does not understand how to write novels about cultivating immortals, or does not understand what cultivating immortals is, or he wants to find a new way to stew palace fights, house fights, and cultivating immortals. If so, I can only regretfully tell the author that your stew is not particularly good, and I will not comment on your writing skills. Your scenes of cultivating immortals and house fights make people question whether you have written a general outline. . Cultivation of immortals can be done in one chapter and five years will pass by in a blink of an eye. Fighting in a house can be as detailed as killing the second brother's family. One word is enough! Also, let me complain, can you pay attention to children's language ability development and thinking development? Almost all of them are human beings The first part is okay, but the second part is really not that good.

I just read the first chapter of this novel, and it feels very different from the several novels I have read before. I just don't know what the author's later works are like, the plagiarism is serious.

It's free. There are quite a lot of words. Take a look at the front. It's okay, but it's said to be copied. It doesn't matter. But the ** written at the back is. The emperor had fun talking to you yesterday. He also said it was for the escort of the prince. But the next day he went to court to give it to a random official. He didn't owe all the rewards. He took out his guns at the back. Then The prince of the enemy country 2 lets you go and gives you ten million yuan a year. You almost starved to death when you were a child. This country is not good for you at all. The emperor still wants to kill you. There are enemies all around. The prince is a prince in name only. He has no real power. He pretends to help you, but in fact he does not help you. He treats you as a wage earner. The further back he is, the more vicious he is.

The author seems to be troubled by short-sighted relatives. I remember a saying, if some relatives are not your relatives, you may not want to interact with them in your life.

Come on＾0＾~. The character's heart is well portrayed, as perfect as Zhu Xian at his peak. It's just that the character's appearance is not highlighted much, and the clothing and facial details can be further described.

Please note, when reading this book, you should prepare a pillow or pillow next to it to save you from smashing your phone. I don't know if the author is really stupid or deliberately made it so stupid. Anyway, the first hundred or so pictures are all for dissuasion.

After reading the first chapter, it looks very familiar. The same is a family of three, the same family is not separated, the same one is still studying, but there is no hope. The same is the protagonist's family being bullied, swallowing, and then being forced to give up the opportunity to study. The same is because the mother refuses. What else can I say.

Passing by ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

This *** book is a bit awesome and poisonous. The more I read it, the more disturbing it becomes.

I thought it was inappropriate to leave, but I still felt uncomfortable and uncomfortable. First of all, let me say that I really haven't read many chapters. I really felt very uncomfortable watching their family's affairs and couldn't stand it anymore. After being treated so unfairly, Xue's father and Xue's mother did not change. They gave in repeatedly. Even if they are good and honest in reality, there should be a bottom line. The chapters I read did not show a trace of the freshness that Xue's father and Xue's mother said a living person should have. They were too rigid, and for the sake of the continuation of the plot, there was no change that normal people should have. In fact, the villain's sister-in-law, Mrs. Zhao, is portrayed quite vividly, but the role of the villain should be to highlight certain characteristics of the positive character. Even if there is more fighting of wits and courage, it will be better. The tolerance of the article makes me too depressed, so I would like to leave first. Just a personal opinion, no need to support or oppose, please those keyboard warriors please don't criticize me.

After reading Chapter 60, I can't stand it anymore. A large chapter is about shitty things happening at home, and the protagonist swallows his anger. But it's not that I can't stand the protagonist's setbacks. I remember when I was in high school, a classmate wrote an essay. When he wrote about difficulties, he wrote: If there are no difficulties, we have to create difficulties. The first 60 chapters of this novel probably feel like this, tasteless.

Let's be honest, this book is destined to be a waste of time until death. There is nothing wrong with the logic, but there are some small loopholes. However, for a novel about cultivating immortals, you are too detailed and wordy in many places.

Do you have any recommendations for good first-person novels? I found a book called "The Beginning of Eternity"!

I don't know what the author's purpose is for describing the protagonist's family trivia in such detail, and it is very similar to the plot in The Number One Scholar from a Poor Family. In my opinion, it is really a major flaw of the book. It is too slow, just like watching a TV series about family conflicts, it is really boring.

The protagonist who is not a time traveler has no soul.

I'm number one. After a year, I have actually published a new book. Grab a sofa to support it.

The first part is very good. The parents are short-lived and the relationship between relatives is well described. I support the author. I haven't read the second part yet. I hope it won't be written as a cool novel. People who like cool novels are everywhere, so there is no need to harm this book. Life is so unsatisfactory that your head is full of cool articles?

Starting from the beginning of history, this is a book that brings out the essence of the term "selling sheep's head to selling dog's flesh". Brothers who agree, give it a like 👍

Come on, brothers, give it a rest, money is really easy to make? This book is sometimes copied from this book, and sometimes it is copied from that book. Can you give a unified explanation? The author of this book is really too busy 😁 In addition, when a certain book was criticized and ordered to be revised, do you really think that no one knows about it?

This book can only read seventy chapters, and then it is full of poison. I suspect the author has been replaced.

This book describes Mother Xue in too much detail. The title should be changed to The Fairy Mother of the Poor Family.

How did this kind of book come up? I can't find good books. There are a lot of these kind of books. Is it still possible to read happily?

The family problem has been solved, and now it comes again. Author, you are really disgusting. A novel about cultivating immortals is so good, and yet another uncle and relative appears Abandoned the book