Red Mansion Garden Full of Spring Scenery

Two eyebrows that look like frowning but not frowning, and a pair of eyes that look like weeping but not weeping.

The most powerful novel about Red Mansions, except for the romantic figures and the world-shattering novels

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The writing is good, but what about the plot? Most book friends accuse the protagonist of not doing his job properly and flirting with women every day. However, considering that the new book has just been published, it is the time when the plot is integrated and the context of all parties is clarified, so it is not appropriate to criticize too much. Secondly, I don't know the general outline of this book. Is the inner courtyard the main focus and the inner courtyard supplemented by the merits? The former is about uniting everyone's thoughts and developing a grand plan, while the latter is about fulfilling Honghong's fantasies and getting happiness. It all depends on the author's choice. The lyrics and the text are already rare masterpieces among Red Mansions novels. I hope the author can make early decisions and make good choices, and it will surely become a masterpiece in the future.

There are too many garden plays, and the authors are great. In fact, many people started writing about Red Mansions without even understanding the ancient feudal social system. A lot of authors also wrote randomly about recruiting girls everywhere, and they are not little yellow hair. They don't care about the girls at all and only care about their own pleasure. They just know how to recruit girls. To be honest, there is no corresponding power and position. You can't even accept a maid. Let's talk about it carefully (don't be brainless, accept the argument logically). First, let's talk about the maids in Dream of Red Mansions. What is the ultimate dream of the maid? I just want to be a concubine and have a title, so let's talk about who can take a concubine. The Ming Dynasty stipulated that there were 10 princes, 4 county princes, 4 first- and second-grade officials, 2 third-grade officials, 1 fourth-grade official, and a fifth-grade official had to reach a certain age to have a quota. The Qing Dynasty had the same system as the Ming Dynasty! So let me ask the masters who have been writing garden operas, why do you take concubines? By mouth? By love? You can't even give the maid a place in the concubine, so why should she be with you if she has no name and no status? In ancient times, your social status was closely linked to your official rank. You had privileges only if you had status and rank. Some TV dramas showed businessmen having a bunch of concubines. That was only TV dramas without brains. In addition, many of the so-called concubines were actually foreign concubines, nameless and titleless. They were basically slaves who had fled and could not make a living. So what are these maids in the Jia family? Obviously, if you want to take in some maids when you go to the Red Mansion, you have to be qualified to take concubines and hang these women, otherwise why would I follow you? In the same way, let's talk about Sanchun, Sister Lin, and Baochai. Regardless of whether they are legitimate concubines, as daughters of aristocratic families, or of noble birth, if you want to marry a real wife, you still need to be an official, and you also need to have a certain rank. Even Xue Baochai, who was born in the worst family, was also an imperial merchant. Not to mention some mindless people who say that it is enough to take a concubine. The main wife is not worthy. Please use your own brains to think about whether the protagonists in some books have a fourth-level official status and whether they can take concubines. It is very funny. Some protagonists are still studying for fame and business and have already begun to fantasize about taking concubines 😅 So, as a writer Dear sir, don't keep having sex in the garden. You have to improve your status. Only when you have power and rank can you play in the garden. Otherwise, you will be like Baoyu. Baoyu is not even qualified to marry a concubine. We hate Baoyu just because he doesn't do anything. If he doesn't have the ability to protect a woman, he still wants to provoke her. Isn't it just a little yellow hair behavior?

I don't understand why I have to put back the maid who was originally following me. To put it bluntly, you have no preparation in front of you. There is no credit for following you since childhood, only hard jail. After getting a Xiangling, he hurriedly kicked someone out in two days. He is also a devil.

Nice or not

The protagonist is also quite insidious. To say that the villain is flattering the protagonist is to flatter him. He is a hypocrite, worse than Jia Baoyu.

The Xue family is, to put it mildly, one of the four major families, Huangshang, but it is just a family of merchants, not the richest one. Moreover, Xue Baochai lost his father when he was young, his brother was sued for his life, and he was suffering from heat poisoning. Coupled with the fact that he was a merchant, the negative buffs were almost full. Why do the fics I read always make her the main wife? It seems that being the concubine would wrong her, no matter how high the title of the protagonist is. The Lin family is the fifth generation of princes and has a lot of property. When it comes to Lin Ruhai, she is still a junior high-ranking official. Her mother is the legitimate daughter of the Jia family. I don't know how Xue can compare with Lin. Of course, Lin Ruhai died like a lamp going out, and there was nothing he could do about it, everything was in vain, but people in the fandom generally don't die.

The recent chapters are too dull. There are a lot of things that can be mentioned in one sentence but have to be described in detail. The promotion process and planning of the protagonist should be used as side plots to supplement the main content such as the garden drama and the plots of the various heroines. Readers came in because of your book title. Don't you know what the author mainly wants to read? For example, there have been many roadside characters in recent chapters who were supposed to be used as plot promoters to promote the plot. As a result, the author wrote a lot of things about this roadside character and a lot of things about those other people. There are already a lot of roadside characters written, so let them talk a lot. Author, your writing style is good, but your writing method is weird, at least for me personally. Now the desire to read has dropped significantly. Now that this writing method is written, the role of the character on the roadside will be far greater than the role of the heroine. There are more than 100 chapters. Except for Lin Daiyu, Sister Feng appears a little more, and Baochai is almost missing. There are few descriptions and plots. The characters, the protagonist, and Qingmei are all like this. They are not as good as the characters on the roadside, let alone the other heroines. Now, the author, your side text seems to be much more than the main text. To quote a few readers (if I want to read the intrigues of the court, why don't I read other novels about the intrigues of the court, such as Three Kingdoms Fanren)? You are attracted by the Red Mansion and you show so many roadside characters. Blah blah blah, blah blah blah, those fake people in the Jia family are outrageous, it would be weird if the readers don't run away. Aren't you describing those characters just to let the protagonist do it and make the readers happy? Now that you give them so many roles, it just adds all kinds of obstruction to the reader's perception, and there are quite a few such characters. . . . . Author, if you can see it, please refer to it and change it to this way of writing. If you write in this way, your writing style will be in vain. If your writing style were not better, I would not type so many words to give you some reference suggestions. I can only deal with this writing method and this book.

Very strong, I would like to call you the strongest new book in Red Mansion so far

Didn't look ahead. I read a bit after it was put on the shelves. The writing style is very good, and the wording and sentences have the flavor of Red Mansion. . But the story is very flat, relying on women to complete the plot, and the young lady catches it. . It's time to take the exam, and the girl has to stop her to express her love for the young lady. . Can't prioritize things. . That's why so many women are jumping to see Sister Lin.

The more I write, the more confused I become. The inexplicable plot has no main line and no daily routine, so it's very incomprehensible.

What's so good about a woman like Wang Xifeng? She's jealous, pungent, and cruel. She can even murder the children of Jia Lian's concubines. This kind of woman will only make the house restless. . This kind of controlling woman, if you get her, she will always want to ride on a man's head. The backyard is never peaceful.

The protagonist was born in the imperial examination, why is there almost no participation from his tutors and the same year? Without these, can he still be considered a civil servant?

The positives have been basically covered in the comment section. Let me talk about the shortcomings: 60 chapters, and I write about trivial things inside and outside the house all day long. There is almost no career aspect, and the occasional appearance is dealt with in a few strokes. There are a lot of female characters, but the progress bar is too slow, which does not match the title of the book. It is suspected of trying to sell dogs. The biggest shortcoming is that the male protagonist is as glib and frivolous as Baoyu, and the impression is very poor. If he doesn't hurry up and climb up or cultivate his power and start a career and then start a harem, he expects to study in the imperial examination, play with the female character, quarrel and eventually fall into a serious relationship?

I can only say that the collection was too slow. The lady won't say anything. She was very reluctant to accept a maid. Currently, all the latest chapters have been ordered. I don't know what the highlights are.

The writing style is really awesome, I won't accept it.

Chapter 11 was written by Shu Xiangling in a very bad way! Discouraged many people

The recent plot with Daiyu returning to Yangzhou to get engaged was really well written, and it was written at a higher level than the previous military dramas.

This book does not include Jia Mu and Grandma Liu

It's well written. It's one of the few new Red Mansions books that I can read now😊

The writing style is really good But to be honest, compared with the writing style, the grasp of the plot is far from enough Whether it is Mrs. Wang's inexplicable hostility, Jia Zheng's lack of attention to the protagonist, and the obvious inflated description of money, Jia's family's 16 The lack of attention paid to Sui Tanhua and the large amount of blank space for the main character's troop-gathering route are all lacking in meaning It's red and it's not just a garden drama. Readers' requirements for these aspects are actually relatively high But I think overall the flaws are not concealed, come on.

To be honest, the author's writing style is really unsatisfactory, but some parts of the content you wrote are really outrageous... Go ahead and revise it when you have time. You haven't finished writing yet, so it's okay to revise the book. At the beginning, I thought that what the author wrote must have your reasons, but after entering Rongguo Mansion, the questions came one after another. You live in Rongguo Mansion, and you turned the place where you live into a shabby house. Do you mean that Rongguo Mansion is a shabby house? He is still Jia Baoyu's father. He is indeed lacking in ability, but he loves talented people very much, otherwise he would not beat Jia Baoyu like that again and again. It is impossible for the male protagonist to not see him on the first day after he comes in. You follow the original text too much, but your arrival should be butterfly wings🪽 The reason why he did not see Lin Daiyu is because in ancient times, boys were favored over girls, and she was only a niece. It is excusable.

Recently, I feel like the protagonist is like the captain of the fire brigade, moving wherever he needs to 🤔 The whole process is either to save this or that. Also, is the main plot of this book a garden drama or a rebellion?

After reading dozens of chapters, I still can't understand what the main character is trying to do. He is rambling here and there, here and there. How to read the book? It is always laying out the layout, but it is not clear what the layout is. What is going on in Shandong is writing letters 😅

As far as writing is concerned, it should be the best among Red Mansion fans. Of course, there are quite a lot of shortcomings. If you change the age, some of them will be very dramatic when compared to the original work. There is also the 15-year-old Jie Yuan. Although he has written many books, the writing skills of those people are much worse than yours. Logically speaking, your writing style should not write such a mentally retarded plot. This is not to say that 15-year-old Jieyuan cannot be written, but 15-year-old Jieyuan will definitely shock the world, but what is written in the novel is as ordinary as someone in their twenties. Of course, these problems are actually not big. There are a lot of fics that are popular but have a lot of loopholes. Overall, this book really has a Red Mansion feel to it.

Can you collect Sister Feng quickly and stop her from pulling her?

Although the writing is good, when will Sister Feng accept it? Will she accept it later? If I still get tired of being with Jia Lian, I will leave. I am a member of Sister Feng's party 😭😭😭

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