Holding the Sword and Seeking Freedom in the Multiverse

Chapter 250 😃

Although I haven't read it yet, I will give you a recommendation vote if I reply to every post you make.

It feels like a narrative rather than a novel, with little passion. Some places are quite messy, such as the old man in front who was burned to ashes after being penetrated by a horn. What is this guy doing?

Can you change the "two people", "two sides", etc. That appear everywhere? Where is this Chinese? Isn't it awkward to read it by yourself?

The author's updates are great! Collect it first! ! !

😌Write faster

Author, I would like to ask you if you can add punctuation marks to the dialogue. It is very uncomfortable to read, and it is difficult to read. There is also formatting. The dialogue can be separated into a natural paragraph. It is recommended to look at how other authors type and layout. Regardless of the writing style, I also hope that the author can consider the reader's reading experience and not write in his own way. This will discourage readers. My humble opinion, I hope the author can listen.

Beautifully written Come on, author

At first glance, it was original and not plagiarized. It was also very interesting to vote. I gave it a try.

How to write an introduction like an outline?

It feels so awkward, indescribably awkward

Hahaha, I feel like the author is a novice. If so, then the writing is passable.

It feels like watching a silent movie, without dialogue...

Problem with the introduction? Why does the protagonist think he has traveled to another world? Could it be that he traveled to the ancient earth? Or the future of the earth? ?

It's very awkward and super weird to read, and the single is well written and confusing, but overall it's just toxic.

There is no dialogue between the previous characters. Are you really writing a novel?

I don't understand why most of these novels have the protagonist smoking.

Hmm... Excuse me, do double quotation marks cost money? Why are there no double quotation marks in the dialogue in the article?

How should I put it? I remember that a long time ago I gave up when I saw around 150. This time I gradually lost interest after seeing this. I rated the book's part in the forest as a masterpiece, but then I gradually lost interest. After thinking about it, it may be a problem with the power system, and the ambition is too big.

Come on, brother, I rarely read books anymore, I believe you can do it, come on

The beginning of it is still very attractive. I took a look at the comment section and was ready to continue reading.

I feel like the protagonist is the one who just goes forward without hesitation.

No matter how you play, you will not die. I am the protagonist. Are you angry ?

The order of chapters gets messed up starting from the third volume

Uh⊙∀⊙! There are few reviews for this book! Let me make up the numbers. . .

Clearly newbie writing. Not much else to say, but there is one thing the author really should improve. It is the frequency with which the protagonist's name appears. I personally tested it. The author wrote a chapter of about 3,000 words, and the protagonist's name appeared 77 times. On average, the protagonist's name appeared once in 38 words.