Chronicles of Super Heroes

Leave a comment! The author's ability to dig holes is great, but his ability to fill them is too blunt! The ability to tell stories is great, but the ability to describe plots is terrible! The routine is too obscure... For ordinary readers, they don't want to use their brains too much when reading a book!

Igave the card to Black Star? 😅

Ever since the protagonist returned from the parallel universe, he is not the strongest, so I feel like I have no intention of ordering it.

I feel like the four best volumes I've written right now are The Great Fire in Tiandu, Alliance of Freemen, Predicting the Future, and Parallel World.

It is not easy for the author to write a book, so I will reward you with another 1,000 points. I think progressive protagonists are very good Nowadays, many books are written with modular characters. Why do many life plans fail to keep up with changes It is because as people grow, people will change. So what you do will change. Different combinations of reasons will definitely lead to different results. I hope the author will work hard.

This is a novel that is extremely self-exciting 👍

Anyway, I can see it. The author is a science student, maybe a top student. He is learning and applying it. His physics teacher will probably wake up laughing in his dreams.

The idealized, innocent hero story has the potential to appeal to me, but it's still a bit naive.

I really like this book. It has a good plot and a spiritual core. Really, although it has been a long time since I finished it, I still ask you to click in and take a look if you see it. Maybe you will like it. In addition, I don't know whether the author will read it or not. I request the author to open another novel about people with supernatural powers! ! !

It feels a bit awkward to watch. On the surface it is a world similar to Chinese social structure, but it feels like the author is applying the core of Spider-Man and other Marvel movies. When I thought about it, it had a complete sense of déjà vu in a movie, with no living conditions, no social interactions, and no description of private life. The descriptions in the text were all about developing the plot. There was no breath of life. There was no need for pretentiousness or slap in the face, but you couldn't stop living at all, right? Every day, you were either working as a superhero or on the way to solving crimes?

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

Don't always test on the edge of 404, it's not worth the loss.

Today's update is gone again? 😭

Brother, I think your novel is very dangerous and it is really easy to 404. I suggest you use some Spring and Autumn style of writing next time you write about this kind of subject, Sky Blue Star, Ancient Qin State, everyone should be able to understand it anyway.

Damn, damn, it's nothing like what I thought. It should be that the protagonist comes back and finds that his side is in an unprecedented crisis, then secretly breaks the situation, and finally makes a comeback! ! ! !

Good luck, author, looking forward to the next book.

I feel that in addition to the plot being too obscure, the author has a poor ability system structure. As a result, he has no way to deepen the system when facing the big devil (power vortex) that all ability-based stories will face. As a result, the description of abilities in the later period becomes increasingly vague and difficult to understand. Still using the example you gave, no matter how ridiculous the abilities of Marvel and DC heroes are, they all have corresponding sources and are supported by complete scientific or mysterious theories. Therefore, new things can be added or expanded through in-depth exploration. And these all require manpower, so both DC and Marvel have one editor-in-chief responsible for one character, with a bunch of assistants. The author is too greedy, and the Marvel world has taken decades to structure. As for the plot, my understanding is that a good plot pit should make readers feel that the development of the plot is unexpected, but it is reasonable, otherwise it will appear blunt, full of nonsense, and become dragging.

It's not easy for the author to write a book. I didn't order much later. I'll give you a reward of 1,000 coins so that you can write the book steadily.

I personally came down to test the poison. Fellow Taoists, please wait for news from me. If I don't send a single word for three days, then I have been poisoned to death. Please take my body back to earth for burial.