Carefree in the Red Chamber

It's not much worse than "The Romance of the Bastard" in "The Red Mansion", but the book "The Romance of the Bastard" contains too many things other than the original work, which is disgusting. The writing also stands up to scrutiny, but the latter part is not as serious as the first, and many plot points that could be written are missed. For example, after getting engaged to Daiyu, there were very few emotional scenes between the two, and it felt like there weren't as many scenes as Qin Keqing's.

This is the most beautiful Red Mansion fanfic I have ever read. Both books are fully subscribed and supported, but they are a little short, especially the previous one. Many places could be written in more detail. I hope the author will continue his work. There are not many good books about the harem and even less Red Mansion fanfiction.

Baochai unexpectedly married Jia Baoyu and abandoned the book

Where is the freedom? He almost became a dog to Baoyu. Wife lets others play with her every day

The protagonist is so brainless! A bastard who traveled through time pretended to be in various ways, trying to steal the spotlight with a handsome face. The most stupid thing was that he opened a teahouse to make money. Didn't you know that before the family was separated, all the money he earned would be confiscated? Moreover, you are young and have not achieved such high-profile work such as fame. You are sure to live to adulthood 😰😰😰

Eunuchs are very unpopular... Please update as soon as possible

A special chapter was dedicated to the speech. First of all, there are very few Red Mansions fans, especially Qidian male videos. In fact, the person who bluntly said that he only wanted to save the original woman only saw this one. But, but, but, as a master's student, after only a few years of study, haven't contemporary public order, good customs, and ethics left any trace on the author? Has the protagonist never seen his family's thick genealogy? After reading Chapter 106, the protagonist felt that he wished he could have Twelve Hairpins and three volumes tied to him to carry on the family line. My sister-in-law has been able to use both her brain and her hands for her whole life. Is he really so hungry that the four families will be destroyed quickly? Go to the Jiaofang Division to buy it. As long as the protagonist can be alone at that time, isn't it faster than him? There is no burden yet, and there is no need to worry that when the time comes, this group of people will look at each other and they are all acquaintances, and they will be embarrassed. Really, the writing is passable, but does this story make you feel uneasy, like a stone suddenly appearing on the highway and worrying about overturning. In the end, unless there is another great opportunity for the protagonist's life, he will definitely be tied to the Jia family, even if the emperor comes. So let go of Qin Keqing, Xue Baochai, Sanchun, Shi Xiangyun and others. Xiangling had to rely on her own imagination to get over the hurdle in her heart. After all, maids and the like are easy to say, and those on the official list are only outsiders. After the four families are defeated, they can go to the Jiaofang Division to buy them. How can the rest be gathered in the hands of the protagonist.

The book is a good book. I haven't seriously read any book by Qidian in the past few years since the 16th year of Hanmenrise. Read carefully every word of this book. The writing style is quite good, and the descriptions of various characters are also quite vivid. Here are some comments, but I don't think the author can see them. The emotional lines are too messy. We really don't write about stallion harems now, and many articles cannot be followed up. At that time, we must at least highlight the main line of emotions. I feel that Sister Lin and Sister Baofan don't have many emotional scenes. I don't know how authors who write emotional scenes into prose can condense them.

Trash, just accept a Yangzhou thin horse from a brothel as soon as you come up Have a son as a concubine in your own family, which is not as good as a servant Get a brothel, do you think the feudal ethics are a joke Let you and the brothel background be harmonious and open a harem? Doomed to be restless at home

I think if you want to collect all the Twelve Hairpins, you either have to travel through time and become the emperor, or you become the King of Beijing. This is a status factor. Otherwise, it will not work to become the Jia, Wang, Shi, and Xue families. If you become the children of the Jia family, you will not be able to receive Yuan, Ying, Tan, and Xi. If you pretend to be a member of the Wang family, you won't be able to accept Wang Xifeng. The children of the Chengshi family cannot accept Xiangyun. The Xue family cannot accept Baochai. Another factor is the age factor. The eldest of the twelve hairpins is already a woman (Li Wan, Wang Xifeng, Qin Keqing), so she cannot be too young.