Xuanchen Road

Personally, I think this book is currently divided into three stages. Chapter 1-100: It's very long-winded. In my opinion, the long-winded plot is a small problem. The big problem is that the writing is very long-winded. The plot is originally very flat, and the protagonist has an ordinary experience and an ordinary personality. Coupled with the long-windedness, it is estimated that most people will give up at this stage. I also gave up once at this stage. It can be seen that the poster is not a literary genius, and he is not very good at mathematics. Chapter 200-400: The writing is still quite long-winded, but after the previous foreshadowing, the plot begins to get better, and the protagonist's ordinary character begins to be fleshed out bit by bit. Personally, I feel that he is the most lovable male protagonist of a fairy tale I have ever seen. He is righteous, responsible, and neither self-righteous nor womanly. I picked it up and read it again. Although the author is also absorbing and borrowing some plots, for example, the heroine and the hero obviously imitate ordinary people when they first meet, the author unexpectedly keeps the rhythm steady and always controls his own rhythm while writing. I feel like a stable author. (By stable, I mean the plot, the author's updates are very unstable) Chapter 400-679: The writing is much better, but this is really not the author's strong point. There are also a few bad points, such as the heroine's engagement and so on. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. I personally think that the three elements of the novel, characters, plot, and environment, are all very good. The male protagonist has a normal personality, supporting characters with various experiences, a stable and reasonable plot that is not overly exaggerated and cheating, and a world of cultivation where the road is ruthless and people are affectionate. But the author may not have much talent in writing, but he is very talented in writing novels. For me, this book is quite magical. I got into it somehow. When I came out, I found that I had reached the latest chapter. After thinking about the reason, I think it may be that the cultivators in this book are more flesh-and-blood than other cultivators. They are not "immortals" who do not eat the fireworks of the world, but are just "people" who hope for immortality. They eat and drink the same, and they do not annihilate family ties. There are no mysterious and mysterious insights, only bits and pieces of practice. These points may be in line with the preferences of a 36-year-old person. 😁😁 I have never written so many words to other authors to express my opinions. I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and not give up. As a reader who likes this book, I will do my best to vote for recommendations and monthly votes. Come on

Murong Yu, written in Chapter 139, was at the 7th level of Qi training when the protagonist met her ten years ago, and at the 9th level ten years later. He's always only two levels above the protagonist, right? There are indeed no cheats in this book, but it would be more reasonable to write a cheat for the protagonist. The protagonist's three spiritual roots can be cultivated in the mortal world as fast as the heavenly spiritual roots. Is it because others cannot afford the elixir of one or two thousand spiritual stones? Is Tianlinggen not as high-status as your Three Spiritual Roots? This book has a lot of typos, and the numbers are not very precise. The speed of cultivation is extremely poisonous, so don't waste your time looking at it.

After almost 7 years of writing, I am still building the foundation. The entire universe belongs to you. Luo Chen, who has lived for hundreds of years, was written like an idiot by you. Xuan Yue has not been out of the Huang Sheng Sect for hundreds of years. Most women who practice immortality are like prostitutes, selling themselves to seek medicine. The male protagonist does not need to practice but relies on medicine to advance. All the plots of the protagonist revolve around fishing for spiritual stones and then buying elixirs. He also developed the martial arts skills of Yi Yang Finger and Jin Yong in Iron Clothes Shirt. The protagonist uses a sword, and the only set of swordsmanship is from the mortal world. In a fight, you punch me and I use a sword. You must be able to throw the talisman. After throwing the talisman, the battle ends. Wo Longsheng's "Yue Xiaochai", the heroine Yue Xiaochai only appeared for a few turns, but it is a classic. Luo Chen has only appeared in a few chapters in this book so far. Every time he appears, he acts like an idiot and sells himself out. This is the level of the 3rd update in January.

I like this book very much. It's a bit long-winded at the beginning, but the writing gets better and better at the end. It's clean and tidy, and it gets better and better. Not to mention anything else, support with at least 40 recommendation votes and 1-2 monthly votes every month, and no less than 500 points in rewards. The author, please continue to work hard, I want to see Xiao Yuzi ascend to the fairy world. ✊

The role of the master is a very important supporting role. He has a great bond with the protagonist and has a significant impact on the protagonist's character and behavior in the future development. It is similar to the influence of Dr. Mo on Han Laomo in Mortal. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is the first supporting role throughout the main plot. Since I started reading the first chapter, I have always guessed at which chapter Liu Yu's master will receive the lunch box, because this master is not very qualified and has only the early stage of foundation building and has brought his family to practice. Liu Yu, who is shrouded in the halo of the protagonist, surpasses him all of a sudden. It can be said that it was destined from the beginning. When the protagonist's disciple builds the foundation, it is the time when the master receives the lunch box. Unexpectedly, Master Tang Liang could survive to Chapter 450 and pass away with the image of a great father sacrificing his life to protect his daughter. Although there is not much space to describe it in general, it is ordinary but impressive. The role of a good husband, a good father, and a good master comes to life on the page and is very successfully portrayed. I hope the author will continue his efforts and draw more of these flesh-and-blood supporting characters to form a masterpiece on immortality.

I love reading novels about cultivating immortals, and I have also found a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. They are either cheats or geniuses. I can no longer read this kind of book, because in this kind of book, it is logical for the protagonist to achieve enlightenment, and there is no suspense at all. This kind of plot that easily defeats his peers will only make people feel bored. As for this book, it is real and not pretentious. The protagonist is basically a little Karami. He has a decent appearance and average qualifications, but the opportunities are always good and the operation is very stable. Basically no one can beat them in the early stage, and the fairies will only favor the outstanding ones with both talent and appearance. The protagonist went through a lot of hardships along the way and basically didn't enjoy much. He remembered that he had been working abroad for ten years while practicing Qi. The thin spiritual energy did not support the practice. The other Qi training disciples all lay down and married mortal wives (after all, female cultivators of the same level looked down on male cultivators of the same level) and began to retire. But the protagonist did not change his original intention, was neither humble nor arrogant, and persisted in going on. What is convincing is that the book does not focus on combat effectiveness. The main purpose of cultivating immortals should be immortality and advancement. When selecting exercises, the speed of cultivation and the difficulty of breakthrough are also very important considerations. Therefore, the protagonist gave up part of his combat power from majoring in martial arts in exchange for training speed and low bottlenecks (alleviating a small part of the lack of qualifications). The protagonist is upright and has a bottom line, so his popularity is not bad. After many years of operation, he has close disciples, a mentor he can rely on, a shop, a rare talisman painting skill, and some financial resources, thus acquiring the most lacking combat power. As long as the opportunity is grasped, it is possible for the protagonist to advance. Generally speaking, it is a unique and rare fairy grass in the literature on immortality.

I read the reviews and various recommended books, and they said that the writing in the front was slow, but the writing in the back was very good. I endured the discomfort and read 200 chapters, thinking that now I can finally get better! But when I saw 4.500 Chapters, I still felt that nothing had changed. So I updated about 700 chapters. What's so good about it? I don't think it looks good! 1. There is no main line. For a novel, a story must be exciting. You must have a main line around the story. You can follow many branch lines, but there must be a main line, otherwise it will be too scattered and difficult to attract people. 2. The plot setting is too unflattering. I understand that you want to realize the cruelty, difficulty, etc. Of cultivating immortals, but it must be set like this. The only good master and good friend, you write to death for no reason, write such a little junior sister, and such a villain. It was really frustrating to watch 3. The characters, the characters didn't stand up at all, the portraits were too monotonous, I had no impression at all, and I didn't know any of the protagonist's personality charm.

The author actually wrote this book very well, and did not fall into the old routine of today's popular novels. If the later works are normal, I think it will be a very good fairy novel. However, there is also a big shortcoming. The author's novels are a bit indifferent. The descriptions of the supporting characters are too detailed, and for some things, the entire chapter is used to describe it at once. I think if this problem can be solved earlier, this will be another masterpiece.

The plot is okay, the protagonist has no golden fingers and walks through it step by step. But the author can't distinguish the priorities at all, the writing is watery, and he writes several chapters about the unimportant plot without mentioning the protagonist. He really treats the readers as fools. This book really deserves to be scolded.

Alas, it was sloppy, but it was still sloppy. When I first read this book, I checked the word count (more than 1.7 Million words), and it was updated in 2017. Thinking about the word count, although it is not that many, it took more than five years to write. The book should be almost at the end, so I started reading. This book is very well written. I don't know what other people think of it. I only know that I like it very much. The more I read, the more relaxed I feel, but I also feel more and more worried. The worry is not because of the plot in the book, but because there are fewer and fewer unread chapters, but the progress of the story feels like it is only in the middle stage. I finally read To Be Continued... With trepidation, and then waited for more than a month without seeing any updated chapters. So I went back and checked the previous chapter update times of this book, and I knew that I was still too hasty. The author turned out to be a monthly updater! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

After reading five hundred chapters, I haven't even established the foundation yet, and I've only reached seven hundred chapters. I've already concluded that this book is destined to be The Eunuch in the later stages. Let's talk about the shortcomings first: This book uses a lot of writing to describe the eighteen-line supporting characters, a lot of useless double quotes, a lot of nonsense, every skill and weapon has to be written down during the fight, the names have been introduced in the front, and the rest can be mentioned briefly, which makes people tired. To put it nicely, it can be said that the author pays attention to details and is witty in the characterization of characters and details. At worst, it is indifferent to priority and there is no central idea.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   We have rich descriptions of fighting, training and stories, but it goes to the extreme in the description of some scenery.           ，，，，，，，，，， The author wants to improve the writing style of this book, but sometimes it is necessary to go overboard and not mess around.            ，，(），，(），？ Therefore, the protagonist's novel writing skills also need to be improved. This is an evaluation from the reader's perspective. If I were asked to write, I wouldn't be able to write it!          :，，，，，，， It can be regarded as a relatively novel novel. The slow pace is also one of its highlights. The story and characters are vividly depicted, but the description is not full enough. After all, the author's limited skills can be seen. I hope the author can distinguish the priorities and focus on the main plot. Otherwise, he will focus on the guest and waste a lot of brainpower and writing, and he will not have the heart to create in the later period! Destined to be a eunuch!

After reading nearly 500 chapters, I can probably guess the plot behind it. To be honest, I am a little disappointed. Marrying an ordinary wife can start and end well. It is really the biggest failure to force a coincidence and make it difficult to end.

This book is very well written. It is very well written. When I went down the mountain to do the task, I was on the 5th level of Qi refining. Chapter 488 is about foundation building. On average, one hundred chapters are upgraded to a level. There are a lot of single spiritual roots and double spiritual roots in the article. The single spiritual root failed to take the foundation building pill. The protagonist succeeded with three spiritual roots. It does not abuse the master, but it just writes too much about passers-by. Maybe the author wants everyone to see a vast world and write down everyone's thoughts on life.

This book is the clearest explanation of branch plots or supporting roles I have ever read. Some of the foreshadowings are not buried deeply but just right. I think of reading Xiao Ding's later books and talking about the historical background every day. It is very verbose. Although this book is a bit ink and the plot does not advance quickly, it is indeed very attractive. I hope the author will keep his original intention I wish I can become a god after finishing this book! (PS: The fighting description is very good, although the protagonist feels a bit unfamiliar, haha, maybe he is too weak...)

As long as it is updated every day, it will be in the top ten of the Xianxia Ranking by monthly vote. Can Ichisuke do it? {"NickName":"A wreckage","UserId":224763669}

I particularly like this book. It is simple and unpretentious, with no background, no golden fingers, no awesome family, just a simple life, struggling to build a foundation. There is nothing that the male protagonist must like if he likes him. There is no saying that the male protagonist can learn whatever he thinks about. Support the author DaDa and hope that the author DaDa can update normally!

Although this book is updated very slowly, there must be a reason behind it having such a loyal group of fans. Other mortals write about how the protagonist goes from being ordinary to being awesome. This one is trying to show us a world of flesh and blood. The writing is not about cool writing, but about feelings. The human feelings of the people in the world are sophisticated. Although the immortals are imaginary, the human feelings are real. Although in the initial chapters, there is some delay in trying to make the world realistic. In addition, there is the authenticity of the protagonist, which Goldfinger does not have. Although there are adventures, they are more explainable "coincidences", and all kinds of adventures are based on one's ability. The protagonist's growth is more due to his own efforts and persistence, just like the current "small town problem maker". From this growth process, many of us can see the shadow of our own youth, and we feel more familiar with it.

I have been coming here to check it out every day for four years, just to see if you are writing books seriously every day. To be honest, I want to lock you in a dark room and won't let you out to eat until you write a hundred chapters. If I don't write enough chapters, I'll stir-fry bacon with bamboo shoots.

I decided to give up before finishing the first chapter! The masters in the foundation stage failed to do a good job in flight evaluation, and crashed midway! The reason was the sudden loss of mana due to the injury. Regardless of the logic that injuries will cause the loss of mana, at the beginning of the chapter, Jin Dan is praised as the ancestor of the thousand-year-old sect, and the foundation-building iron must be considered a senior monk. He can't even judge whether he can fly. He's drunk! Unexpectedly, after one thunder, another thunder followed. The body-protecting magic weapon of a foundation-building master is destroyed when dropped. Doesn't it have no power? How did this magic weapon activate? Installed a battery? ! It also comes with artificial intelligence that can independently analyze whether the user is in danger. Isn't it a magic weapon? There are magic weapons that can be broken. Did you fall from outer space? The protective power is simply Max! And what a coincidence, the person happened to be fine, and the magic weapon happened to be scrapped! Do you think the logic master will stop here? Naively, the master of the foundation-building stage who crashed couldn't even deal with ordinary beasts, so he could only wait for death in despair. In one chapter, there were thunders rolling down from the gods. I was so frightened that I had no choice but to hide if I couldn't afford to offend him!

You write 10 years, I am going to read 10 years

It's not easy! 8 Years outside the book to finish the pill, who else spent longer than Liu Yu to complete the pill.

256 Days have passed in 22 years, and 38 chapters have been updated. . . Seriously, the eight chapters are updated every week.

😡 Someone should copy his book and keep it going. I hope it will be impossible for him in this life.

This chapter is really long. One chapter is worth two or three cards. It's good, good, and encouraging. It's 2 chapters in one turn. Chen Sanshu is really strong. He only has two chapters of high-level talismans. If he doesn't admit defeat, Sister Kang really can't do anything to him. Sister Kang doesn't feel that strong. She feels that if Xuanyu faces her in the next round, 82 will open. Sister Kang will only have one talisman left now, and the insects will be consumed. The next round, White Bones VS Scar Girl, Hu Beiyang VS Mysterious Man

Ugh, there's not much free time for amateur writing these days.

The book is in line with my taste, but the update is too slow. Intermittent

No one with any sense would follow this book. I would split it into two parts and say it was well written. But don't chase

Tianshui League currently represents Tianshi Dao (Zhengyiyi) and Hanshui Sect (Nangong Family)... The others are not listed The Kyushu League may currently include Chiyang Sword Sect, Tianhai Sect, and Haoran Sect (possibly)... Others are not listed See if there are any missing ones! Fellow Taoists can add 😁

The book is a good book. There are good and bad chapters in the first 500 chapters. It is not useless to spend a lot of words describing other people. You will find that some settings and character motivations are deeply implanted in your heart subconsciously, but there are still some indiscriminate priorities. It does not mean that you cannot describe others. It is still a bit tiring to describe too much. After five hundred chapters, this problem is basically solved, and the pen and ink are basically concentrated on the protagonist. The benefits of spending a lot of pen and ink in the early stage to describe the worldview begin to emerge. The author has built a rich and colorful world of cultivating immortals, and the protagonist's interpersonal network has been established. You can branch out at will, or you can slowly follow the main line. The detailed world view of this book is actually very different from the traditional mortal stream. There are very few books in the mortal stream that can build a wonderful world of immortality. Most of this kind of books are concentrated in novels about immortality that follow the Shushan Immortal Gourd style. I didn't expect that a novel written by a mortal style could also do this. As a low-level immortal cultivator, the protagonist does not have any golden fingers and is not invincible at the same level. Naturally, there will be no challenges beyond levels. You can clearly feel the hardship of his cultivation. Every level is a strenuous effort. What I appreciate very much is that there is no plot where he breaks through after being locked up in a cave for decades. The protagonist is practicing and wallowing in this immortal society. He needs to complete the sect's tasks every day, draw talismans and sell them to earn spiritual stones every day. Cultivation resources are always in short supply. We watched the protagonist make some small fortunes through some encounters, but he is still thrown into the endless practice, swallowed up easily like a black hole. The sect's help to him is real, and he regards the sect as his home. Here are his friends, disciples, teachers, people who admire him, and people he once admired. This traditional-oriented mortal novel brought me back to the days when I read novels more than ten years ago. It was really good. Except the author updates too slowly.

This book is well written in the early stages. It describes the atmosphere of an ordinary cultivator with poor spiritual roots struggling between heaven and earth in a very unique and innovative way. It makes people feel that it is another masterpiece of Mortal Style. But as time went on and updates became unstable, the quality of the story continued to decline, to the point where it became useless. The author has not dealt with several points well. The first is that the protagonist's talent is very poor, but normal novels with loser protagonists will use cheats or adventures to make the protagonist constantly surpass the NPCs around him; however, this book does the opposite. The protagonist's spiritual progress is slow, and the gap between him and the woman he loves is getting wider and wider. The protagonist encounters far more troubles than miracles, and the readers have been urging them to give the protagonist better treatment and opportunities. The second is that although the emotional plots arranged for NPCs are relatively rare, they do not create any excitement. For example, although the protagonist's junior sister may have had a romantic relationship with the protagonist, she was later deceived by the scumbag and attached to the protagonist again, and the protagonist had to spend a lot of time to take care of her; for example, the protagonist's apprentice was unscrupulous and murdered his fellow disciples, but in the end, he successfully established his foundation safely. A female apprentice of the protagonist becomes a widow directly and has to live with her husband's murderer with her unborn child. These plots are really boring, and the depth is not well explored. It feels similar to the short and bitter love dramas on TV in the past. The third is the protracted, long and boring plot after arriving in the Northland. Although the plot is dense, there are very few climaxes and exciting moments. Even the plot in which the protagonist avenges his brother who was murdered by the casino was written in a sloppy way. The most speechless thing is that the protagonist finally created a wave of fun by trapping a villain NPC, and then came the endless long-term suspicion and persecution of the villain family. The protagonist has been hiding in the base camp like a mouse for many years. This villain family also believes that the protagonist is not the murderer, but just to vent their anger to others (the protagonist spent a while with the villain NPC before his death), they spent a lot of money on the protagonist for many years. There is even a confusing operation such as actively sending the protagonist to the secret realm for trial in the hope that someone can kill the protagonist in the secret realm. This plot is really illogical, but let alone this sick and twisted revenge mentality; the villain family can actually name important characters under their allies to participate in an extremely dangerous secret realm. The protagonist also knows that if he goes in, he will escape death and "for the sake of the clan" secondly, the people in this family have prepared props and bounties for tracking the protagonist, but in the end few people actually go to find the protagonist, only two or three people blindly kill the mouse; thirdly, whenever the protagonist is in danger, the monsters in the secret realm will always directly attack his enemies and leave him alone. These plot designs treat the protagonist as a fool, the NPCs as fools, and the readers as fools. What's even funnier is that after the protagonist comes out of the secret realm, the family still wants to continue to take revenge - making people wonder if the protagonist is some heinous devil who will drop genius treasures if he kills him. Guess what? In the end, I actually brought someone to curse the protagonist and almost succeeded. The protagonist faked his death and hid, then went to another place far away, continuing the routine of not returning to his hometown for many years, and his purpose was actually to make a family hundreds of thousands of miles away relax their vigilance? What's even funnier is that this sect doesn't protect the protagonist, doesn't help the protagonist deal with troubles, or communicate and mediate on his behalf. It just supports the protagonist in faking his death, and treats the protagonist's troubles as his personal grudge, completely ignoring the fact that the protagonist encountered such a tragic incident because he went to the north to work for the sect. I'm speechless. Looking at the intermittent updates, I guess the author himself is no longer passionate.