The Raccoon's Ultimate Evolution

There is an indescribable creature called Sad Wind in the Magic Continent. The protagonist must be careful.

For readers who haven't read this book yet, I would like to remind you that the early stages of this book are quite interesting, but when you get to the El plane, the plot becomes boring (personal feeling). And it's also the beginning of the plot. The author's jokes are a bit off. One cross-dressing boss is enough, and even the male protagonist is dressed as a woman. Even if he dresses as a woman once or twice, he still comes often! In the book review area, I saw the author saying that readers like this book. This is just a joke. Most people just play for fun and will not really like cross-dressing men. It was also written that Xiugira was too close to the protagonist (it was also written that the man dressed as a woman wanted to rape the male protagonist, the author went too far), which made me feel disgusting. I regretted ordering it all. I suggest you not read it if you can't stand it.

This comment only represents my personal opinion How should I put it? It starts with a very warm and healing style, which warms the heart. Even if there are some troubles, it will make people feel that kind of deep friendship. This feeling is great, but the Chinese language is not good, but it is like starting a group to fight a dungeon. When you can kill the big boss immediately, the last person left has the feeling of clenching your fists and full of hope. Later, everything that Lotta experienced made people feel like digging through a mountain with a shovel. It was too heavy, especially after signing the soul contract. Then from the protagonist's point of view, you saved me, of course I will save you, but I can't lose my freedom. Once I lose my freedom, life is worse than death. So the protagonist's reaction is reasonable. If we insist on why the system did not remind the protagonist, we can see that the system basically only answered after the protagonist asked, or it happened, and the protagonist did not ask because the situation was urgent. From Alice's perspective, the protagonist is just a smart little monster. Although trust has been established, in the end it is still a weak monster that is hunted by humans (what I mean here is that there is no difference between Lotta being weak and a weak monster being hunted by humans). So from this point of view, with this contract of sharing joys and sorrows, Lotta is already very favored. Just like most people's attitude towards pets, I kept you because I am interested in you, and I still want freedom? At that time, Alice had no other choice, so I shared the joys and sorrows with you, but freedom was impossible. It can be said that both the protagonist and Alice reacted in line with reality, and this tit-for-tat approach where both parties are right is the most uncomfortable. Even if one of them is purely malicious, it won't make people heartbroken. After all, it's just a bad guy who has dirty water poured over him. This situation in the article is the most distressing Then, that Li or something (can't remember the name). It makes sense for his best friend to kill the protagonist after his soul was damaged by a special weak monster. Best friend's perspective: My best friend made so many sacrifices to keep you, and even signed a soul contract with you. Instead, you hurt my bestie's soul. Even if a little monster did such a thing, it would be an advantage for you to kill you. How can World of Warcraft reject the soul contract if it doesn't know about it? The prince's daughter is angry and thinks she is nobler than the monsters. She doesn't care if she is angry. Anyway, it's just a monster. It's enough to be obedient. Keeping you alive is a gift. So this is what worries me the most. All correct, but the result is a bad end. It's really super uncomfortable I still think this technique of boosting first and then suppressing is awesome, but it's really uncomfortable. If possible, it would be better for such a cruel plot to pass quickly Finally, if the author wants to make changes, it is a better choice to improve on the original outline. It is best not to change the outline unless it is absolutely necessary. That would be a too big a change, the writing style will be difficult to control, and the time is too short, and the idea will be rushed. Final point: This comment only represents my own opinion If anyone disagrees, please don't troll me.

I always remember reading an interstellar book before. The protagonist is a fox with a system, and then he clicks on the tentacle chicken based on the system. It is very fancy, very pornographic and violent It is an eye-opener for me in the past. I have never forgotten it. I went through changing mobile phones and other things in the middle. In the end, I couldn't find the book and I couldn't remember the name. Today, I searched on Baidu through keyword searches on a whim. Then I saw that the author's name was very familiar, so I came to Qidian to search. When I looked at the comment area, it was really true! Finally found you! Author, where have you been 😭😭 No matter where the author has been, let me keep an eye on him. If there is news about the author, kick me 😭😭

I'm here to sign in, after all, this book was my memory

I really can't stand it when I see the protagonist actually having sex with his own transgender brother. I don't know why people like this disgusting plot. . .

When will Fox's Super System be released? I've ordered all of that book.

I suspect the author is a young man🤨

Where did Chapters 21 to 24 go? What I watched was a pirated version?

In God's Game, does the author still remember... Ah!