My Years Leading the Fox Clan

The author has a strong background! Did I read the cover wrong? Or did I see it wrong? Or I got it wrong!

(Super long book review) I have finished reading this book. In order to hope that the author will continue to pursue his dream of writing, I will publish a long review. I hope the author will have the patience to read it. 1. About the beginning of this book: I can only use two words to describe the beginning of this book: perfect. The beginning of the novel is absolutely the most important thing. If the first part is not written well, readers will not listen to your explanations such as "the second part is very exciting", and they will give up directly. Unlike other novels, which start with a calm description or a large section of worldview information, which makes people impatient to read, this novel immediately puts the reader into conflict at the beginning, which is very attractive to read. This is also my favorite opening mode. Moreover, the transition to a calm plot and world description after the conflict is also very natural, not only not abrupt, but also explained clearly. 2. Questions about the textual basis of this book: Well, it feels a bit too sudden to criticize immediately after praising... But this book did give me such a sudden feeling. A perfect beginning made me feel very comfortable, but within a few chapters I was going crazy: it was full of typos, inappropriate sentence breaks, line breaks, and occasional punctuation errors. Maybe ordinary people don't care about this, but I am an obsessive-compulsive disorder! I know that you should try to avoid long and difficult sentences in novels, and I can see that the author wants to shorten the long sentences, but if you insist on adding punctuation in the middle of a smooth sentence, it still looks awkward. Solution: I strongly recommend that authors deal with such basic problems as typos! It's not difficult to do this, you just need to save some manuscripts and review them before publishing! 3. Questions about character creation: Well, all I can say about this is that only the protagonist looks like a real person and has a sense of immersion. The other characters are basically very facial makeup and have no characteristics. Even if they have characteristics, they are just imposed clichés. As for those queens, the character settings are so broken that they feel like they were conceived purely for the sake of comedy. Although this is not impossible, there are so many in one book, and Melissa is still the main supporting character, which is really... Well, although it is not impossible to write this way, it is really difficult to control this way. Solution: Don't be afraid of trouble and give the main characters more ideas about their past. It's not just a general idea of ​​what they did at a certain place at a certain time, so they have some outstanding words and deeds. For example, if a person has been helped by others, so he likes to help others. Such a generalization seems a bit hasty. At least the specific details of the event that had the greatest impact on his life should be carefully conceived, at least to the point where it can be described in words. For example, Fei'er Jiu'er is obviously someone so close to the protagonist, but she hasn't gone over to him. It's really awkward to watch.

When I was in junior high school, I found this book when I was looking for excerpts of erotica. Now that I think about it, I feel nostalgic about it.

The development of a book I read 4 years ago is similar in concept to yours. They are all farming, they are pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, and they are all making all kinds of dirty jokes not long after the beginning. But that book got stuck after about 100 chapters. . . My advice is, think about what you want to say. And then work around that theme. My evaluation of Chapter 27 is that removing Chapter 27 will not have any negative impact on the overall reading experience of the novel, and may even have a positive bonus.

I am finally sure of one thing, regardless of gender, 90% of the people in this book are gentlemen, and the remaining 10% are perverts.

The heroine's crotch is basically rotten and extremely poisonous

Ntr, the twin lolita have been killed by at least ten thousand people, and the bull solver is nothing compared to this.

The situation is like this, everyone knows that Dian Niang has been going crazy recently, and then I saw that some chapters were eaten, so I had no choice but to watch pirated versions. Therefore, I would like to urge the author to quickly apply for Dian Niang to spit out the eaten chapter. If the author sees it, please take action as soon as possible. First: Chapter 55 Returning to the tribe and being eaten. I will explain the rest while reading, welcome to add.

Does the author also write pornographic books? What would I read without your pornographic books? Other people's pornographic books look boring.

Too much YY. Within a few chapters, the queen found out that her son had been taken away. The queen was not angry yet, and the whole world was surrounding the mentally retarded protagonist.