Naruto's Palm Shocks the World

Yan Feng? The name is too inconsistent. Why can't I come up with a more reliable name even though I have decided to write a book?

I want to complain about the Chuunin Exam. The protagonist, a person who uses the limited ability of blood inheritance, can actually become a Chunin in the Chunin Exam. I am speechless. This is a ninja exam, not a battle in the ring. ←_← The author obviously did not understand the situation. This kind of person who uses the meat ball fruit to carry it out can also become a Chunin. . . . . . It wasn't war time at that time.

The protagonist killed Senju Toyobayashi. Kato wasn't dead at this time. His feelings couldn't be weak and he was still laughing. How little did Tsunade take the Senju tribe seriously?

To be honest, the protagonist has no male friends in Konoha. Even Gai can hang out with everyone. Moreover, the seal is really unreasonable. The elders sealed the protagonist without considering how to live in the future. He basically has no chakra and cannot go to school. The protagonist is dead. The protagonist ran to Tsunade and said, "Teach me to become stronger. I don't want to die like the rope tree. I think it's too much for Tsunade to kill him. From the beginning, he made his ability so strong. Do you plan to be a Jonin in one year, a Kage in two years, and a Super Shadow in three years?"

I found that this book does have some poisonous points. It always emphasizes one or two female protagonists and several girls to socialize with. This is fine. After all, everyone will have friends of the opposite sex. However, in many places, some warm or ambiguous scenes are specially written, which makes people want to complain. In the first few chapters, it was written that Tsunade's naked body was accidentally seen. There was no further description of this ambiguous scene except to highlight it because of the need of the scene. When going to save Kushina in more than sixty chapters, it was specifically pointed out that when Kushina accidentally knocked down the protagonist, she blocked Kushina's mouth with her hand and was about to kiss the protagonist, and also specifically pointed out that she felt Kushina's breasts at this time. The even more sinister thing was that Minato next to him was lucky that he did not kiss. This sentence clearly shows that the author is giving Kushina to Minato. It's like you had a girl and then turned around and gave it away. Also, the relationship between Kushina and Minato as mentioned above was normal, but it was so sudden that the protagonist was asked to go rescue people with Minato. When did the relationship between Kushina and Minato improve? It would have been better for the author to mention it casually in the previous article than to come out suddenly like this. This operation felt like it was shoehorned in for Naruto's birth. In fact, the reason for reading doujins is very simple. I just want to get involved in my favorite anime. As long as the scenes are reasonable, it will make people feel more involved. However, due to the bad treatment of the female protagonist in this book, I really can't stand it. Maybe the later part of the book will be more exciting, but I really couldn't keep up with the rhythm of giving away a girl in the early part of the book, so I canceled it first.

What kind of gadgets are there? The fruit is obviously activated by physical strength and requires a lot of chakra. Author, were you sleepwalking when you watched One Piece? You don't even know what devil fruit you're writing about.

His talent is not as good as Uzumaki Kushina and Ushiha Miyuki, come on, these two are geniuses. And that seal, his grandmother sealed it because she didn't want him to be a ninja! ! ! Naruto is not a safe world, so how do you think civilians are safer with so many orphans?

Whether in Naruto or One Piece, as long as you are touched by the Meat Ball Fruit, you will basically lose. Because it can bounce away fatigue, it can bounce away physical strength, which means it can bounce away your strength. If you are more imaginative, you can pop up your chakra or fruit abilities.

I would like to ask the bear whether the negative effects in the body can be eliminated after the fruit awakens, or can it be done from the beginning?

In fact, after watching the original version of One Piece, I really want to know how the Meat Ball Fruit can be developed like this, and why there are no such awesome things as the Bounce Fruit, the Bouncy Fruit, and the Bounce Fruit.

The meat ball fruit can bounce away fatigue and pain, but the protagonist doesn't even use it when exercising? ? ? ?

You may have made a mistake, Devil Fruit users are not afraid of water or sea water, but there is a special substance in the sea in the world of One Piece that can restrain Devil Fruit users. The crystallization of this special substance is the Sea Tower Stone or the white clouds that vaporize to form empty islands.

The author's penis was cut off? ? ?

(I like partial harem) I thought it was good at first, but then I saw Kushina was caught. Then when I interacted with Minato, I realized something was wrong. If you don't accept it, don't flirt, it looks disgusting.

I hope it won't be written as a harem novel.

Bounce, bounce, bounce away crow's feet. This is a story about traveling to Naruto to buy cosmetics.

I feel like it's a bit too much for the protagonist to kill the water ninja from the Senju family.

What exactly is that lineage?

You changed a lot of things, which gives people a messy feeling.

It doesn't look very good... Maybe it's just a personal taste, so I give it three votes for recommendation, and I'll forget about it with you all!

Chapters are missing, Chapter 11 is gone, Chapter 16 is gone.

Has anyone thought about Fruit for Everyone? Although this fruit has no special abilities, the human body itself is a treasure house. Just like Kaiti Technique, the Renren Fruit can increase intelligence and physical strength. With these two, it will be faster to learn ninjutsu, and with physical strength, chakra will not be lost. Has anyone experienced 100% brain utilization? Has anyone achieved 100% muscle development? If you open the eight gates of the body, it will only be 80 to 90%.

Why haven't you thought about Kushina and Mikoto being the heroines? It's great to live like this!

Why don't you use the gloomy wound bomb? That's a bug-like ability

The bears from the King's Seven Martial Arts have come out and are so awesome.

Chapter 1 and 2 mentioned that the protagonist traveled through time in a real city, and if the protagonist traveled to the world of Naruto, where did the protagonist's meat ball fruit ability from One Piece come from?

To be honest, I have never been able to figure out a question. Since the sharingan will gradually lose its light when it reaches the kaleidoscope, and it needs the kaleidoscope of a relative, then if they exchange eyes, they can turn one joy into two joys, and the two joys will turn into more joy, but why do they kill each other? . .