The Arrival of the Sacred Tree of Fire Shadow

The reading experience is extremely poor. The author is too good at talking about other things. He digresses for most of the chapter and then returns to the previous topic.

The biggest drawback is that the plot is too entangled. The protagonist has changed Naruto to this point, but he still maintains a flimsy plot? It feels like the only way for the protagonist to maintain the plot is to commit suicide before proposing an economic strategy at the age of three←_←

If at the age of eleven or twelve. It's okay to speak of economic strategy. But how old are you? You can do this.

I'm speechless after reading two chapters. Naruto should be written well, and don't use any inexplicable ancient elements that make it look nondescript. The most speechless thing is that the sacred tree is forcibly classified into the prehistoric system. This thing was brought and planted by Otsutsuki. To put it bluntly, it is the biological weapon of the Otsutsuki clan. This must be forcibly classified into oriental elements. What a deformed desire this is. Is the author Korean? What should everyone say is related to their country?

Personally, I think the author is trying to make up for Naruto, which is better than thinking that he has entered the palace. After all, I want to continue reading 😁😁

After reading the resume series, I suggest the author make some changes.

This book is actually the foundation work of Naruto fandom in ancient times. Many of the basic settings of today's Naruto fandom originated here. For example, the classification of levels: genin, chunin, jounin, shadow level, super shadow level, and six paths level originated here.

It's really rubbish. Time travel is the biggest golden finger, and it's a damn jade dish. Why don't you become an immortal?

This book is no longer a eunuch. It's been a month and it hasn't been updated.

The emperor's idea coincides with Xiao Hei's. Xiao Hei also thinks that Wood Release cannot be the blood stain limit of the two chakra attributes of water and earth, but the blood stain elimination of the three chakra attributes of water, earth and yang. After all, Xiao Hei and I have always thought about it when watching Naruto. I have thought about it, among the Hokage, if we do not include the Immortal Technique, Bloodstained Snare, Seeking Jade and Samsara Eye, the only one that can barely keep up with Wooden Release in terms of power is Chendun, but there is no reason that Chendun has already been eliminated by Bloodstained , Mudun is not, and the survival rate of transplanted Mudun bloodstained limits is incredibly low. Even if the transplant is successful, it will still suffer severe side effects (you can tell by looking at Danzo's dog-like face). Judging from these signs, Mudun It is absolutely impossible to be as simple as the bloodstain limit. If we comprehensively compare the ability and power of Chendun, Mudun, which far exceeds the Chendun in terms of power and ability, cannot be the bloodstain limit, so it can only be eliminated by the bloodstain.

Training at the age of one, genin at the age of two, chunin at the age of three, jounin at the age of four, Kage at the age of five, punching six paths at the age of six, and kicking the Uchiha class is really amazing😤😅😅

So what, is it because the official plot is about to start and I don't know how to write it, so I'm pretending to be dead?

He has chuunin strength at the age of two 😥

I haven't finished the free chapter yet, so why am I a eunuch? Are you a little sorry for the audience? Didn't even leave a message to explain.

It's been 3 years since I graduated from high school

A fantasy novel covered in two-dimensional skin

I thought that only those who could write well could write millions of words, but now I see that there are people who write millions of huge pieces of crap that are full of loopholes.

The concept is very good, the setting is very good, and the story is very good. The only thing I can't stand is why the author always uses the author's perspective to reason about some settings of the original work. Every time the author's self-inference makes the story very uncomfortable for the reader, you have told the story very immersively, and the reader has fully entered the story to enjoy the plot, but your author's perspective infers many truths and doubts in the original novel. Sorry, every fan who likes Naruto has his own preferences and understanding. First of all, your reasoning may not be correct. Secondly, your reasoning makes readers uncomfortable and unacceptable. Thirdly, tell your story well. What everyone wants to see is your conception, your new interpretation of Naruto. If you think the original work is suspicious or unclear, you can tell the story directly and arbitrarily using your own ideas. Don't always speculate and question. Readers will follow your story. They don't need to understand or not to jump out of the story and pat their foreheads and wonder whether it is really like that. Then when I read your story, I still need to re-grow my emotions.

I don't know if the author wrote it too early, but it is not recommended for book friends who have read Naruto in 2023 or later, because this book starts with the origin of the sacred tree in Naruto, about Kaguya Otsutsuki, and some history of the ninja world. As long as you read most of Naruto's content, you can't help but complain about it, but there are too many to complain about, so I'll remind you here. Also, let me complain here about the comments from readers who feel that because they are writing about Naruto fandom, they can arbitrarily tamper with the origin of the sacred tree, the origin of Kaguya Otsutsuki, and the history of the ninja world. You said that if the fandom is written like this, why doesn't the author's name of Naruto be changed to yours? In other words, if you have changed it like this, don't say that you are writing a Naruto fanfic. That is called original fantasy, and it is considered a creation. This is not about the writing and plot, it is just a complaint about Naruto fans not being Naruto.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the time is a bit wrong. The first generation didn't even die when Tsunade was still young, so how do you think the era of the rope tree is the era of the second generation? The second generation has been in power for more than ten or twenty years, right? Moreover, the death of Naoki is probably due to a greater internal conflict - for the sake of the position of Hokage, it is not a single lineage.

After reading a few pictures, I suddenly saw that Asura himself couldn't use Wood Release. I laughed. If you said that Indra couldn't do it, it's true. Asura didn't know how to use Wood Release? Then what did the two brothers use when they fought?

In fact, I think wood is not that powerful. The four major elements of creation, earth, water, fire and wind, have no place for wood. Fire can burn wood, water can flood wood, and earth. If a mountain is pressed down, what kind of wood can resist it? And without water, wood is Dry wood, separated from the soil, has no power. Even if it is wind, if the wood is more beautiful than the forest, the wind will destroy it. Moreover, the five elements are mutually reinforcing and restraining each other, so there is no need to regard Wood Escape as so powerful and superior to other escape techniques. . . .

Come on, even though it's a bit too cool and awesome. But it's still acceptable. I look forward to the author's description of the war.

Just feel good. Why do you need such strong logic? Kishimoto's own Naruto logic is not rigorous. Come on, the author. I am optimistic about you and recommend it to you every day!