Naruto: Lingtian Kendo

Konoha War Orphans The fourth generation is at the same time There are more battle descriptions The writing style is better The plot is too vulgar and the emotional line is strange The details of Naruto cannot be delved into The power system has collapsed Uchiha Black Yun Hokage + Yun LOL A popular article There is basically no excess Daily life is all ** The whole process of fighting and killing Emotions are pure nonsense A pure story! Naruto that focuses on high-level combat descriptions? Fans

I read it after reading recommendations from other novels, but I couldn't stand it after about ten chapters. Personally, I feel that the author is suitable for writing fantasy novels, but the fan fiction can be embarrassing no matter how you read it.

Hello everyone, I am the author's boyfriend. I got the author pregnant through surgery, but I had no money for her to have an abortion, so I had to write a novel called "Transformation Gamer". I hope everyone will support me, thank you!

In fact, many heroes in the League of Legends are quite scary, not as weak as those in the Arena. The most typical ones are Death Song, Dragon King, Eternal Hunter Twins, Astral Goddess, Star Mother before the Fall, Judgment Angel, Fallen Angel. Among them, Dragon King and Bard are the most terrifying in terms of their power. They can destroy planets. I don't understand why so many novels think that heroes are weak. . . . Compared with the Dragon King, the Earth Exploding Sky Star is like heaven and earth. The Dragon King truly created the stars.

Has the author actually watched Naruto? I'm so embarrassed about the level classification. There is no such thing as a Kage level. Kage is the code name of a village leader. Many jounin have the strength of a Kage, but they are still jounin like this. Don't divide it into Kage levels. It's really embarrassing. I thought it was a fantasy.

The protagonist has no brains. A person from a foreign village is so pretentious. He is not from the village. He has some strength and can't help but come out like a clown. He can't hide at all. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would not be alive Chapter 2

A good Naruto fan was turned into a fantasy novel by you, and it was all just a slap in the face. . . . Very poisonous

A loser suddenly becomes stronger. It would be fine if he awakened from blood stains, but where did your super swordsmanship come from? He was taken away as a spy in a matter of minutes.

I feel that since the protagonist cannot refine chakra, it is simply designed to be unable to refine chakra, and the system does not need it. He only relies on swordsmanship and body skills to fight. After working hard to learn the knowledge, knowledge, color, and armed color, he is very passionate.

I have only read the first chapter. Secondly, I only represent my own opinion. Thirdly, I don't know if it is the third golden chapter. First, this may be a fantasy novel with the shadow of fire, and I am talking about possibility. The second beginning is really the usual opening of fantasy novels, for example, everyone despises you, everyone laughs at you..., You're drunk. The third pig's foot is not a disciple of a big family, but he starts to ridicule that there is no faction, just an orphan of other village chiefs. There is no one in the Fourth Konoha Village who can't cultivate chakra and start ridiculing it. After all, ordinary people make up the majority. In addition to being talented, ninjas are just the nature of the family. Fifth, a child without chakra is not even qualified to go to the battlefield, let alone be used as cannon fodder. I laughed as I cultivated chakra in order to survive. Might as well say it's more of the same for strength. The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth. Sixth, this is purely my question. What are the three golden chapters? If you don't want to persuade them to quit, you can't explain the origin of the pig's feet, the power system and so on. Wouldn't that be the end of it? Seventh, I also admire the author (as long as it is more than three chapters) because I have also written a novel and even the first chapter is not as good as the first three chapters. Maybe it is because of my lack of writing skills.

The protagonist's name is really old-fashioned. I haven't seen names like Ling Tian, ​​Long Aotian, Ye Feng etc. For many years.

I vomited when I saw the third chapter. You also reported to Danzo that your sister's Konoha hasn't started World War II in thirty years. Where did Danzo get his head and hands?

I was confused when I saw the sword's power. Everyone else knew the key point...

The protagonist and Matt Dai are still in the ninja school in Konoha 30? Matt Dai is in the same class as White Fang, and Kakashi was born in Konoha 34. . .

I'm curious, although the Sword Master is called the Sword Master, doesn't he use a sword? Kill someone with a sword?

Damn, the female lead is called Huo Wu. She appears in the show every minute, and I think of Huo Wu Tornado for no reason!

See the title of the book. . . I just want to enter the comment area to see how badly this book has been criticized 😁 For an author with such a fantasy title, why don't you just write fantasy? What kind of fanfic can you write?

Typical Holy Mother Article: You, a foreigner, risk your life for a Konoha person? ?

Typical Holy Mother Article: You, a foreigner, risk your life for a Konoha person? ?

Protagonist: Naruto has the Nine-Tails plug-in, Sasuke has Itachi the protector, I have a system but it's not too much 🙂

Daily poisoning, I couldn't stand it after reading seventy chapters. The world never revolves for one person, and the protagonist of this book is the center of the world. No sense of immersion at all.

Conspiracy is conspiracy, but White Fang really chose to die on his own. Others' treatment of White Fang was nothing more than eliminating a competitor in advance for the position of Hokage. When he was reviled by the whole village, their goal had been achieved. There was no need to let White Fang die, especially when Konoha was surrounded by enemies and was in danger of overthrowing.

There are too many flaws. If you can't refine chakra, you can't even get into the ninja school 🔨