Records of Daoist Martial Immortals

Having read so many messy cultivation novels on Qidian, this one is the most to my taste. The writing is also very good. I hope the author won't give up because of the current success. As long as they stick to their style and keep updating, I believe they will eventually reap the rewards.

The author's descriptions of the atmosphere are too brief, and I kept forgetting things as I read, having to go back to the beginning to look them up. Then, there's no reference point for defining the characters' strength. It's unclear who's strong and who's weak, how strong or weak they are, the extent of their power level, how much their power has increased, and how far they are from the next…

First and foremost, the reason why you're not popular, author, is that long-time readers first look at the chapter titles. If they're too difficult or hard to understand, requiring guesswork, nobody will read them. As a 10-year veteran reader, I know others wouldn't waste their time commenting here. Read more classics like *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*; that's a true classic.

Doesn't the protagonist feel aggrieved? How can one repay kindness with kindness, and not evil with kindness? How can there be such a person? Yu Zhu tricked the protagonist, yet he not only didn't kill her, but also saved her and left her his demon core. If the one who was unconscious was the protagonist, would Yu Zhu have killed him?

The protagonist's foundation was damaged, leaving him with only 48 years of lifespan. Normally, he could just focus on cultivation, but then he encounters two women. Within a few chapters, he gets into a fight because of them, loses 24 years of his lifespan, is hit with 70 copper rods, and is imprisoned for 5 years… 😅 And this is only a month after he entered the sect…

Seeing the protagonist get knocked unconscious again and sent to the East Blue... I'm so tired. Let's talk about this novel. So far, the writing is fluent, the plot is coherent, and there are no major flaws. There are a few reasons why I found it tiring to watch. 1. Although the protagonist claims to be a chivalrous hero, this isn't explored much in the plot.

I looked at it from all angles, but it lacked originality; it felt a bit like reading a wuxia novel. The author just plagiarizes, treating readers like idiots, and is likely just poorly written. Anyone who's survived decades in the martial arts world is a seasoned veteran. But the author, or perhaps the protagonist, keeps making silly mistakes. It's hard to tell who's the fool.

After reading a few chapters, I can tell the author truly understands classical novels. The fluent and engaging vernacular style is impressive, and I should learn from you. Thumbs up and I'm off!

The table of contents is off-putting; kudos to the author for their hard work!

It's a very good book, somewhat reminiscent of *The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber*, and the protagonist's personality and experiences are quite similar to Zhang Wuji. However, I gradually couldn't continue reading the second half; there were too many messy ensemble characters and too many stories, making it tiring to read. I almost gave up before the Southern Frontier War was even over.