Records of Daoist Martial Immortals

After reading so many articles about cultivating immortals with messy starting points, this one by the author is the most to my liking. The writing style is also very good. I hope the author will not give up because of the current results. As long as he sticks to his own style and keeps updating, I believe there will always be gains.

The authorThe author's description of the realm is too brief, and I forgot to read it before. Then there is no reference for defining the strength of the characters. I can't feel who is strong and who is weak, how strong is strong, how weak is weak, how much restraint is, how much the skill has increased, and how far away from the next realm it is. These questions were not written clearly, and I was confused during the fight. This person looked very strong, but why was he killed, or the protagonist's strength fluctuated up and down. Then there is the problem of magic weapons. There is no difference between ordinary weapons, magic weapons, and spiritual treasures. One controversial point is the two sects of Tianshifu and Dishifu. Tianshifu has high requirements for qualifications. It is understandable that there are few disciples with high cultivation level. Then Earthshifu does not have such restrictions, and it is in charge of casting spirits. No matter how low the resource conversion efficiency is, it is impossible for there to be only one big cat and only two or three kittens, right? Compared with the strength of the demon clan, two of the ten sects are so good. How did they drive the demon clan out in the first place? (Thanks to the Tianshi Mansion, it is still the main force in exterminating demons.) How could the Second Mansion protect the family business before? It's been ten years since you entered Taoism, and gods and humans live longer, so why can't we maintain the sustainable development of our sect? Does the sect only rely on a big, immovable turtle shell to protect its path? Let's talk about this first. "The Netherworld" (probably this one) is an old book, but the writing style is very good. It is similar to this book. Although the writing is very depressing, the details are delicate and the plot layout is reasonable. The author can learn from it.

First of all, the first step, the author, the reason why you are not popular. First, the first step for old readers is to read the chapter names. They are too difficult to understand and difficult to understand. They can even be guessed, and no one will read them at all. As a bookworm for 10 years, others will not waste time by commenting here. Read more of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. That kind of is a classic. The protagonist must kill decisively. You can be weak in the front, but you have to change it, otherwise readers will be lost. Chapter names The words should be as concise and powerful as possible. Don't always use 2 words, 4 words or the same number of words. There should be 1-5 words, such as auctions, Annan Market, Thirty Thousand Miles Battle Royale - Part 1, and the heroine's stuff, the fairy tale, try to arrange it in the golden elixir and Nascent Soul stage, and arrange it in advance. Those disgusting plots that are unable to protect and the villain are not good to watch. Speechless, try not to arrange the tsundere young lady, which is disgusting and unreasonable.

Don't you feel aggrieved by pig's feet? How to repay kindness with kindness? How could there be such a person? Yuzhu traps the pig's trotters, but the pig's trotters not only don't kill her, but also save her and leave the demon pill to her. If the coma was caused by the pig's trotters, would Yuzhu kill the pig's trotters? Jin Taoist helped Pig's Feet and gave many pertinent suggestions, but Pig's Feet was smart and always on guard. Wu Sanshun killed a man, threw the pig's feet off his boat and ran away. Did the pig's feet still pray to him? Damn it, the more I watched it, the more annoyed I became, and I wanted to watch it again, but all my orders were gone. The pig's feet are really troubled, and they are so cruel that they are not suitable for Internet articles. They look like the little dragon girl being fucked by the dragon knight, and Yang Guo happily takes over. Maybe it's suitable for physical books to be used in TV series

The protagonist's foundation was damaged and he had a total lifespan of 48 years. Originally, there was no way to practice peace of mind, but then he met two women. Within a few chapters, because these two women started fighting, he lost 24 years of his life, received 70 copper sticks, and was imprisoned for another 5 years... 😅 I've only been here for a month, okay...

I saw the protagonist was knocked unconscious again and sent to the East China Sea. I was so tired Let's talk about this novel So far, the writing is smooth and the plot is smooth. There are no flaws I personally feel tired in a few ways 1 Although the protagonist wants to be chivalrous and righteous, there is not much description in the plot. Instead, he is always involved in one conspiracy after another. The protagonist's His personality is a bit vague and can only be summarized as decent. He is not responsible for intelligence or force. To be honest, if Qi Yuduo was not arranged as a supporting role, I would have no problem 2. The villain's conspiracy is more successful than failed. As a result, there are not only many moles on the right side, but also often frustrated when facing villains 3. When it comes to many moles, I now see a character or The sect suspected that they were moles 4 There are some problems with the setting of female characters. Mu Xueqing and Liu Yinhuan both have the temperament of a young lady, which is not very likable and conflicts with the setting 5. There are too many characters in the opening chapter and the description is short. The names are somewhat similar. My memory is not very good. I read quickly and often forget this character. Or maybe I got this character confused 6 I still can't remember which of the ten most decent people are, what methods they practice, and what characteristics they have 7 The protagonist's brain seems a little unclear and everything is an afterthought, especially the plot of the nameless mental method. He dares to practice unknown mental methods 8 The plot arrangement is too tight and there is no time to breathe.

I read it again and again, but there was nothing new. It was a bit like reading a book about martial arts: The Travels of the Knight. Moreover, the author only knows how to copy and treats the readers as mentally retarded. It is more likely that the author is of poor quality. Anyone who has been around for hundreds of years must be a veteran if he survives. But the author or the pig's feet are always cute. I really don't know who is stupid. In today's online world, authors should keep pace with the times and stop copying stupidly. Readers have read too much.

After reading a few chapters, the author is someone who has taken classical novels into his heart. It is not easy for him to speak fluently without being offensive. I have to learn from you. Like a flash person.

The catalog persuades me to quit, thank you to the author for your hard work!

It's very interesting, a bit like "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Sword", and the protagonist's personality and circumstances are similar to Zhang Wuji's. But in the second half, I gradually couldn't stand it anymore. There were too many messy group portraits and too many stories, which made it look tiring. The battle in Southern Xinjiang has not ended yet and I can't stand it any longer. It's that feeling when you know it's a good book but can't read it. I have a story to tell. I am a bookworm of ten years. I personally like the first half of this book very much. I rank Xianxia first. I feel it is more exciting than a mortal.