The Legend of the Magician Raphael

This book is written with great care, but for a novice like me, the detailed settings and rich content are praiseworthy advantages, but the screen is full of exclamation marks, which seriously affects the atmosphere of the writing, and is inconsistent with the tone of the actual characters, making the reading experience very poor. I understand that some authors now want to use exclamation points to enhance the atmosphere and create a sense of excitement (of course, it is not ruled out that some people do this unintentionally), but for most white people, inexplicable exclamation points are really poisonous. I don't quite understand the author's positioning of this book. Game+Fantasy comes with its own filters, and there are many settings in the early part of the prologue. Usually the people who click on it are Laobai, and your book is becoming more and more biased towards Xiaobai in terms of the thirty chapters I have read... If you're going to write nonfiction, fantasy really isn't for you. If you want to write a more orthodox book like Amber Flow, correcting the misuse of exclamation marks is really what you must do...

The author's writing style is very good, and the plot has no flaws, but the details are not very rigorous. Such as the blackmail in the goblin shop, even the temple knights cannot blackmail at will, or in other words, a positive god cannot engage in blackmail. However, the mission of 3 gold soles purchased 6666 gold soles of equipment. Even if the price is half, the price is 3333, which means more experience. You can't do it like this. When I saw the 3-gold mission earlier, I wanted to say that the author didn't write down the economy very well. Later, 6666 immediately appeared. You write a silver or a copper, otherwise you will have another white crystal coin, amethyst coin, magic crystal coin later... And it is even more unimaginable that the goblins accepted the blackmail. A store that sells black market items must have a backend or someone to rely on. To be blackmailed out of goods worth thousands of gold coins just by looking at the badge. This clerk's IQ is too low. The forces who dare to rob the gem caravan will kneel down when they see the temple. The Temple of Glory does not have to be so poor. You can just say that the price of 6 gold soles is not charged. This is really too 6666 The world of the novel created by the author's imagination can have any kind of magical and incredible abnormality. This is very reasonable, but the author is like a creator god. He must create a world that is based on the author's imagination and has basic logic and self-consistency. Otherwise, the world will easily collapse and affect the reader's experience. I hope the author can do better. This writing has the foundation to become a god!

I didn't dare to watch anymore when I saw my aunt giving oral to the protagonist.

College house number: 582393986! (It seems that numbers cannot be used, if I remember...) The secret code to pass the level is in the latest chapter... Welcome all little magicians to join us! 🤭🤭🤭

I haven't finished the first volume, but I read the reviews before reading it. I can accept the minor points, but the author has too many level settings. I didn't want to read it when I saw level 60 and level 120. I still like the traditional DND20 and above legendary settings. It's simple and clear. I don't want to read the overly complicated levels.

What a tragic book... It's well written, please support it...

I've just read the first few chapters now, and I feel that the author's writing style is okay, but there are some places that feel weird. Does it feel like the writing style was from a few years ago? I don't know what to say, I just feel that the rhythm is not very comfortable. I just want to ask if it will be like this later?

It seems that my book is not so famous that it deserves your time to criticize it. It is not a novel with millions of readers and you can become famous just by saying a few words. It may be more difficult here, okay. Those who have read two chapters, nine chapters, X chapters, those who have pirated copies and want to leave their own lengthy comments, please save it. I might delete it after just one glance, so I don't have to leave your footsteps behind... I hope that the people left in the book review area are those who like this book, or are really interested in this book. If you really want to be a reviewer, I feel that my temple is a bit small and may not be able to accommodate big Buddhas like you. Just think it's for everyone's benefit. If you don't like it, don't do it to yourself or dirty your own eyes. Just turn it off, simple and clear. There is no need to worry about how to criticize this novel. Maybe I was worried a few days ago, but now I can accept your so-called criticism with a very peaceful attitude. Just like the lyrics of the same song, people say that the heart is like a knife, and a diamond needs to be polished. Thanks to those people who have scratched and helped me, life has a more beautiful outline. After every drop of loneliness, I have evolved into a better me. In fact, I am very grateful to you. I really mean this sentence because you have made me grow. Bow and thank you!

I'm still going to read 1,000 chapters! Why is he a eunuch? ! !

There are spells and undead like DND, as well as frost and light that were commonly used in fantasy literature many years ago. What a mess

I have read dozens of chapters, and the writing is still okay, but now that this kind of trend has passed, it is difficult to achieve decent results.

I've only watched half of it, so it may not be comprehensive, but I still feel that the protagonist likes to seek death too much, rushing wherever there is benefit, and not considering the risks.

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The beginning is terrible, but after the next seventy or eighty chapters it gradually gets better.

When I saw the introduction, my first impression was DND, Year of Turbulence, AO brought the gods down to the mortal world, the protagonist is a mage, and the expectation after that is the floating city, the gods, the abyss or the apotheosis of the gods.

Finally, he is the vote king. It's not easy.

There are very few novels like this that are written with a sense of empathy. Read it and cherish it.

Why do we need to shake hands? Isn't it the etiquette for meeting people of all professions or classes? A mage can shake hands with someone without fear of being shot at close range.

Thirty thousand people have read it... How did you manage to reach over one million words?

By the way, what is the reference for this novel's God system?

Will there be a Shura Field plot?

The results are so dismal, and why are there so few comments?

The weapon at my side? Just a tickle, who do you want me to fight with? 😆

The book is good, it will be much better if you pay attention to the wording. Subscription support

Can I add more updates? . . .

Isn't the first level a 5 gold subsidy? How can I give 20 gold?

Let me see if I have enough 5,000 followers today

By the way, what exactly is this setting? Traveling through the real world? Or should I dress up as an NPC like a super mechanic?

I hope the protagonist can leave directly without making any mistakes.

What is the situation with the new magical goddess who became a god at the age of 19? 19 Years old? This is too exaggerated. When you succeed in squeezing out your predecessor's goddess of magic, it is equivalent to assuming the role of magic priest. I remember that the previous great arcanist of the floating city who did this was directly brain-burned and burned to death. Also, in the novel, mages do not need to re-memorize spells to cast spells. What is the magic network used for? It is simply used for linking. Although it is a DND-like setting, it is better to improve it.