Break Through the Universe

I suggest the author change it and remove the black widow, which will have the effect of dissuading her. After all, the protagonist is also dedicated to the Tao. Why bring a black widow? It is better to bring a heroine like Tang Zichen from the previous novel.

In Infinite Flow novels, the worlds you travel through are either completely original, or you directly travel into the world of movies, TV novels, and the most annoying thing is that the background is the world we are familiar with, but the characters, power, etc. Have been changed to be specious.

Too little plot and too much bullshit! Always pretending to be docile, sloppy and unhappy.

Ten years ago, I could read anyone's books, so why am I picky about books now? It's because I've grown up. Therefore, there is no point in arguing about whether a book is good or not, because in my brother's eyes, the shortcomings you mentioned are all bullshit. Others find it enjoyable, but we find it poisonous.

At the beginning, when you stand in a horse stance and breathe, you feel like a god or a demon (nerves???). Doesn't it take a step to reach the next level to reach a lower level? Swallowing the way of heaven? Or time and space roaming🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 If you snore later while sleeping and the space is broken, the countercurrent of time and space will be amazing😁😁😁😁

Starting from the Marvel world, this book has entered the ranks of evil spirits. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist at all. I suspect it was ghostwritten.

The heroine Black Widow directly abandoned the book

It has no meaning except to forcefully pretend to be ***, it's a ***

There is too much nonsense, and the characters are all stereotyped and have no characteristics. I can't stand it anymore, bye bye

It's always written by Wen Zou Zou. The plot is incomprehensible, and the story background is not introduced well. There is a feeling that the story is not perfect. In short, the writing is passable, but everything else is unsatisfactory.

Why aren't there any posts?

Accardo! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Uncle A! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It was okay in the past, but after I got to Marvel, I didn't know what kind of story the author wanted to write. The protagonist's presence dropped again and again, so I just wrote a group portrait... When I got to Monkey King, it got even worse. The protagonist is awesome and sits outside the world. A weak presence has basically no similarity with the protagonist's power system. Du's clone is doing things, it's like changing a protagonist. I feel that the author has gone wrong in the later part. The proportion of the description of the protagonist and the group portrait is not well grasped. The protagonist has no sense of existence... And then... I can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can make some improvements and breakthroughs in the next book. Mirroring the World is pretty good.

Times have really changed! I can't stand reading this type of novel now.

The author is from Luoyang, and he is almost convinced by the book. He looks down on Chang'an everywhere.

The first few chapters were over-exaggerated and ridiculously exaggerated. Each paragraph was filled with a large number of inappropriate adjectives. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became, so I had to abandon the book! I leave a message in the hope that the author can improve!

Is this Chinese taught by a physical education teacher?

I really can't understand what I'm writing about. The theme line of the novel is obscure and difficult to understand. It's written in all kinds of high-quality words that we can't understand. If it's a Jianghu novel like Xue Zhong's, it would be fine. Why the hell is this a Zhutian novel and you still write it like this? I'm really convinced.

There's a reason this book isn't popular.

Two days of formal people phlegm and other curative effects and so many years still no vine

Why didn't I see the protagonist in Chapter 100

There is a reason for rushing

The blood of Emperor Yang of Sui Dynasty? ? ?