Longing for Qin

The advantage is that she is good at writing, but the disadvantage is that she is the heroine. My brother once wrote two comments to the heroine, a total of three words. The plot of this book relies almost entirely on these three words to guide the heroine to promote development.

I have read about 1/3 of the novel. Overall, the writing is good, the plot is smooth, and it is a readable novel. It's just that the heroine is very brainless... And the author writes in all kinds of ways... It feels like the author is quite a novice. I want to know what the heroine would do if she was alone. She was locked up at home and didn't read or exercise. Would she cultivate immortality with big eyes and small eyes? I get very excited when I meet someone related to my past life, and I am afraid that others will not notice the difference. Is it stupid for my brother to have such a high IQ? There are many things that could be solved better. The heroine doesn't reflect on her behavior every day and how she wants to grow. Could she always be a fool? Also, writing ancient novels must have an ancient feel. Now it looks like a modern novel cloaked in ancient romance. It's too modern and it's too dramatic.

This story develops in a confusing way just because the heroine is originally a fool! What's more, everyone is wise and resourceful, and they have every plan, but sometimes it's quite boring. ——Actually, the heroine also uses her brain "hard", but it's just an innate limitation of intellectual development... Hey, it's not that she hasn't made progress!

When I discovered this book two years ago, I was deeply attracted by the setting at the beginning. Later, I stopped reading it because of update issues, and I didn't expect it to end suddenly. My brother has always had a high sense of presence. At that time, I thought that the CP of brother and sister would be very good, but I just thought about it because Chao Ran was there. It's a pity that Chao Ran and Qin Jiu were destined to have nothing to do with each other from beginning to end. In ancient times, they were either wives or concubines. Although elopement was romantic, it required a lot of psychological pressure. Obviously, Qin Jiu was not such a person. How should I put it, I still feel quite sorry to see Chao Ran like this, but the ending of brother and sister CP is unexpected and reasonable. Reading this book again after a year, I have to say that the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. As a reader, I can be regarded as "a good beginning and a good end" (laughing). See you again when we are destined. Come on.

I have something going on today, so I won't update it for now. I'll update it tomorrow.

Wait until Qin Yu comes back to support me, otherwise I won't be able to stand it anymore.

What? The chapters are messed up. If you look at it, you will return to a previous section. The updates are too slow, and the plot progress is also slow. It feels like it is pieced together, and the more you read, the more boring it becomes.

No sympathy for the heroine at all. Qin Jue had long warned her that Qiao Yuanzhi was not a good person, and she also suspected that Qiao Yuanzhi pushed her into the water. Qiao Yuanzhi made such a clumsy move, but she actually dove in helplessly. How blind must God be to let her live again...

I also feel depressed. The heroine has not grown up at all, and she is not a fool. She was naive before and now she should slowly grow wiser. She has always been so stupid. Looking at how stupid the heroine behaves in Lin Shu's episode, I feel sick. The heroine is not mentally retarded, let alone a retarded and stupid person. If this continues, I think she will be suitable for a street sweeping job that is not too demanding.

Will the heroine continue to be stupid? I won't watch it after the exemption limit.