The Brocade Spring

The writing is indeed good, but I wonder if the writing is so good that I can't help but show off my skills. There are large paragraphs of descriptions of the appearance, aura, and emotions of all the beauties in the main and supporting roles. One or two sentences are key, one or two paragraphs are bloated, and one or two chapters are just pretentious text. The biggest difference between accomplished writers lies in their self-control. One more sentence will make them confused, while one less sentence will make them divine.

I have read no less than 50 works at Qidian. There are only two authors whose books are worth reading a second time, and this book is the third one worth reading twice, even though I haven't finished the first time yet. Telling the same story, using the same cliche plot, but the author will find a different angle to cut it in, and the writing style is also very attractive. The words used are common and easy to understand, but when put together they feel gorgeous. Give the author a like and I will continue to follow your works. Come on! Happy New Year! 🌹

I've read more than 800 chapters! The author wanted to set up a suspenseful and brain-burning plot, but the clues were scattered here and there! The book always uses vague language such as that person, that thing, a name, etc. To express it, and also likes to leave the tail behind without explaining it clearly at once. It makes people confused and confused! It's better to make it clear directly!

After seeing 12%, I still like the heroine very much... I like the writing style of the author Wei Jin, the writing is smooth, the plot is also very compact, and it is neither superficial nor a novice... I read it quickly and did not see any obvious flaws...

The writing is excellent, but after being fed piles and piles of dog food, I really wanted to give up. In fact, I don't mind eating some dog food, but I really can't stand the wise and powerful heroine who can't control how much mentally retarded dog food she can remember when she sees the male protagonist... I can't eat this dog food, I can't eat it 😭 I am still suitable to watch movies without male protagonists 🙂

There are too many adjectives used, and for a long time I couldn't see the actual things. They were all overly flowery words. It was tiring to read. The story was good but too tiring.

It's very good-looking. Although the progress in the middle is a little slow and the ending is a little fast... It's still a good book...

I really like this book. I read reviews before and said it has too much nonsense, the plot is too slow, the male protagonist is too useless, and the ending is too hasty. Anyway, there are a lot of negatives. After reading it, I think it's pretty good. The author's writing style is very good, and it's very romantic in the Wei and Jin Dynasties. It's quite interesting. The structure of the story is a bit big, so it feels like the ending is rushed. I think it's mainly because it's not. There is a side story, so there is always a feeling of unfinished business. The male protagonist is very strong and does not interact much with the female protagonist, but he is really a strong support for the female protagonist. In the beginning of the house fight, there is actually no way. The starting point of the heroine is too low, and there is too little for her to borrow. It is not easy to survive in the house fight. Later, the heroine takes the opportunity to get involved with the Xue family, and there are After finding the male protagonist, he tore the cover of the Qin family and directly planned the identity of the princess. When he had the identity of the princess, with the male protagonist's manpower, the help of the Xue family, and the foreshadowing laid in the early stage, he slowly began to search for the truth of the past life and solve the dilemma. The appearance of the Huan family's eldest son, that is, he defeated ten guilds with one force and directly crushed him with his strength. In fact, the author It has also been explained in the article that the predicament the heroine faces at the beginning is very difficult. As a woman, it is too difficult to act. Look at Huan Dalang, who is also reborn. How can he think about using tricks or making small moves? He uses big moves as soon as he makes a move. He wants money and people. If the villain makes trouble, he will be killed directly. He wants to control the country, and the emperor must listen to him. I think this ending is very good. The heroine is smart because she didn't want to be the empress. She is also a little funny. Otherwise, she is just a puppet. She likes Xue Er very much. The heroine borrowed power from Xue Er at the beginning and dealt with Xue Er a lot. In fact, Xue Er underestimated the heroine. He always thought that the woman was behind him. If he had the respect of Li Jiu for the heroine , or attach importance to it, thinking that they are in love, thinking of marrying instead of accepting, I think maybe the male protagonist should be changed in this book, but Xue Er's performance is also very reasonable. The second son of a big family, talented and handsome, accepting you, a daughter of a small family, is already very face-saving. This is the clan education he received, and he also likes Du Si. He is indeed a ruthless person.

The first part was good, but the second part became a bit unbearable when I became a princess. The male protagonist only appeared once in Chapter 650. If you want to watch the male and female protagonists play opposite each other, you should take a detour. The male protagonist in this book has no sense of presence.

To be honest, the author's writing is good and the plot is good. This rebirth novel is a classic (the first half). It's a pity that the author himself said later that he was anxious. Want to end it quickly. So anticlimactic. I guess I originally wanted to write about the collision between two rebirths, but it failed. It is recommended to buy half a book. Once you see the heroine become a princess, you can stop. If the quality declines too quickly later, it will affect the impression of the work.