Yun Shuoxian

This update speed, series in my lifetime

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I have never written a book review before, so I may have said it confusingly, but the author was very amused~ I have always been a person who only reads books and does not leave comments, so I registered an account specifically to urge the update of this article. (So the author please update diligently) What first attracted me was the three words "no male protagonist" in the introduction of the work. I have read at least dozens of books on immortality over the years, and this was the first time I saw a book on immortality without a male protagonist. It was really fresh. I just started reading and wrote a few chapters. I just felt that the character development of the heroine was very interesting, but there was nothing else unique about it. However, the more I read, the more I feel that the author's writing style is very comfortable. The feeling of eloquent narration and the unfolding of the whole story structure are slow and unhurried, which makes people feel itchy in the heart. (It's really itchy. The author is very diligent in updating the article.) To judge the quality of a novel, I personally feel that the three criteria of writing, plot, and logic are the basis. Judging from the current sixty-two chapters of Yun Shuoxian's book, the plot unfolds bit by bit from Yun Chi's past and present experiences, with a grand and clear structure from point to point. Gui Xu Sect, Shoushan, Yi Di, Lushui Village, from the world of immortality to the mortal village to the place of imprisonment, several scenes are all very detailed and majestic, with a strong sense of picture, which shows the author's skill in using words. For someone like me, who has read numerous fairy tales, the scenes here seem ordinary but not familiar, and the author's creative ability is also remarkable. Looking at the following chapters, what is even more rare is that it can teach and inspire thoughts. To be honest, I generally don't have such expectations for online literature. Generally speaking, I'll be done with it after reading it with great success. The chapters about the Xi family's mansion are too cruel to satirize people's hearts! However, the newly-appeared Liu Zimu (the author is really good at naming names) is quite interesting. I wonder if he will have a role in the future? There are also a lot of questions. When can Yun Chi's past life be explained clearly? Why did Yunshi disappear in these chapters? What on earth did Yun Chi's master do? Besides. . . Are you planning to write a Lily story about Yun Chi and Mo Qiaoyi? Hehehehe. In the end, Luo Liba said a lot, and thousands of words were condensed into one sentence: "The author, please be diligent in updating the article."

I looked back at the publication date, and before I knew it, this article had been published for two years! When I first started writing, Qitong was purely a hobby, but as I kept writing, I discovered that it was not just my hobby, but also a responsibility. When Qitong learned that there were still other people chasing this article and constantly urging me to update and waiting to see it, I realized that it was my responsibility to finish writing this story. However, Qitong did not insist on updating all the time because of his busy work and weak health. Speaking of which, you may not know that during the break, Qitong was hospitalized once. After being discharged from the hospital, his health was not good, and he rested for a period of time. During that period, his body and mind were very tortured. If it were not for the support of his family, Qitong would not have recovered so quickly! However, all bad things will pass. Qitong said that he will insist on finishing the story, but there may still be occasional interruptions in the period. However, Qitong promises everyone that the interruption will not exceed three days, so this article is still worth looking forward to. If you still like it, please give Qitong some support. Pen core, I love you.

Once I saw that there was no male protagonist, I felt relieved, my love

Everyone has their own characteristics, well written

I have been too busy with work recently and have not been able to keep up with the author's progress. I have been eager to read more than a dozen chapters in the past two days. I didn't expect the author to be so diligent in updating a lot~ This speed is acceptable, keep up the good work! ! ! I like the heroine more and more, the character is getting more and more full-bodied, and the heroine's character is really likable! ! Want to Marry (. The writing is really good and the plot is well set up. I highly recommend 🤭🤭

When I saw that there was no male protagonist, I decided to accept it. Come on!

I came here after reading a recommendation. The person said that he had only read the first six chapters, but the writing style was very good. He also said that the writing style is so good that it should not be watered down all the time. It is the main text of the heroine cultivating immortals without cp. You can read it. After reading it, it turned out to be good. I am looking forward to it.

I like and admire Yun Chi's mentality: she can lose, but never surrender! Many times, people clearly have not lost, but they have already surrendered in their hearts. They just rely on one breath to hold on, and then make excuses for themselves afterwards...