Peerless Immortal Light

Based on everyone's comments, it seems possible to write a story in which a reader who has read this novel travels back in time and becomes a supporting character who is tricked by the heroine of the novel, the Madonna, and then avoids her everywhere, seizes opportunities, and finally ascends 😰😰😰

It's a little better than Xiao Bai's novel. The heroine has a problem with her IQ and is just a hot chick. She's bullied but she doesn't dare to speak out? So you're so afraid of trouble that you're a fairy? Go back and have children.

You can have golden fingers, but not too much. . Water escape function, spirit gathering function, purification function. . Not to mention its own fairy palace function. . . You might as well create a universal system. Why does the heroine need to work hard to cultivate herself?

Really, I feel like the heroine is such an idiot

This is my least favorite fairy tale that I have ever read. First of all, the character is a bit like a virgin. Also, isn't this a serious fairy tale? If you don't write about emotional scenes, don't write about being betrayed. It's already more than half of the story. The male protagonist is replaced. What's the point? Also, the female protagonist's appearance is really hard to compliment.

I discovered that there is something wrong with the heroine. When things happen, she is not beautiful, but when nothing happens, she welcomes spring. When things happen, the original owner is too rubbish. Only when good things happen, do you thank the parents of the original owner. Come on, you're using the original owner's body and you won't be grateful. It's as ironic as Thanksgiving.

Many of the articles on the Internet are stupid articles, Holy Mother articles, heart-torture articles, golden finger articles, mistress upper level articles, lotus roots broken threads, entangled articles, killing in all directions, surrounded by mountains, crowded flowers, and one flower dotes on a hundred flowers. . . . . Watch it if you like, don't watch it just to sleep~~~~🥱🥱🥱

The writing is not bad, but the emotional line of the heroine is a bit speechless. There are only one or two hundred chapters left. The male protagonist "cheated" and was replaced, but the rest is pretty good.

Every time I read the introduction, I get discouraged. If I had a pet like this, I would kill it long ago! ! !

I don't know what to say, but the heroine who has read time-traveling stories is actually such a holy mother. People who travel through time-travel are decisive in killing all kinds of things, and at least they are invincible in the same realm. This woman is totally different

How wonderful! Also, I don't think the male lead is suddenly changed, Shangrong is eliminated, and there are foreshadowings everywhere: 1. He has a junior sister who loves him so much that he can't let go. 2. The heroine doesn't love him enough, she loves taking risks more 3. He is strong on the outside but strong on the inside, and always talks about protecting the heroine. The heroine is usually the one protecting him at the most critical moment. He is not as good as his master, boundless, like jade, and even some characters who have not written much Finally, not much is written about love, but friendship is beautiful! I hope to see the story after ascension!

The golden finger is too big, and there are too many spatial functions. When you encounter a secret realm, you will meet a powerful person. You are harvesting treasures and spiritual pets. And it only takes one year from the foundation to the middle stage. Is it really okay? Then what else can other people build? There are too many flaws. No wonder this book with so many words is not famous yet.

You should speak according to your identity, and many of the dialogues feel inappropriate for the corresponding position... It feels awkward. Another bit of cuteness is not artificial...

I just called this weird... The heroine's heart is as high as the sky. I feel that the author has learned the form of the loser style but not the god of the loser style. In the world of cultivation where the jungle is strong and the strong eats, strength is respected, so you are a fifth-level qi practitioner with basic techniques. A five-spirited loser who has not learned a single skill, what right does he have to be sensitive and complain that others are not enthusiastic about you? The senior brother who has perfected Qi training was scorned by the heroine before he said a word correctly. Is the heroine some kind of little princess with sensitive skin? No This halo of the heroine will teach you a lesson every minute A bunch of people in the Qi training period do not practice well day by day, build the foundation early, and play boring exclusion games every day. It feels like they are not in the world of cultivation at all. I have never seen this in 800 years. This is Yingren's "Cultivation Novel" Although it was written almost ten years ago, it is understandable, but as a reader, I really can't stand this kind of writing. We can't not let the people who eat it give us opinions just because there is a problem with the cooking tools and the food is not delicious.

There's so much nonsense at this critical moment of life and death 😅

I just want to say that this author is not good. The writing level is not that good and I knew it after reading more than thirty chapters. I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortals. You are the worst.

It's too slow, there's too much nonsense, and harsh words take up three-quarters of every fight.

The writing style of the work is fluent, the language is vivid, the characters are rich, and the plot is fascinating. Vote to support the author!

I can't stand it anymore, I don't like the heroine's character

Why not practice in a cave? You have to run out

I want to read a story where the protagonist becomes an immortal and then travels back to Earth 😁

Um, this book is so hard to read that I can't read the paid chapters. There is something wrong with the heroine, and there are many unreasonable things. The more I look at it, the angrier and more angry I am, speechless╯╰

The heroine's IQ is really worrying. . .

I feel that many plots are unreasonable and make people stop at a hundred chapters.

This is a book written by the author many years ago. I don't blame him for his writing style and content. When I first read this article, I was in a period when there was a lot of space for cultivating immortals. I happened to read this article. I thought it was quite good at the time. Now that several years have passed, I discovered the content of the article and the character of the heroine after reading it again. . . Judging from the current situation of generally high IQ in novels, this book is really a bit criticized to a very miserable level, so I really don't blame the author for writing such a writing style that is easy to be criticized. Let me tell you quietly, after reading the article, I felt that my IQ was being abused π_π. I feel that many novel books today do have a lot of good reviews, but I think that in a few years, perhaps, they will be criticized like this book. Alas, truly good books are rare. (I have been a real reader for several years. You can click on my avatar to see my journey in the Qidian software. Well, ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪ Hehe, I have reached level 21. I am really happy today ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪ So I accidentally saw this book and wanted to share my opinions.)