The Story of Immortal Cultivation in Mo Shi

For example, the scene where Han Li fights against Senior Brother Lu. There is also the battle between humans and demons in the Fallen Demon Valley. The key is strength. Speed, comprehensive fighting with defense and so on. But you must have a magic weapon. And powerful spiritual thoughts. Of course, you must first control it. It's like surrounding three and letting one go in the thirty-six strategies. Pure power control. Or rhythm control, etc.

I always feel like I'm watching a documentary, which isn't exciting enough, but the writing is lacking. I said before that the fighting wasn't intense enough, so I wonder if this will work. I'll pick a martial arts fight by Gu Long and Jin Yong.

I have a little question, why did Liu Ruhai sneak attack on Huang Laoxie? Wouldn't it be better for his master to advance to the golden elixir stage? Wouldn't it be better for him to have a master at the golden elixir stage in the future? Maybe he could form an elixir with the help of his master? Then why did he sneak attack on his master? What was his motive? There is no hatred between them!

The resurrection of Uncle Mo and Aunt Li felt like a failure. It was of no use to the storyline. The two burdens, if they were dead, had emotional entanglements with Lin Qiuyan, the love of the heroine, and the hatred of her master. They were also somewhat interesting, which made them boring.

The ending is sloppy, so I don't have to wait for updates every day.

There is a lot of water injection. It might be better if this book was published before mortals. Most readers are familiar with this routine now. If the author adds water like this and then sells poorly, using tragic and inspirational routines, it looks down on the intelligence of today's readers.

It looks so good, it has a bit of a mortal flavor. I have finished reading them all and am waiting for the update...

The forbearance of ordinary people is actually a kind of fresh and refined pretense

Although I didn't grab the red envelope, I saw you had just put it on the shelves. I have dozens of free coins here that are about to expire, so I decided to be a good person and ordered two chapters, but I don't know if it counts.

I can't stand it when I see a competition to recruit a bride. It's not that it's not good to write emotional dramas. Pig's feet are favored by various goddesses, there are all kinds of jealousies, and there are many places where friction seems too blunt. The three words I remember most deeply are "you cheated". . . .

Let me complain: from Chapter 53 to Chapter 67, there is almost no sign of pig's feet in 15 chapters, just for the sake of foreshadowing, 15 chapters of professional fighting, drunk, drunk to death.

Everyone, please help to promote the author.

Recommend a book "Martial Arts Becomes Heavenly"

I recommend this book, the fantasy novel "Want to Become the Great Emperor", which is full of new ideas.

Mortal descriptions of the feelings between people are both ruthless and sentimental. The descriptions of love do not care about the coming and going, but only about the eternity. Many Mortal-flow novels only have a superficial understanding of Mortal-flow, so they cannot write works like Mortal, because Mortal is a description of real society and a revelation of real human nature.

I didn't get the pacing right in the early stages, but the overall story is okay, keep up the good work.

Come on? There will be a large number of people following you.

It's only the late stage of foundation building now, and the heroine is almost Nascent Soul.

Hahahaha, it's been three months and I finally left the dark room.

Persistence, mortals also persisted for six months before putting it on the shelves.

Although it feels like a mortal, it has its own characteristics. The plot and character descriptions are very good, but the combat plot is not very good. Come on.

After reading the public chapter, let me talk about my personal feelings. The story of this book is quite good! I was always asked to read the public chapter. Why do I say that? Because there are always dramas in the middle. The author has more private things. On the one hand, the protagonist's character creation made me so embarrassed in the author's writing. On the other hand, as for the main plot and branch plots, the author still needs to practice! Finally, I wish the author better and better as he writes!