My Hokage Journey

Serious nonsense? Sakura has been around since Minato went to school. Oh my god, the author needs to have an idea of ​​the chaos of time! !

I just saw a lot of big brothers who came back from Konoha in the book review area. They told me one thing after another, which deceived me, a person who has never been to Konoha. But don't you know, I just came back from Loughdrew. Is there any classmate who would like to hear about your experience?

I just want to say something, the rich and powerful Uchiha families all have gathering places, how could it overlap with the cheap rented house like the protagonist? Also, just a few songs can attract little girls, and your protagonist's aura of wisdom is too powerful.

It's okay if the ancient Chinese qi training methods turned into martial arts skills, but tell me, where did the skills go? Why is it still Eight Gate Dunjia? Even if the basic skills of martial arts are to train the body or develop internal strength, the basic skills of a qi practitioner who cultivates immortality should be to develop true qi. Well, open the eight gates permanently. You are really awesome.

For the protagonist to create the Rasengan in advance, since he has traveled through time, that's it. There are other people who have learned it so quickly, haha, there are not only a few who are so eager to learn the original work. The ugliest thing is Danzo's. Let's not talk about whether there was such a technique at that time. If Danzo really wanted to control the protagonist's penetration, would he break his hamstrings? Tsunade, the best doctor, has the same consequences. For other treatments, the protagonist is a useless person. You can just write Danzo and kill him directly. This kind of mindless plot is written just to make the protagonist look pitiful. The most important thing is, if this kind of injury is really serious, without healing, who dares to arrange for the protagonist to go to the battlefield based on his status as a disciple of Orochi? It was written with a sense of urgency that the protagonist will die if he doesn't open the third door, so the plot is more reasonable at least. And if this kind of thing happens, if the third generation doesn't deal with it, the protagonist is only a few years old. If he doesn't judge forbearance in the future, and he and Danzo are killed by Sasuke in the main story, just write that the protagonist likes to be a dog. There are still decades left until the main story, and after being a dog for so long, the protagonist can finally beat Kaguya as a human?

Even among fans, this book is ranked as the most poisonous.

How did the protagonist offend Li? Just because I had a meal with Mikoto? After reading Chapter 17, I was confused. After all, Dai was also a ninja, so why was he? Because he knelt down and begged for 500 taels. . . In fact, I can tolerate this, but how old is your protagonist this year? What right does he have to offend Li? I guess it's only right that people don't even look at you, because your age and identity are not enough for people to take a second look. Let's just say that the protagonist of Ant's time period is not even as good as an ant. Will you take another look at Ant?

I also saw the protagonist pirate the Rasengan. However, with the talent of Sass gay, it takes a long time to learn the C-level fireball. How did the protagonist get the confidence to pirate the A-level Rasengan?

I don't think the author should write this kind of scene where every time a companion fails to fight and is killed quickly, he just rushes to the rescue. This kind of plot is more enjoyable once in a while. If it is too many, it really doesn't look good. It will only make me feel that it is meaningless than pretending.

It always feels incongruous when a Chinese name appears among a group of Japanese names.

Hey, it's time for the author to give Mikoto an explanation. It's a man's responsibility!

Naruto is a world of bloodline families, who can value a commoner like you? If you don't have the strength, the whole world will revolve around you?

This book was not written carefully. The character of the missions and the plot of the story are too poor. First of all, the male protagonist experienced a turbulent life when he was a child, and later there was a female protagonist who wanted to protect him. So the male protagonist's character should not risk his life many times for unrelated people. Alas, the logic of this book is confusing, and the more I read it, the more boring it becomes.

In the recent chapter, the plot is too far-fetched, and it is too far-fetched to betray Konoha like this. It is true that the protagonist wants to betray Konoha, but it is too simple to just betray Konoha! The plot doesn't stand up to scrutiny, as if it's been outwitted

Naruto novels always betray the village, and I'm drunk too

I've read a lot of it, and I think it's pretty good. The protagonist's psychological changes are step-by-step, and there are traces to follow. Moreover, the protagonist's strength quickly develops, and he explains things in the beginning. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. It's not brainless or harem-y. It's pretty good among fan fiction.

In fact, I don't think the second generation Hokage can develop many different types of ninjutsu even if he is a genius. Personally, I think he may be similar to Orochimaru, who developed water escape. As for other ninjutsu, he may have obtained the Earth Reincarnation from the Uzumaki Group and perfected the Earth Reincarnation. His colleagues channeled former geniuses to ask about the ninjutsu that others were good at and then perfected it. Otherwise, how would a ninja like Mike Dai learn the Eight Gate Armor?

The writing is too exaggerated. At the age of 6..., He can summon a huge psychic beast? ? ? At least you have to be logical. Wait until they are 12-16 years old. At 6 years old, the body is not developed yet, okay?