Naruto Hero Demon Dragon

The subject matter of the book is interesting. However, the protagonist has incorrect views. For example, he steals other people's money when he sees them drunk. He has no bottom line in being a human being. A gentleman does what he does and what he does not do. Whether the writing is good or not is one thing, but the ideas conveyed in the book should not break the norms of human conduct and should not convey bad ideas.

The idea is good, but it's not well written at all The main character is just like a fool

When writing Japanese comics, are you afraid of being called a traitor if you give the protagonist a Japanese name? Forced explanation six to flying up

Pricked the palm again! ! ! ! Damn chicken! Do all the protagonists have deformed hands? Or my hands are deformed. I can't feel any pain in my palms when I clench my fists hard. I can only clasp my thumbs hard, but my thumbs hurt. I feel no pain in my palms and may even feel a little itchy! Over the years, chefs have suffered countless scars on their hands, but the palms of their hands have not been broken except for blisters from grinding.

The more I watch, the less I understand. I feel like the protagonist is becoming more and more controlling, and the whole world is coddling him. No matter how big a trouble he gets into, or how unreasonable he is, others are tolerating him. WR Is he a god? Damn it?

I think this protagonist is purely a 2b. Who would spoil you if you are so crazy? Even the White Fang Konoha high-level officials can be forced to death, and even their own disciples can be driven out. How did you, an orphan, survive to the end like this? And to be honest, the protagonist really has no bottom line at all and can do anything. People in Naruto are all ninjas. Even if the atmosphere in Konoha is better, it is not a world for ordinary people. Madara has to plan everything and is not as crazy as you.

6 Points for creativity. 1 Point for plot, 3 points for writing

I hope the author will kill Six Paths, Toad Sage, and Naruto in the end. These are the most disgusting existences in Naruto and the most insidious ones. Really hate them Naruto was really disgusting at the end, and it was a complete conspiracy. The reason why Kaguya was sealed was just because she wanted to protect herself and prepare for future wars. Then the Six Paths felt that it shouldn't be done and said no. We just need to hold hands and sing hymns together. Do you want to believe in love? Just believe in love. , Tigers don't eat meat, and people don't eat meat. Everyone can drink the northwest wind and grow up. Love is enough in the world, and nothing else is needed. When the enemy comes, we just need to use love. Anyway, the enemies are all the same ****** as him. It's really disgusting and unbearable! This world has never changed. The weak eats the strong, and strength is everything. There are no exceptions. Talking about these things about love, I sincerely ******, after all, Rokudo and Naruto, who have been talking about love all the time, still didn't speak with strength in the end, how disgusting! I was wrong about watching Naruto! Feel like vomiting

After seeing a few pictures, I really can't accept it. I don't know the skills, so I chose Dragon Girl, then bought Yasuo and challenged Kakashi? In front of the third generation, do you think everyone is stupid? Can you still go to ninja school if you can't concentrate your chakra? Dragon Girl has not been developed yet, so she just plays Yasuo. You are a brat and plays with a short sword. I really can't accept you.

The main character is written like a psychopath

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Xiaonan's plot.

Why did the protagonist buy the 6300 Swordsman first? You can buy a bunch of 450 and 1350 swordsmen. Is it bad that Galen is cheap? I only have a little energy every day. I spent 6,300 on the sword hero.

You didn't use alliance skills at all

Every hero is very strong, the important thing is to see if he can use it. For example, the power of Demacia, whose skin cannot be broken, can be used to add to the protagonist's defense, or to become extremely powerful.

It's too messy. Wouldn't it be nice to inherit one hero? We have to write so many heroes. Aren't the heroes in League of Legends so weak? Aren't Dragon King, Star Mother, Bard, etc. Powerful? Please understand the history of the alliance while writing a novel.

I was confused when I saw the first time I bought equipment. One million taels is 10,000 gold coins. Can't I buy a Time or Demon Sect or an Archangel? Twenty blue crystals and 6,000 gold coins are gone.

Too much content for a 5 year old. . . . .

The last chapter is 264, are you kidding me? All subscribed

Well, this introduction, the fusion of 4 basic properties is also eliminated by blood inheritance, right?

After reading five chapters, I retreated. The pig's feet were written like a fool. I originally thought it was just what I imagined, but when I read the book reviews, many book friends said this. There are fewer and fewer good fan books

There are five attributes. What's the use of integrating all five of them for you? I didn't know there was Yin Yang Escape?

The author's review section for another book was suddenly banned. I don't know why, and I haven't scolded the author 🤐

I spent a while in junior high school watching Naruto fanfics crazily,,,, but I only watched Naruto anime in elementary school, and when it came to the chunin exams! Then,,, I basically knew the plot, so I stopped watching the anime (￢_￢)