Two-Dimensional Kingdom

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. I don't know if the author can see it. I hope the author will not decide on the heroine early, and don't engage in some messy ambiguity. The two-dimensional world we expect should be about interesting things and memorable memories that will happen when we interact with the characters in it, instead of going around the field every day. This will lose the character that the character should have. Imagine that the girls automatically assume the role of a big wife, a mistress, a mistress, a mistress, a mistress, a mistress, and a mistress. What a disaster... It is undeniable that the daily life of Shura Field is also very interesting, but it would be better if everyone works together as family and good friends. The ending of each character's route can be released in the epilogue through the extra chapter. Sorry for the condescending tone. I'm not very good at speaking. As a student party member, I can only support the author with all my support. The author must insist on writing to give our favorite characters a perfect future! (Bow)

It is now 1:44 in the morning on September 18, 2020. I now find that "Second Dimension Kingdom" has been unblocked. I am very happy and I will post here to express my excitement! ! !

It's another setting of a harem drama with a good-for-nothing male protagonist. He's ugly but the female protagonists are getting closer to each other one by one.

I'm quite speechless. Why did the Demonic Reform strengthen Kasumigaoka? Obviously her book is not trash, but it is not a bestseller either, it is just an unpopular niche work.

There were a little too many poison spots, and I almost got poisoned to death. The protagonist is just like a sb. He thought it was a fairy grass but turned out to be a poisonous weed.

I think the biggest failure is my sister. She is obviously related by blood, but she is still so lenient and acts like a girlfriend. How much does it matter to you who your brother is sleeping with? Why should you have the final say? This is not my sister but my mother! Of course the protagonist also has problems. Shouldn't a real brother look after his sister to find a good man? Some pathological possessiveness, unlike a normal brother-sister relationship, at least blood siblings shouldn't be like this.

For the first time, I felt that the girl control was disgusting. In a sense, it was very strong. It's normal for a younger sister to control her brother, but it's also okay for a brother and a sister to control each other and have orthopedic love. When he's with another heroine, he's crazy about his younger sister. He's so possessive, and his character is broken.

So, the three leaves are gone as soon as they are written?

There is clearly Kaoru Miyazono in your introduction, but there is no trace of Kaoru Miyazono in your text. . .

It's nothing, so novels of this type start with a background. China is not backward, Japan is a dependent country, and the protagonist is the son of a rich man, but he was kicked out. Looking at this background, I don't want to read it.

The biggest flaw of this book is that the character of the male protagonist is too useless. The combination of kidney deficiency and Japanese cartoon male style is really too discouraging. It is not that the protagonist is cheating, but his physique is lower than that of ordinary people and it is really unappetizing.

As for the character of the protagonist, I don't care if it's ugly, but if it's a woman, I'll just stare at other people and scold them every day. . .

Is your protagonist a god? You have to miss every activity, and you have to work part-time. How much time do you have after school?

When you make friends with others, you don't tell them your real name. . . . .

I just watched Xia You and Ayase's pornographic novel

I kind of want to beat you to death, author. My favorite Xun has not appeared yet. I have been hoping that Xun will have a good ending. April is so sad to see Xun. I really hope that Xun can have a good ending. Doesn't it hurt your conscience to write like this?

The early setting was obviously perfect, but the appearance setting of the protagonist suddenly fell apart. Shouldn't he be rich, handsome, and rich?

It's almost Mid-Autumn Festival, so I'll come back and have a look if I have nothing to do. What? ? ? Is it over? I actually quite like this kind of daily-paced novel, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly, which is a bit regretful. I looked through the comments and found some good reviews. Personally, I feel that reading novels all depends on your preference. If you like it, support it. If you don't like it, return to the main page to find works that suit your taste. Compared with those who criticize history and the Japanese stage, I think it is even more inappropriate to criticize the author. The author writes about his world, his designs, and his preferences, and what is written is his heart. Isn't the point of trolling here and there just to express that you don't like it? If you don't like it, just give up. Why do you need to make personal attacks to show your sense of existence? Also, for the author, although this is the author's first book, it can be seen that he put a lot of care and effort into it. Although the writing is not strong enough, the characters are vivid and soulful, and the male and female protagonists have outstanding personalities. I don't know how much better than the male protagonist who claims to be the devil but has no actual feelings written by some authors, and the female protagonist who changes her name without any sense of contradiction and has no character description. The direction of the plot is much better than that of some authors who are famous due to speculation, who still follow the same routine after writing books for several years, and Xinyi who is inexplicably self-proclaimed and slapped in the face. I feel that the author has surpassed many of his colleagues in terms of intention. What is missing is precipitation. I hope to see the excitement that the author can give me in his next book.

The empire is fruitless, the throne is not seated, and the kingdom is not crossed. Let's put it this way, at the beginning when the author's inspiration strikes, he is very motivated to write. At this moment, he often can't help but think of the future plot. If he doesn't write it down, he will soon forget how to write it later. Many times what you think and what you write are completely different. You need to consider the character. This is how Carvin came about. I once wrote about a story about a newbie, and within ten chapters there were already five female protagonists. I saw that this was not going to work, so one of them lurked as soon as she appeared in the first chapter, and another one moved. This time I finally understood that in any novel, there cannot be more than 5 female protagonists in the same stage. Because this book is just a daily story and has no metaphysics, the only scene called "Your Name" was also cut. The protagonist is still in the same place, and several girls look up and look down. It is difficult for the author to control the plot when there is a blockage, and because there is no reasonable reason, he can only cut the scene forcibly. Kawasaki counts as a "flag related to the work", and Mitsuha only mentions "flag for the extra chapter". Therefore, it is impossible for new girls to appear in the middle and later stages. [Common problems in these two-dimensional xx novels] There are also some problems with the main plot. Is it daily picking up girls or creating a two-dimensional country? I think the title of the novel should not be called Second Dimension xx, but should be called [The protagonist of a big family who travels through the Second Dimension world but doesn't know that he is in the Second Dimension and takes a girl to work as a copycat on his daily life]. From the effect point of view, the source of vitality of the novel is those girls [every time I see new characters appear, I am very motivated to read the book. I guess the author is also very motivated and inspired to write]. However, as mentioned before, there are no new ones in the middle and later stages. As a result, the rest of the book seemed dull and lifeless. The author felt uncomfortable writing it, and the readers felt uncomfortable because their appetites were whetted. So the book simply ended and was discontinued. Therefore, if there are too many one-time copies of two-dimensional daily texts, there will be no need to write them later. I started with a bunch of girls, but after a few hundred chapters, that bunch of girls also became veterans after hundreds of chapters, so I had to let go of some during the period, but what was left was not the better or more popular ones, but the author's helplessness and the readers' sighs. Unless the protagonist changes the map, but the island is so big, where can it be changed? There are no Japanese anime girls in other countries, not to mention that the limited map for the side mission of creating 2D xx can only be a small island. The final summary is that most of the girls are very attractive at first, but in the end they have to bear the pain of stomach problems. I hope the author can make a copy in an orderly manner next time. Forget it this time. I was disappointed and gave up. I will become a regular next time. The empire has no results [broken update], the throne has not been seated [unfinished], and the country has not been crossed [? ? .

This book is extremely toxic and has no core content. It just sells a bunch of my wife's characters. There are too few interesting things and then it immediately jumps to another heroine. There are too many characters, and there are several anime that I have never seen. The author sells characters and I don't even know what the heroine is like in the original book. It's just a hodgepodge. I don't understand why so many fans think this is good. It's a mess, with a new heroine appearing every now and then, and another one appearing every now and then. . . . . . So many anime are arranged in one book. There are actually quite a few readers who buy it. Is it because I don't get along with the readers from a few years ago?

By the way, is the author still writing books?

Please introduce some two-dimensional anime novels to read. As for the harem, don't introduce it. Don't waste my time. I don't care about the three views and IQ. I just don't accept the harem.

And that's it! Although I know this woman's character! But their previous relationship was clearly between strangers! It's the first time that you've tricked someone in front of you, and you're so venomous! What else is said about Japan being a country of etiquette! ! Huanyi narcissistically thinks that he has no friends because he is too beautiful. Isn't it because of his poisonous tongue and personality? The male protagonist is a 26-year-old man, but he still can't argue with a woman of this character? Come up and cut someone else's shorts, including my sister! The male protagonist's response turned out to be someone else's dissatisfaction with his sister! Sister Bai was nice to him! I am speechless😒

The male protagonist is disgusting (; 1_1), his reaction and behavior are too disgusting

I was speechless when I saw that my first girlfriend was not Megumi Kato but Maki who was offline most of the time The three-leaf line was also missing, Kaoru Miyazono just brushed it off The main character is basically a central air conditioner who can write, draw and play the piano.

I only watched a little bit. The protagonist is Yazi, who is not very smart.

Alas, if the author doesn't want to accept so many female protagonists, then he shouldn't write those female characters.

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Don't watch the plot between the male protagonist and his sister, the more you watch it, the more you can't stand it 😅

That's too much praise🙄