The Martial Way of Dao Qi

I have only read the first few dozen chapters. The author's plot ideas are okay, but they are a bit immature and not rigorous. The three views are too correct. The reasons for creating conflicts and fights are a bit far-fetched and out of place. The traces of characterization are a bit serious. The excuse my father wants to make when he wants the five methods is too far-fetched. The words of spreading the law all over the world are a bit false. Of course, when I first went to the trial, I killed some ant beasts and there was an evil aura that made those beasts afraid to come close. The evil aura was so easy to control. I probably scared people to death just standing there. The Taixuan Sutra said that it would cause disasters, but I still have to reason there and erect a monument for the old man. I showed that book to my son, and told them I couldn't take it away with you, so I tried to take advantage of them. I'm pretty sure that the author himself is a very principled and upright person.,, If you don't obey me, I will die for you. You must obey me. To my dad, if I don't write to you, I won't write to you. The worst I can do is run away from home and cut off all ties. I feel like the author is in his rebellious stage, and he hits the wall in many places for no reason. I won't comment anymore. One comment will be a bit disappointing. After all, I am an old bookworm.

This article will definitely not be popular. After reading the first ten chapters, I feel that the author is too young and lacks social experience. The writing is so childish!

The introduction persuaded me to quit, and the bells and whistles meant nothing.

Opportunities and crises coexist for the human race? You haven't graduated from elementary school and are still illiterate? What does crisis mean? Can you look it up in a dictionary and write it down? Seeing this makes me so embarrassed!

After reading it, I felt heartbroken, both for Liufa and Ningze.

It's so fake and disgusting. Confucius is not as powerful as the protagonist.

I liked the book very much in the early days. The author's story is very good, and the writing style in the later period is also very good. It is a rare second-hand novel.

I think the title of this book should be changed to: Qi, Shivering, Cold. 😰

The protagonist uses whips, but those who like swords, knives, and guns can escape.

What a shame for the time traveler