The Demon-Hunting Academy

It's hard to imagine that this book is already three years old. And what's very funny is that I opened this book accidentally three years ago and was persuaded to give up by the clueless narrative about being led away from the playground to take the exam. Three years later, I opened this book again, only to find that in the past few years, "High School" has become a work that I couldn't bear to put down. I read the end of this volume intermittently for several months (to be honest, I opened the table of contents after reading it for a while and suddenly found that the last chapter was the epilogue, which shocked me). I felt too embarrassed to hold on to it, so I started writing this short review. In terms of artistic style, it is rare in recent years to see works that so perfectly integrate Eastern philosophy and Western philosophy, mysticism and scientism, realism and freehand brushwork, literature and art and pragmatism. It is not difficult to see the influence of the Harry Potter series, but compared with the previous novels that all inherited HP's magical worldview (there are many on this site) and the completely orientalized magical world adventure narratives (such as the "Chinese" series by writer Feng Ge), the strength of this work lies in the organic penetration of the two systems, creating a world and story that can be enjoyed by both audiences and can survive in the soil of online literature. In terms of narrative style, it is still based on HP's style and is sublimated to the author's own style. Aunt Luo is particularly good at using small details and side effects to show the story, advance the plot, and highlight the characters. This is especially evident in this work. What is even more valuable is that on top of this, the article also reflects the down-to-earth, direct, bold white space, and enlightening characteristics of the Chinese narrative method, without giving people the feeling of a weird imitation of the translation. At the level of wording and sentence making, or the level of technique, subjective feelings seem to be more descriptive. Abandoning the shortcomings of fast-food Internet articles that are always full of spit but poor writing, this article brings readers a high-level reading experience, which can be seen from the author's stable and superb writing skills, literary thoughts and philosophical thoughts. Especially the quotations from short poems in the last few chapters are wonderful. Therefore, I wrote the words "chuchen brushstrokes" in the title. It is really not easy to find a book that allows people to calmly enjoy the beauty of words in an impetuous environment. In terms of character creation, thanks to the delicate side descriptions and highlights, as well as the reasonable plot arrangement, the creation of flesh and blood is also a matter of course. Different from the cookie-cutter character templates, each character in "High School" behaves and speaks in a different way, which is also one of the hard indicators for judging a good book. Perhaps the characteristic of the protagonist Zheng Qing is that he has no characteristics. He can be submissive or angry, he can be a low-key boy who has a reputation as a public student but is self-conscious about his virtues and abilities, or he can be a domineering big cat waving his claws outwards. Such a diverse but not very prominent image leaves room for empathy and empathy for every reader. Whether it is the various characters surrounding the protagonist, the villains who are in conflict with him, or even the captains and their subordinates on the big ships who conspired on the river, everyone has their own soul, which is commendable. In addition to the above-mentioned evaluation of traditional literature, facing a novel based on Internet literature, it is necessary to talk about the time and space structure of the work. The time and space prices in this work are extremely rich. From the world of mortals to the transcendent world of Hui Zi Ji, and then to the mage world in between, the alien starry sky overhead, the ocean-going ship... The structure of space is already very rich; the stories of each small fragment of time divided by the plot are also well detailed. The underlying system architecture is a supernatural power system of scientific thinking. Everything is completely orderly but rich in imaginative and ingenious design. If possible, I hope to see more prominent and dramatic main lines and collisions between various forces in the next few volumes. Another three years will not be too long to write such a masterpiece.

I've only seen Chapter 450, so I'll give you my own opinion. There is no doubt that the world framework of this book is huge, the system of structure is relatively rigorous, and the characterization of the characters is also good. But the characterization of the main character is a bit poor. It can be seen that the author wanted to show the growth of the protagonist like Harry Potter, but the author ignored Zheng Qing's age. Zheng Qing is a college student and has the ability to live in society; while Porter is just an 11-year-old primary school student. Porter's immaturity is understandable, but Zheng Qing's frequent childish behavior makes it difficult not to question his mental age and IQ. As an adult, it is hard to believe that he would still think that "university is a university for students" and argue about the equality of elves and humans. If the setting is that the protagonist is still in elementary school or junior high school, I can understand it, but he is already in college! Also, when I saw a beautiful girl in the class, my brain twitched. I was really convinced. As an adult, take action if you like them. What kind of man are you talking about others all day long and being in a daze when you meet them? In general, except for the character of the protagonist, I like everything else about this book so far. I hope there will be different surprises when I read the next part.

Good books are not popular, but what can I say? Unreasonably and unexpectedly, there is either no emotional drama in the Qidian book, or seven or eight women fall in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. But the emotional drama in this book is extremely delicate and comfortable. In the Internet era, many authors wrote emotional dramas in a mess, and it was difficult to determine the scale. This book is really well written. How to put it this way, I generally can't stand books that are too long (The School Beauty's Personal Assistant seems to have almost 10,000 chapters). If the writing is long, it will be easy to make clichés, and the characters will become stereotyped if they appear too many times. This book currently has more than 1,200 copies. First of all, the author's imagination is still strong, and there is no routine at present. Then the characters are written by the author with clear priorities, and some supporting characters are not described at all. Therefore, in these more than 1,200 chapters, there are not too many characters and there is no facial expression. The protagonist of more than 1,200 pictures is just a freshman and has not yet become a registered wizard. There are still several stages to follow. But when the author wants to end it, he may feel that the world view has been basically shaped and he can't write anything else to end it. The author uses the protagonist as a forbidden spell to directly bridge the power gap of several wizard levels. Then in the seventh section, the demon is lured out, and the protagonist explodes, releasing the power of the forbidden curse. Kill Voldemort directly like Harry Potter. How should I put it, the author doesn't need to end it so early. Your book is actually more interesting than Harry Potter. Harry Potter doesn't have a specific power grading power system at all and it's not very comprehensive. Harry Potter is popular because it is the first book to reveal the mysteries of wizards. In fact, the author's book is much more complete, so don't let your book down. Think about it, the seventh volume is over, so what is the daily life of a registered wizard, how do you become a great wizard, and what are the laws of power of a legendary wizard? The conclusion of your seventh volume is a bit of a waste. The main character of Harry Potter explodes in size at the end. I think a big factor is that the division of his powers is very confusing. The division of power in your book is very clear. It can be written like One Piece, where the protagonist slowly upgrades, and it won't be like a fantasy book where the protagonist just changes the map. When the wizard reaches the registered wizard, there will definitely be many differences between the wizard and the great wizard, and the book will not become routine. Alas, the seventh volume is over, and I feel like a lot of things have not been written, as if I just finished the appetizers and the restaurant said it was closing. One last thing, I read this book during the epidemic. I was a student. School didn't start, so I didn't have much pocket money. Make up for the full booking when school starts. Put it up as evidence,

After reading more than a hundred chapters of this book, you can probably understand why it is not popular. Of course, these are some of my personal views. If you have different opinions, I hope everyone can communicate in a friendly manner. The first one is that the previous chapters feel that they lack one or more motivations for readers to continue reading. In other words, the plot tension is not enough. Specifically, at the beginning of this book, I received an invitation letter, and then various descriptions and various foreshadowings were given. These descriptions and foreshadowing are good, but the problem is that the motivation for readers to continue reading is "What is the school behind the invitation letter like?" And as the number of chapters increases, the reading motivation at this point continues to decrease. The author even spent several chapters describing the banshee, which makes it easier for readers to reduce the motivation to read. Give me a good example in this regard. For example, "The End of the Song Dynasty" begins with the protagonist being in prison, and readers naturally want to know how he will get out; just after trying his best to get out of prison in a thrilling way, he is assigned an impossible and difficult task, as well as various other character relationships. Everyone wants to know more about them and the subsequent plot, and the sense of rhythm and motivation to read are all at once. I also read part of this book. I always couldn't stand it after reading one or two chapters, so I turned it off. After a day or two, I continued to open it and read another chapter or two, and then I could barely continue reading. (Mainly because there are no books to read) The second point is a feeling of nondescript. It refers to the inconsistency between various elements of plot, character behavior, scene environment and background atmosphere, which can easily cause readers to lack imagination and involvement, and there is no unified background and atmosphere The protagonist is Chinese and his classmates are from various countries. It uses the Western fantasy title of wizard, and also has elements of Eastern fantasy such as talismans and seal scripts. It has both ancient elements such as guardian door gods, and modern elements such as flying to school. Some readers may not understand what I am talking about after reading this. Let me give you an example. If I write that the protagonist and his party came to the Forbidden City and stood in front of the palace gate. Then readers will naturally imagine the red walls and gold tiles of the Forbidden City, the royal atmosphere and open square, and the grand atmosphere of ancient times. I also wrote that the protagonist and his party arrived at the old castle in the west at the end of the month. Then readers can naturally think of the gloomy and deserted castle in the west at night. When the moonlight falls, bats start up from the nearby woods and fly into the castle. Then I write this: An Eastern-style city wall surrounds a Western castle, and guards patrol it with a gun. That might be a bit abstract. Based on this sentence alone, is the guard imagined by the reader actually the armor of the East? Or is it Western armor? Or are they wearing modern special operations uniforms, or are they wearing ancient clothes? This is the source of nondescript. Of course I will continue to read, after all, the book shortage is really too uncomfortable. When I pull up the ranking list at the starting point, those at the top have either read it or some other ghost.

Even though I have written the seventh volume, I still haven't seen the growth of the protagonist. Knowing that Lao Yao is the Great Demon Queen, I am too scared to look at Lao Yao. Doesn't the protagonist think about how many times Lao Yao wiped your butt for you last semester? When something happens, he doesn't tell his hunting team whether they are looking for Jiang Yu or Su Shijun. My own emotions are also irritated. I know that Elena has given you medicine and you are still licking it, so I can't keep calm. After Elena was no longer in school, she flirted with Jiang Yu again. Knowing that Elena was less and less in his mind, he still comforted himself that he and Jiang Yu were just classmates. Fatty Xin was right: a scumbag! There is a reason why good books are not popular

I didn't read much. I didn't understand why it wasn't popular when I read the first few. The writing and imagination were top-notch, until I saw the big brother making a very blunt and extreme transformation of a wizard into a demon. When it was already very blunt, the big brother actually used 8 chapters to write a supporting character who is incomparable with the protagonist. Yes, you heard it right, 8 chapters were used. If you skip these 8 chapters, it will not affect your reading at all. At this time, I understood why it was not popular. The reason is very simple. High EQ: youth disease, low EQ: self-pleasure.

After reading 16%, there are probably 200 chapters, right? Let's talk about your feelings, let's talk about the shortcomings first. The pace is too slow, really too slow. I see that now, the protagonist has not started practicing. It can be seen that the author is very careful, but there is no need to write so many plots, which seems very procrastinating and the priorities are not obvious. You can see the author's intention and feel the author's intention, but this kind of rhythm can easily make people tired. The free period is okay, but it is easy to lose readers once it is on the shelf. Some people may just put it on the bookshelf and think of reading a few chapters occasionally. I didn't get much rest for the update issue, but there were a few chapters where my brother told me to take one chapter a day, so let's just do it! Then let's talk about the advantages. The world view is perfect. Harry Potter's Western fantasy world integrates Eastern culture. Some settings are a bit awkward, but it does not affect the overall situation and has no poisonous points. The writing is okay, the plot setting is not stupid, and the character creation is also good. These are all good.                                                                                                                                           <br    It seems that the level of wizards is not very clear (could it be registered wizard, associate professor, professor, tenured professor, senior professor, etc...)

It's great, more reasonable than traditional Harry Potter-style fantasy, more detailed than most modern fantasy, and better written than most online books. Coupled with very good localization and a certain degree of international perspective, the whole world is very fascinating and is the biggest surprise I have seen in recent times.

It is said that this book is planned to be written in a total of 7 volumes. Now the sixth volume has been completed. The protagonists are all still in the first grade (˘•ω•˘) To be honest, I am a little panicked.

I just started reading it. The author's writing style is very good. The world construction in the book is very detailed and rich in details. It makes people feel like they can touch such a fantasy world by closing their eyes. Moreover, each character has a full and three-dimensional image, which is vivid on the paper. Everyone has advantages and some shortcomings. The little shortcomings make the characters come alive, such as Zheng Qing's shyness at the beginning, Xiao Xiao's dislike of trouble (haha, this may not be considered a shortcoming), etc., Because there are no perfect people in the world, and some small flaws make the characters more human. Finally, what I really like is: the characters that appear are both male and female (😂). I have read several novels before that are obviously very well written. The supporting characters and everyone I meet, um... Are all women. Even the insignificant tool man must be a woman. How should I put it, it feels weird. There is no such phenomenon in this book, hehe, it's really good.

I have read more than half of it, and I would like to say that this book is very grand in terms of the structure of the world and other aspects. It can be seen that the author has put great care into it, and the writing style is also quite good, at a food level. But the pace of this book is too slow. Slow pace can certainly optimize the detailed reading experience, but if it is too slow, readers will not have the patience to read on. Also, why is the protagonist still licking Elena after 1.5 Million words? This is really hard to appreciate.

I'm curious to ask how the author plans to continue to develop the world view in the future. If he graduates from school step by step, he will write tens of millions of dollars, and the protagonist currently does not even have a registered wizard (in terms of strength, including the forbidden spell bullets, he should be quite high...

To be honest, the writing is very good. After reading Chapter 196, the whole text looks very comfortable. The description is delicate and I can see that the author is very careful. Give the author a thumbs up It feels like an old book, read it slowly and you won't get tired of it, it's plain and simple. But. . . I still hope that there will be more fun and exciting plots later. It may also make people feel that the change is too abrupt and inconsistent with the style of the previous article, and it is not clear. Anyway, cheers, author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡I like it very much

I would like to ask what is the use of the spell book? The spells copied from it are gone after being used once. If there is a war, are you waiting for you to copy new spells? They also say that the seal is useless. The magic wand is useless. From the setting, the spell book should be copied from the model. When you use it, you can input the magic power to use it. You see what you wrote, there are times when the spells are not used up during battles It is said that wizards all learn spells. The elders all have family martial arts, the blue giant relies on transformation, the doctor is either a turtle shell or a grass, the gentleman relies on talent and blood, Lin Guo is an alchemy item, and there is a pure swordsman, the funniest way to play with a rune gun is pig's feet. Just teach some things about life and negative status, and ask people to form a team and go to the battlefield Alpha said that it is normal to discriminate against magicians based on blood. Jiuyou said it was fair and just, but what did he do And the pig's feet lowered the intelligence too much

A very good novel, I have been reading it for 5 or 6 years. Books are as plain as water and as mellow as wine. Thank you to the author for always updating, and I came here specifically to support the official version. I apologize for being short of money.

Let me tell you my feelings after reading 500 chapters. The author has a very rich imagination, the plot design is also very good, and every character's appearance is very interesting. At the beginning, I felt that the male protagonist's character was the biggest poisonous point, but as the story develops, I can feel that the male protagonist has grown up, gradually gained responsibility, and learned how to behave and do things. Seeing him reminds me of me when I first went to college😂... The disadvantage is that the character is a bit labelled, although in other novels it may be an advantage. But for this "everyday" novel, I still hope to refer to the writing method of light novels and reflect more of the character's inner nature. This is a matter of opinion.

The beginning of this book is a bit like Dragons, but the subsequent development is a bit like Harry Potter. The pace is a bit slow and there are many daily routines. The author's writing style is very good. It is a slow-burning novel, suitable for calming down and savoring slowly.

I just watched the second part. To be honest, I felt very conflicted. The part between Nikita and Zhou Zhou made me feel cold and a little disgusted. I almost gave up. The author's depiction of monsters is so explicit in the whole world, which is rare. It makes me love and hate it at the same time. NB

I accidentally came across this book that I didn't know when I was playing with the bookshelves out of boredom. Driven by boredom, I inadvertently opened this book and couldn't help myself (because writing is too difficult and I really can't express my thoughts in words).                   ，，， (The author's relaxed writing style is so immersive)

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The writing is pretty good, but it has a very difficult-to-understand setting. Why did the author set the age of the protagonist to 18? If it was just to match the age of college, then there are clearly examples of students entering school at the age of 12 in the book. Does the author realize that the protagonist in his novel is too naive? The entrance section gives people the feeling of Harry Potter entering Hogwarts for the first time. So am I praising the author for his good writing? Are you still criticizing the author? You must know that Harry Potter entered school at the age of twelve, and the author's protagonist is eighteen years old, eighteen years old! Also when the protagonist acts as a backdrop, the passerby looks very much like an eighteen-year-old. Although he is not mature enough, he is not considered naive, but as long as he acts like the protagonist, his mind will immediately fall into the sixth grade of elementary school. This contrast is really hard to see. . . If the author said that when he was eighteen years old, the way he spoke and treated others was really the same as the protagonist in the book, then I would have nothing to say. With a pure heart 👏, I have learned a lot. I wonder what will happen if we look back? Maybe he is a growth-prone protagonist that is extremely rare in online novels? Maybe the subsequent series of events made the protagonist more and more mature? But the "childish eighteen-year-old" at the beginning is really quite poisonous. I was thinking how to make these relatively childish scenes more reasonable without changing most of the original plot? If the design is that the protagonist graduates from junior high school and is in a non-wizard family, in order to better integrate the young wizards born in non-wizard families into the wizarding world, the university will conduct early admissions and let the protagonist first attend the wizard high school affiliated with the First University for three years and then spend four years in college. The author spent seven years describing the world in his novel. Will the background of the world and the development of the plot be smoother? Then the protagonist looks like he is fifteen years old after graduating from the third grade of junior high school, and his childish behavior is nothing to criticize. As the book ages, the protagonist's performance in dealing with various major events can really make readers feel that the protagonist is growing up. Then this is simply a masterpiece.

The book is indeed a good book, but it is not suitable for an optimist like me. Some of the stories are a bit sad and depressing.

There are a few female protagonists, if there are more, I will watch them

What have you written? How many chapters have you written? You haven't learned anything yet.

As title. Mark: Now the display shows 7.01 Million words, 2000 words per day, which is equivalent to writing for 3505 days, aka, 9.603 Years... I wonder if I can add 10,000 words to celebrate the tenth anniversary~🙂🙂🙂

So far, there are more than 200 chapters, and the plot is very good. But the main character really makes my balls ache. From what I have read so far, the book repeatedly emphasizes the dangers of this world. No matter what, he should be a little wary, but it's a pity that the protagonist is not. The protagonist feels like a simple setting to me, a curious, young boy, and a beginner wizard (who doesn't understand anything). Yes, more than two hundred chapters have been the same as the first chapter, and the initial character setting has not changed. If you say that the protagonist has just entered school now, I believe it. I don't understand that in such a university, in such a supernatural "society", the people and things around me are repeatedly telling the protagonist (and also explaining to the readers) that "the wizarding world is actually very dangerous". So from the time of school to the present, the protagonist is not expected to be a fish in water, but at least he should be able to acquire the above-mentioned basic concepts in his studies, life, and books, right? Why is it that after shaking hands with others in this chapter, my finger was pricked and bleeding continued, and why was there still no sense of "vigilance" when the blood was extracted? Isn't there the word "blood" that wizards are wary of? Moreover, someone pricked his finger and it bled, so why not be suspicious? The protagonist's attitude and behavior have not kept up with the progress of the plot at all. He was simply placed in this plot point by the author. He can only reflect the purpose, but cannot feel the evolution of the protagonist's personal characteristics (as the plot progresses). The feeling is that when the time set by the author comes, the protagonist will jump up a level and grow up naturally. However, the more than two hundred chapters in the middle have no transitional purpose. The narrative plot does not serve as nutrients for the protagonist's growth at all, allowing him to grow "little by little." Looking at this protagonist, or tool man, I just feel disconnected. My personal feeling is, "I've read more than two hundred chapters, but why do I feel like you, the protagonist, are still at the very beginning?"

I'm really speechless. No matter how many times I read it, I still have no reaction to the protagonist being tricked into taking away his shadow by a stranger. Can the author explain why? What is Su Shijun? Why did the shadow protagonist who she deceived the protagonist have no reaction at all and just accepted it so happily? Some of the previous operations can only be said to be that the protagonist is a bit dull and a bit virginal, but after all, it can be understood that he has received nine years of compulsory education. He has high quality, strong empathy, and does not understand the magical world. But you have been cheated out of your shadow practice, so you are still indifferent? Didn't you ask the teacher or something to check again afterwards? Just accepted it so readily?

This protagonist often yells, often loses his voice, likes to argue, likes to be sarcastic, likes to ridicule, is easily irritable, has a bad memory, speaks without thinking, does not care about other people's affairs, nor does he care about his own affairs...

I feel like a lot of people say the protagonist is childish, but actually I don't think the protagonist is childish. But everyone has watched too many young and mature protagonists, and they have forgotten what a fresh freshman should look like. I think the author wrote it very well. The concubine Ming was still a loser in her freshman year, but she was able to chop down Odin with a knife in her junior year. This is the growth history of a young man, not only on the physical and ability level, I think the spiritual level is more important.

Emmmmmmm, the subject matter is very attractive and the writing is good, but it's just that 1. The plot is too slow and lengthy. It took several chapters to portray the supporting characters and more than ten chapters to write about flying. 2. The character of the protagonist is a bit outrageous. Although the life circle is very narrow since childhood, it is not like the 18-year-old who always blushes and wants to imitate HP's style. The character is used to portray the protagonist as he matures step by step. The premise is the age. He is a child, you are an adult, sister There is a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and the world background is very large, but the previous ones are true and will not attract many people who like fast-food novels. People who can calm down and read slowly will also give up because of the portrayal of the protagonist. I have only read more than fifty chapters, and I can't help but come here to complain. Again, this is a very good book, but if you are used to white text and fast food style, I recommend swiping right or the upper left corner.