Eternal Star Lord

I am also a shopper, so a monthly subscription costs one or two hundred yuan. . I have basically cut out all the ones in the same period, and I am almost reaching the threshold of one million. I write it down just for the completeness of the story. And the further I write, the more I find errors and omissions in the outline I made before. If I had cut it off at 400,000 words, it would be impossible to discover these. All I can say is that the big guys can cut it, but the street guys have to finish at least one book, not necessarily one million, but they have to finish your outline. Only then will there be progress. The chances of following the same old path in the next book will be reduced as much as possible. Those that are cut and opened are popular for a while and then become popular again. They don't even know how to become popular, so come on, encourage each other. (By the way, I'm surprised that you haven't even finished with two million.)

Come on, author, it will definitely work.

The first chapter was swallowed. What do you want me to think? ? ?

I want to ask, what is cultivation? What is the difference between cultivating Taoism and cultivating immortality?

Although the author has written so many words, it is really amazing, but to be honest, I barely read dozens of chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The author seems to be afraid that if he writes the protagonist well, he will be called a noob. If you are a master, everyone will still bear to read on, but. . . Don't talk about improvements in the future. If you can't stand it in front of you, who will look at the back. I think the author should consider finishing the book and starting a new book. In the next book, don't let the literary youth suppress the protagonist.

Thinking about Mr. Qin holding a pig in his arms, he was heartbroken with grief 😅

Hello author, I saw your post on Zhihu and I admire you very much.

Could it be that the protagonist is starting a harem?

This book describes the strength of cultivators as useless, and their abilities are the same as those of martial arts. Is it deliberately belittling the cultivation system? Finally, let's combine the duality of cultivation and Taoism to achieve BOSS.

Because I am poor, I dare not speak. I have been subscribing before and have not spoken. If you do this, you can check that I am ranked tenth on the fan list. To be honest, I have been chasing it for a while and I can't leave it. I just want to give some advice. To be honest, it is rare to see such a weak protagonist these days. I am not saying that you must read cool articles, but what is the purpose of reading online articles? It's just for fun, it doesn't require the protagonist to be strong, but it does have to be tough occasionally, but to be honest, I read hundreds of chapters, and when I got out, I basically didn't get through it. I usually relied on my teammates. What's even more frightening is that the people around the protagonist are dying one by one. I haven't seen a new supporting role now. After it came out, I was wondering how many pictures this person can last. What do I hope the author can say? I just want to make the protagonist stronger in writing. I don't necessarily want to push the protagonist all the way like Shuangwen, but I want to have my own opinions and don't explore 1.1 Points under the trajectory arranged by others. To be honest, I have some ideas in my mind about the paths and routines arranged by others, such as Yudie, Baiguxingjun, etc. So, I hope the author can have more insights of his own. As for the rhythm, I will talk about it below, because this paragraph is a bit long.

Read the latest chapter. Previous Life, if you, the author, take these chapters as the beginning and don't brag about them, then this book will really become popular. 🤭

The author doesn't explain how the protagonist escapes! Go directly back to Taoist Temple to obtain scriptures 🤫

I just read Chapter 17. Cultivation should be about cultivating Qi and cultivating immortality. This cultivation gives me the feeling of the belief system of Western gods. The protagonist's improvement does not seem to be achieved by self-cultivation, but more like the protagonist understanding the scriptures of the Bone Star Lord. After the soul resonates with the bones, it relies on the starlight emitted by the Bone Star Lord to improve, especially after subduing the demon wolf. It is like Western religion, forcing belief and using Taoism in advance. Isn't it the divine magic of Western gods?

The most disgusting plots when reading novels nowadays are: mysterious identity, deep hatred, witch mother, devil daddy, and forced names, can't they be ordinary? , The villain seems to have no IQ. It is said that villains have always had the advantage since ancient times, right? Can the protagonist have a complete life?

It's good to be able to write so much no matter what my grades are... Compared to someone like me who always wants to write but never puts pen to paper...😅

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Five-star praise, the plot is ups and downs, interlocking, extremely exciting, support!

I saw it on Zhihu and it felt pretty good. However, after reading your writing style, it didn't catch on, so I decisively gave up the idea of ​​writing a book by myself 🤫🤫

It is simply unforgivable that such a protagonist cannot die. The protagonist has a low IQ and is surrounded by pig teammates