Sitting and Forgetting Eternal Life

I like Liu Qinghuan's character so much, a gentleman is nothing more than that. Neither arrogant nor impatient, neither hasty nor slow, knows when to be patient and when to be arrogant. I will not forget my old friends and friends because of my position, nor will I abandon my Taoist companions half-heartedly. Responsible and ambitious, knowing how to advance and retreat, wanton in front of friends, cruel in the eyes of enemies. There are many avenues, but I only take one. I have empathy for mortals, awe for my predecessors, and I am clever and clever. This is also the immortal I imagined!

Since the enemy has captured both the male protagonist's Taoist companion and his disciples, how can we make the protagonist miserable? At least men should do this and women should do that! Isn't it possible that the enemy would be over with a few lashes? No way! No way! Since the author wrote this kind of plot, he had to give the villain a brain. The hatred is so great, I hope it won't be so casual!

I just read the chapter about breaking up with Yun Zheng, but I skipped through the previous chapters after getting acquainted with Yun Zheng. To be honest, from the previous chapters, the author has somewhat failed in shaping the protagonist of this book, because I think based on the protagonist's growth experience, his character is too out-of-the-box and unstable. I have been a beggar since I was a child. When I was four or five years old, I had to fight for food with many beggars. Later, when I was ten years old, the city was destroyed and I walked with so many refugees for such a long time. I never saw any ugliness on the road. Later, when he became an immortal, he went down the mountain and entered the city for the first time, but he didn't know the principle of keeping wealth secret. Did he not hide and eat it quickly when he was a beggar, but walked through the market with it? Won't other beggars rob? As a person who has been at the bottom of society since childhood, it is impossible to understand this. Logically speaking, the protagonist's character should be much more mature than his peers. Not to mention he was robbed later when he left the city. After being rescued by Yun Zheng, he instantly became stupid and sweet. Where is his cleverness? What about caution? To be honest, the description of the journey with Yun Zheng was really incomprehensible, so I just skipped it. Hey, I hope the shaping will be better later. The character and experience are really inconsistent.

Recently, there have been a lot of people in the book review area, some of them praised it, some of them disliked it, and most of them just read it for a long time, but they were not interested in it, not enthusiastic, and it was not very interesting, so they ridiculed it, threw up their sleeves, and left. In fact, one of the biggest feelings this book gave me was the loneliness of cultivating immortals. Looking at it now, I feel more and more that this is the world of cultivating immortals where hundreds of rivals compete. The conspiracy and intrigues in the early days, the excitement and fame, looking back, they are just like floating clouds. The "old friends" are getting rarer and rarer, and they are only sighed when they talk about it after dinner. The fame, fortune and status of those days are like looking at childhood photos. You laugh twice and forget about them, and you may not think of them again for several years. Practice hard, the higher you climb, the higher the scenery, and the higher the regrets. There is no longer any rivals or rivals, nor is there any competition. Wherever you go, you will see the scenery, that's all. Liu Qinghuan is now, looking back, the road he has traveled is very long, looking up, the road ahead is very far, there are many regrets in the past, and there will be a lot of uneasiness in the future. Some scenery can never be seen again, and some people and events can only be recalled in fragments, but this is cultivation of immortality, isn't it. . . . This is a very slow book, so you need to chew twice more to get the taste

The battle and incident handling after the auction in more than 190 chapters were written extremely viciously, with too many loopholes. Why do you have to leave immediately after auctioning something to give others a chance? Senior brother actually has no contact information? And why did Jin Dan give you time to escape? If I don't want to kill you, why don't I just let you go? I already have the pill recipe anyway? Did the author suddenly realize after writing this that, alas, the protagonist seems to have no chance of escaping from the golden elixir, and he doesn't want to write about his senior brother and master saving his life. After all, a similar plot was written in Dongtianli not long ago, so the villain's IQ dropped a bit and his poisonous spots appeared.

It's just so-so, there are a lot of poisonous points, the writing style is limited, it's tasteless and it's a pity to discard it.

😷Ah, my favorite supporting character, Mo Qianli, was mentioned in one stroke. 😭 I cried. The writing is really good, and there are no redundant details to make up the word count. The scene changes are smooth and smooth. 😢 The most painful thing is falling in love with a serialized novel, I cried.

The book review area is full of chaos. Some people denigrate the book when they see it is not what they imagined, which makes people laugh. To sum up, there are basically the following points: First, the system of exercises is incomplete. Zhu Xian Zichuan and others from more than ten years ago did not have a detailed description of the systematic skills, but the foreshadowing before and after could be filled in or self-contained, without losing the fighting power or the character, and the plot was complete. Not all books spend so much space on the specifics that you can see the numerical values ​​​​in the game by moving the cursor over them in such detail and exaggeration. I really don't know what level of skills Chu Liuxiang has practiced. It does not affect the ups and downs of the plot. Second, the protagonist and supporting characters do not act according to the routines of cultivation novels. The reason is that the protagonist often gives up halfway through the game. To be honest, it's strange that everyone who doesn't like them will fight to the death. In cultivating immortals, growth is the first priority, and living up to one's Taoist aspirations is also one of them. Others are done based on interests. There are times when the protagonist has to fight to the death, times when conflicts can be resolved, and times when he just lets things go, and the reasons are all traceable. This is very similar to reality. Even the people with the worst personalities in the article also have bottom lines and are afraid of respecting people and things. This is good, and the supporting characters will not be stereotyped. This distinction is considered poisonous and is indeed difficult to understand. Three, writing. Someone said, "It's not ancient." I have also heard of "not literary and not white", I don't know what a strange word it is, "not literary and not ancient", aren't literary and ancient the same thing? And there are never any words that are too modern in the dialogue, only in the narration. I think that's because the readers are modern and can easily reconstruct the scene with their imagination. To be honest, sometimes I feel tired from fighting over long and complicated sentences, because the sentence structure is so similar that it feels like I am writing down a log, especially the Bullshit Fairyland chapter, which is way off topic. The author's occasional exclamations are not abrupt, and the sentences are appropriately long and short, allowing readers to see the key scenes most intuitively. Moreover, the settings and songs in the text also show that the author is a very experienced person. It is better to talk about the plot than to talk about the writing But there are many problems. Changing the map is too abrupt. The plot ends too suddenly. All the developments are written as if the protagonist has been in seclusion for hundreds of years and has been released from seclusion for a long time. It feels a bit far-fetched to listen to what others say. Even if you occasionally don't want to write about the protagonist's experience, you can use narration to describe it. The Seal War ended inexplicably, and I felt like I just didn't want to go to the headset setting The outline of the Human World felt like it wasn't well thought out. It is indeed not kitsch to write about high-level monks and low-level monks on the same plane. But in fact, what level you are exposed to can still withstand scrutiny. You don't have to deliberately lower the level to be different from the high level. It will be very strange I'm sleepy. I won't say more. Please keep up the good work. You can update it every ten days. I just hope you don't supervise it.

You will definitely not be able to watch it if you have a brain, but you can try it if you don't have a brain. (Retreat from Chapter 7)

Niuwa Niuwa

This is the novel that I have read that is closest to the world of cultivating immortals (except Han Laomo). Although you have been touting other novels, don't you think other books are even more exaggerated than this book? Take the simplest magic weapon plug-in as an example, there is no other novel that is outrageous

I have read a lot of mortals, immortals, and fantasy genres. The writing of this book is excellent, and the worldview of the immortal world is relatively reasonable. The protagonist Liu Qinghuan is decisive in killing without being sloppy, brave and resourceful but not forced to be wise, calm but not cold-blooded, benevolent but not a bad person. The plot is quite exciting, with intrigues, experiences and growth, and vicissitudes of life. There are also some things that I am not satisfied with. The female protagonist has relatively few roles. I hope that the emotional line in the next book can be smoother. The weapon grades are not very clear and look a bit confusing. In addition, I feel that some of the dungeons could be written in a richer way, otherwise they would be a bit superficial and lack any impressive scenes. Some people use the name of giving advice to guide others in writing, which is too ridiculous. If you want to read the flow of mortals, just grab your few books and chew them, don't instruct others. Readers expect works that let a hundred flowers bloom, not formulaic works that only suit your personal taste. I haven't read a few chapters before judging this book. What's Danmei and what a female porn channel? I want to ask you how many chapters you've read before you scream here. It's not an obvious brotherhood between Yun Zheng and the little monk. Their brains are so clogged with p that they can't think anymore, right?

It's been so long since I've been a eunuch.

The book is very good, but no one recommends it? I feel like it's more interesting than ordinary people. The author is too slow to update. It took more than ten days to save less than 10 chapters, and I finished it in 20 minutes 😭😭😭

A monthly pass! Take good care of yourself and take your time

This book is good, has potential and content, and is worth adding to the shelf.

Does this book have a female protagonist? (Don't ask me whether I've never seen a woman or why don't I read it without a heroine? Similar questions, I will answer you: I'm just asking, it's none of your business. I'm asking the author. There is a big difference between having a heroine and not having a heroine. Everyone knows the difference.) I haven't started watching it yet! I read a few book reviews and it seems to be pretty good. Pure fairy tales may have old routines, but as the saying goes: Always the same, tastes good 😃 I haven't read this kind of writing for several years. I used to read some systematic books, and at the beginning it was a new variety 😏 I haven't read it, and I haven't read novels since I got tired of it. It's been several months.

This book is very exciting, better than many books in the top ten of the monthly ticket list, but the updates are a bit slow.

Updates so slow? You might as well stop updating it.

In the future, when you walk in the world of immortality, your name should be more unique. For example, I am not afraid of people like Liu Qinghuan who write names. I am not afraid of people like Liu Qinghuan who write names. I am not afraid of King Yinjiao. I am not bragging. He may not be able to repeat my name once I tell him! I have never lost a fight before bickering. Several of my opponents choked to death when they read my name! I have provoked a lot of big forces, but I have never been wanted. The big bosses looked at it for a long time and said: "Forget it, it's just a few fairy treasures. If it says that I have a myocardial infarction, it's not worth it!" So, when you go out to hang out, your name is very important!

By the way, I have been reading books for 20 years. Finding a good book is not easy. Today I will review some books I have read that I thought were particularly good.

I have also seen many mortals die. For example, in addition to this, I cultivate immortality scientifically among mortals, inquire about the immortal way, I have a world of immortality, Gou cultivates immortality in the troubled times of demons and martial arts, The Romance of Immortal Wood, Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rise from the Control of Beasts. I would like to ask here, are there any mortal novels in which the protagonists are Master Fa and Fa Xiu? The kind of Qi-building foundation elixir Yuanying system. The protagonist is good at casting spells, rather than relying on physical fighting, bombardment with magic weapons, or external forces such as spiritual beasts. Please It's really not easy to write. Now I'm also a desperate author. I understand.

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Generally speaking, the writing is very good, but it is a little wordy. Hehe~~ The structure is well-conceived and logical.

Why are they always being caught and tortured when building foundations, Jindan is still caught and tortured, and Nascent Soul Stage is still being caught and tortured. I want to know if people in the Transformation Stage are also caught and tortured. Without this, wouldn't the plot be promoted?

The protagonist is very unlikable, naive and immature. His mortal enemy is not willing to kill him. His legs go weak when he sees a woman. His emotional scenes are badly written. His eyes are straight when he looks at a woman.

I only saw the protagonist after his heart was broken and stopped reading this crappy book. This is the fourth time I've seen him on a limited edition. When I was reading the book, I still haven't become a god yet. Mosquito is still updating the old book. Now it's almost 10 million words long. This crappy book hasn't been finished yet. I'm really speechless.

I shouldn't compare you with mortals, but when I read the Cultivation of Immortals, I will unconsciously compare you with mortals. After all, in my heart, mortals are the well-deserved pinnacle in Cultivation of Immortals.

Read Chapter 64 to see how many can withstand it. I can't.

This book is really tasteless, and it would be a pity to throw it away... The protagonist is the Virgin Bitch. I suggest that the author should learn from Dao Zhengfeng if he wants to write such a glorious and upright protagonist.