I Have a City in Another World

After the lights were put on, the plot started to be relatively dull, and the writing did not have many ups and downs. The detailed description in the early stage was still very good, but there were not many details in one stroke later, and then the matryoshka was repeated endlessly. There were also many pitfalls, some of which were not understood by many, but they will be added later to add more water.

It's too slow. All dungeons have their cultivation levels sealed. You can start from level 0 and reach full level to open the dungeon! If you are infected by a virus, you must clean up the God-killing virus in yourself. As a BOSS, the protagonist starts from level 0 and reaches full level to defeat the virus. There is nothing wrong with the upgrade flow, but it would be boring to upgrade from level 0 over and over again! Go to the abyss to heal, fight with a pretentious gangster at the ticket gate, you can write about twenty chapters, what do you think of the follow-up?

The author gives the protagonist a super big weapon with low energy. Let me give you an example. The protagonist has an entire arsenal. If he meets someone with an AK-74, the protagonist will take a Type 51 pistol and fight the opponent for the audience to see. He uses a low-end method to fight with a high-level weapon. Another point is that others who are one level lower than the protagonist do not dare to move if they are suppressed by the protagonist's momentum. The protagonist can resist when facing someone who is 5 levels higher than himself. Being suppressed is also funny, and the plot behind it is like a Russian matryoshka doll. You have to call the author an ancestor. Let me tell you, the protagonist's castle level is higher than this place, and then suddenly find a place that is the same level as the protagonist's castle, or several or one level. After the protagonist conquers this place, he finds a higher level than the protagonist. The infinite set is speechless enough. I am speechless, really speechless.

The writing is very awesome, but in the hands of the protagonist, it looks very awkward. Holding such a strong hook, the development is grinding, the protagonist's halo is too heavy, it is not obvious that the protagonist will die early, and there is no little white pig's feet in the city, it is not suitable for this type of apocalypse.

At a glance, you can tell that the author has little education and little money. Don't you know that each RMB has its own serial number? If you get it from there, it will either not exist in the banking system, or it will be duplicated. A large number of counterfeit banknotes appear, won't people check them?

The first hundred or so chapters were very good, but then I gave up after reading two hundred. I came back to express my opinion: If you want to write a cool and exciting novel, you have to use your brain. You can't write books like Stepping on the Stars and Nomenclature of the Night. Others are also killing them along the way, but I don't want to write such a conflict of characters before and after you write it. I wrote it as soon as I started to get better. It doesn't make sense at all, there are a lot of pitfalls, and there are a lot of problems with conflicting settings. To be honest, the ratings here on Qimao are very watery. Many novels that are not so rigorous can be rated above 9.0. Think about it why it only has an 8.9 Rating. Also, to be honest, why can't I post comments? It's really that all the comments are spam.

The protagonist has two skills 1. The infinite transmission gate allows him to go back and forth from the original world to another world in seconds, which means that no one can kill him, not even injure him. 2. The protagonist achieves soul time-travel transplantation, and ordinary people have two lives. Practitioners have almost unlimited lives. With these two settings, are you sure you can stand it?

This is truly a rebirth, equivalent to rewriting a book

It's so bad, I can't even look at the back

If it weren't for the purpose of commenting, reading Chapter 20 would be too much. The male protagonist is not smart in the first place. He recruits a big man who looks like a fool and starts beating his own people. The combination of three people was almost accidentally injured. If there were more people, wouldn't it mean that a large number of his own people were accidentally killed?