The Elegant Prime Minister

This author has no social experience, and even a primary school student would not take it for granted. All for the sake of showing off, which woman would be incapable of acting just because she saw a handsome face for the first time? Demoting yourself to the level of a retard when you see your face? Do you think your face is made of gold? Also, based on the stupid things the protagonist does, he will never survive ten chapters in reality. Do you think what you wrote is a pretentious and slap-in-the-face story about traveling from the world of immortality to the city? Please, what you write is a historical article. To put it bluntly, you are just a small person who will have no impact even if you are killed by a powerful person. Why are you so mindless and crazy about pretending?

No matter how you write about the parallel world, you should at least check the information. Let alone the copper standard during the Han Dynasty, at least you know in the middle school textbooks what era "Jiaozi" appeared. The Han Dynasty in the parallel world already had the imperial examination, but you directly killed the nine-level Zhongzheng system! If you copy poems, you can't look through the Book of Songs or the Yuefu Poetry Collection. The most unbearable thing is that when Liu Bing entered a private school, he actually studied the Three Character Classic. How do you ask your husband to explain: "The man left behind a son, Jin Manxun; I taught the son, the only classic." I can't stand it, I really can't stand it.

The character of the reborn business tycoon is written as an idiot

The only thing that can be read in this book is the writing, and the rest is poisonous from beginning to end. In the end, I just wanted to see how poisonous this book can be. In summary, this book is a mess, which is generally caused by two aspects. On the one hand, I have no experience in reading it. I just rely on taking the plot for granted, and the control of the characters is also too descriptive. On the other hand, the chaos is because the author thinks that our brains are not good, and the settings in the past are directly changed later, and the characters in the past are completely missing from the plot later. Let's talk about the plot first. When Huo Guang was in power, he had to do everything over the emperor. Royal ancestor worship required him to lead the emperor to worship. And then such a person still doesn't want to rebel? You don't want to rebel but you still do things in a high-profile way than the emperor. Do you think you can't die soon enough? How can one become the number one person in the dynasty without such a bit of foresight? Let's look at the description of the Huo family's arrogant ways. A random boy can force the Marquis to kneel down and apologize in public for occupying land. The Huo family's teenage grandson can beat the country's Duke in public for no reason. Then the Duke dares not even let out a fart and has to go to the Huo family to apologize to the teenage children. Does Huo Guang still think it's normal? But it's just a duke's fight. I endured these two, and turned around for the third time. My son, who is even more arrogant than the grandson, dare not open the door of the main character's house who is still a Marquis. The reason is that the emperor likes the main character and dare not offend him too much. You don't even look down on the emperor. What's the use of the person he likes? Far-fetched? The protagonist's mother-in-law, Huo Xian, always thinks that she is the first lady in the world. She doesn't pay attention to anyone except Huo Guang. She looks down on the queen and thinks that the emperor will change according to the family's wishes. She also orders the emperor to do things for her. She did this when Huo Guang was in power. She still dares to do this after retirement. Huo Guang still loves her the most. How stupid is Huo Guang? When the protagonist persuaded Huo Guang to retreat, he did not dare to mention that the Huo family was wiped out after Huo Guang's death. He was afraid that his identity would be exposed in the future. You can change the way and mention the arrogance of the Huo family. The emperor is younger than him. What will happen to his family if he dies? How stupid is the protagonist even if this is not the case? As for the personality of the character, it deviates from the setting when I write about it. Wu Si's character is first a military general, then a cautious person, and then he is as timid as a mouse, running away before anything happens, looking forward and backward, and not daring to speak. Even if something happens that has nothing to do with him, he will be scared and pale and sweat all over. You are a military general first, and you are worse than a courageous scholar! There is also An Guogong, who is set to be a man who loves to work hard and wants to cultivate Zhang Qing into a talented person. Moreover, he should be a positive character in the male protagonist camp, but what about the performance in the book? Unscrupulous, capricious, greedy, and opportunistic, the son who was originally intended to be cultivated became a tool to benefit the protagonist. Zhang Qing is set as a military general, young and aggressive, but in actual performance he turns into a brainless character with an IQ and EQ of 250. Actually, I have a question: Why did Zhang Qing write this? What meaningful role did this person play from beginning to end? What meaningful plot was involved? His appearances are all indifferent plots, and what he does in summary is to cause trouble, stir up trouble, find things for the protagonist to help, and lure his father out to cause trouble for the protagonist. Also, I dare not compliment the character of the protagonist. You endure it when the courtiers impeach you for no reason, you tolerate it when Duke An Guo stabs you twice and gets benefits from you, your mother-in-law doesn't take you personally and makes things difficult for you, she comes to your house and looks down on your wife, but you tolerate it, your brother-in-law is mad at you in the early stage, and later he falsely accuses you of treason and kills your whole family, but you tolerate it? Are you a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle? Is it possible for a business tycoon to be such a saint? There is also a technology tree, which is completely written without experience. Once you have a bellows and coal, you want to build a train or a mature version of an internal combustion engine. The protagonist only has the concept of a train. After he proposed it, he threw it to the craftsmen of the Han Dynasty for research. The most awesome thing is that the craftsmen of the Han Dynasty researched it. These craftsmen are better than the scientists of human beings for thousands of years. Not to mention being recorded in the history books, it is not difficult to climb into the universe. Let's talk about the part where the author thinks our brains are bad. The names of the supporting characters change all the time. In the plot of the Huns, whether the translator is named Xia Li or Yu Huan, and whether the villain is called Helian Bobo or Bob Lianhe are still unsolved mysteries. When Liu Bing had just ascended the throne, the protagonist found two minor characters to arrange tasks. These two minor characters temporarily disappeared after joining the protagonist. As a result, one was completely gone and the other became the opposite camp. After the protagonist married the fourth Su Miaohua, she was the sister of the fifth queen, Xu Wan. Xu Wan's description was quite special. She took the initiative to reverse the theory, the emperor granted the marriage, and the marriage was grand. It stands to reason that this kind of character would not be forgotten. However, Xu Wan never appeared after her marriage. When mentioning several ladies again, it became that she never married anyone else after marrying the fourth lady. Xu Wan disappeared completely and disappeared in the setting. There was also a man named Yi'er who came from Yangzhou. After the story in Yangzhou, it was revealed that a man fell in love with the protagonist. He served the protagonist in the study and loved to quarrel with Hua Jin'er. Then this person disappeared and never appeared again. Not only can there be fewer characters, but there can also be one more. There is no one in the previous plot, and there is no one in the following plot. Just mention this sentence, what will happen after marrying Wan'er, please note that this is not Xu Wan's Wan, I did not make a typo. At first, I thought it was because the author was not smart enough to write for a long time and forgot the previous ones. Until the end of the book, when she wrote about the train, I knew that the train, as the longest plot, was not forgotten by her, which proved that it was not she who had forgotten the previous characters, but because we were not smart and we had forgotten them. There are some small details that I really can't remember. I was looking forward to this book when I first started reading it. The writing is good and it should be a good book. The more I read, the more I couldn't stand it. In the end, it made me angry and happy. I wanted to see how bad you can be. The result was beyond my imagination and even worse than I thought. The author is a man of God.

The tail is not tied well and many clues are not explained clearly.

The article is like flowing chapters, with a strong sense of modernity, and it doesn't seem like I have traveled through time. In a strange era, I feel like I am the best in the world, and anyone dares to criticize him. Bad review!

Since ancient times, people have not fought with officials. Yulin Wei was beaten by a gangster, you are awesome! I didn't want to watch it after reading the beginning.

I like it very much. Come on, author. I support you.

S told you where I go to work now! ? ! Am I the one with the big head? What am I? Ah, you are here, why are you so powerful? You don't know what to do in this situation? Good morning, beauty? ! ? . ! {"NickName":"Sleep with your son","UserId":212947758}{"NickName":"Sleep with your son","UserId":212947758}PDF{"NickName ":"Sleep with your son","UserId":212947758}s11H{"NickName":"Sleep with your son","UserId":212947758}My heart hurts and my head hurts. It sounds like what they said is not what you are doing to hurt? ! KCMXXXX to the present {"NickName":"sleep with my son","UserId":212947758}

Write the emperor to death, what do you think? A bit poisonous