The Celestial Realm Phone

Brother, everything the protagonist has comes from his mobile phone, how can he become a soldier? ? Cell phones are not allowed in the military. Author, do you not understand the meaning of being a soldier? Have you been deceived by those ghosts on TV? ? ?

I have a whole system of gods as my backers. Why on earth are you telling me to become an athlete? Compete with the Hulk for strength or speed with The Flash?

People say there are three golden chapters, and the first few chapters of this book are really golden. I thought it was a sacred book, at least the rhythm of food and grass. When the first real-life story came out in Chapter 7, I felt depressed😒, aggrieved, and wanted to vomit. Dozens of corpses, a kidnapped woman who was about to be killed, just two mortals. You have powerful supernatural powers, the strength to move mountains, and the card of Dong Zhuo of the Three Kingdoms. You said you are afraid, well, you can only say that you are not afraid of losing fans by writing like this.

Chapter 326, it really feels a bit incredible.

You can only read the first 30 chapters of this book, and it doesn't matter if you don't read the rest. Even a salted fish is more ambitious than the protagonist.

I feel like this book is so stupidly written. I actually vomited on several pages of my first love ink.

You are all destined to be immortal. You said it was "very cool" because of the three-year no-tax policy? ? Please, are you naive? In your opinion, the purpose of gaining extraordinary abilities is to join the reserve army and then enjoy the three-year tax exemption policy of the reserve army? Do you still need to receive training from the Sports Bureau and the army? ? ? ? ? If you can take a bite of the elixir and train others for a lifetime, are you really not afraid of being sliced ​​into pieces? As for the Super Soldiers, every big shot said lines like "Super Soldiers" in a serious manner, which is really childish. Furthermore, in the face of cross-examination by a beautiful woman without any evidence, you inexplicably admitted it? ? ? ? It was so depressing that I vomited.

After reading more than ten chapters, I failed to resist the poison. When the author wrote about the reincarnation of various small worlds, I thought he was writing about infinite flow again, but ended up with a bunch of messy settings, such as the small world of the Three Kingdoms, the orthodoxy, the possession, and the thing that cannot be removed within ten years. In the end, it is to give the protagonist the ability to transform into Dong Zhuo. Isn't this the character draw card in the system novel? In order to add this setting, it took almost a chapter to explain, and it still made the readers confused, and the writing skills were mediocre.

Although the book is over, opinions no longer matter! I only read the first few dozen chapters. When I saw the reserve and troop training parts, I felt very uncomfortable. I really couldn't stand it! You, a person who has been blessed with immortality, go to the army to train? Isn't this nonsense? It's completely illogical!

Forget about turning into an ugly fat man in front of you. When you call the police, no matter whether it is true or false, the police will be dispatched. It's just a matter of speed or slowness when there are many people and few people. The criminal police is so free to patrol the school for you? You are already a freshman and yet the whole school is mobilized to hold a sports meeting just for the sake of holding a sports meeting? Are the military, provincial sports, and criminal police all so free to watch your school's sports meet? Are you so casually asked to become a super soldier or athlete? Such a powerful golden finger is still struggling to decide whether to be a soldier or an athlete? How about doing something else? Or can't they develop well without being promiscuous?