Porters from Both Worlds

The chapter "First Meeting Song Yiyi" should have dissuaded many people, but I didn't quit; "Relaxing with Lan Xin" was outrageous, but I didn't quit either; There are some shortcomings, big and small, that I won't talk about, you can ignore them But! Damn it, you gave Bai Yang's mother a sacrifice, I didn't expect it! Li Ke's mother opens the door for Li Ke - Wei Wu is home! I thought it was just a cutscene and could be saved in the end, but in the end he just sacrificed himself to the sky! The kind of death! Don't even let me save you! Bai Yang is the true king of Shinto. Maoer has a jade talisman to protect his life. Even the tomb robber An Jiu was given a jade talisman by Bai Yang to protect his life, but his mother did not! In the tragic case of Mouton Jiangshan, was he the only one who only thought about protecting Maoer? Where are your parents? Where is Zhang Qingyu? Is the protagonist Bai Yang an orphan? Do you only have one relative, Cat? I don't understand that the protagonist is so capable, but he doesn't give the people closest to him any pills to increase their strength and increase their lifespan, nor does he give them life-saving props! I don't understand, even if you can't increase your strength, why not get a few deadpools to increase your strength and protect your loved ones personally? Cat is by my side, and in the end, there are only three fiancées, father, mother, and fiancée! Will one person die if he is protected by a high-strength master? Do you think that no one on earth is a threat, so you didn't expect that an accident would happen? The previous article also said that the merit of poplar trees is 100,000 meters thick! The previous article also said that Bai Yang possesses the imperial dragon energy! The previous article also said that people around Bai Yang Fuze will have all kinds of good luck! With so much plot laid out, author, how did you directly sacrifice the protagonist's mother to heaven? ! I'm really crazy! ! Most readers will have a sense of immersion when reading a book. Your writing like this will directly dissuade a lot of readers. I am really convinced! Author, you know you will be scolded by a lot of people for writing like this, but you still write it! What is your state of mind, author? ! You really do! I'm convinced, I'm really convinced! How many people were immediately persuaded to leave on the spot, which makes me so uncomfortable!

I really couldn't stand it when I saw that little Japan had nuclear weapons. It was too dramatic. Did the author really graduate from the nine-year compulsory education? And if you don't accept those women, why are you writing emotional dramas? Do you flirt with them to make you look noble?

Besides! The protagonist was scared to death at the beginning. He went to the hospital everywhere, thinking that he had a mental illness. Then he narrowly escaped death and ran out of the woods. How long did it take? I have no skills at all. I know that the forest is dangerous and difficult to guard against, so I went up to the pole and rushed in because I was bored. I was scared to death and didn't know how to improve my survival ability. A very awesome old man taught him martial arts, but he thought that his martial arts were low and useless. Well, I thought you had heard that there were awesome warriors in the other world and didn't want to learn this useless thing. But after arriving in the other world, he got the martial arts secret book, but he didn't learn it, and even threw the secret book to others. Okay, you said you don't know the alien writing and can't learn it, so can't you just put it away and learn the writing and practice it later? Also on a trip, hundreds of people wearing armor and swords went to the county town to trade. When they encountered robbers, they relied on a group of people to protect them and were surrounded by people. They also felt in danger. If they didn't know how to be strong, they didn't know that they were weak. Can a little poisonous insect or an arrow kill him? After finishing the calculation, two warriors squatted in front of the house, and asked if there was any way to improve it. I thought that this guy somehow knew how to improve his survivability. After practicing martial arts, his own sensory abilities and physical abilities will be improved. It will not be so easy to kill others, and he can also extend his life and strengthen his body. It turns out that this guy just said he was afraid of hardship and tiredness. Well, even if you are afraid of hardship and tiredness, I would like to ask you if you don't learn, will your life be gone for a hundred years and then disappear? Nothing forward-looking. And now is the time, can't you let someone teach you how to read? Okay, I didn't read the rest. I thought it was because of your difficulty in reading. But why are you telling me that you don't know whether an atomic bomb can kill someone? Is the atomic bomb something you, a common man, can have access to? Even if you come into contact with it and get it, will you detonate it? Did you think it was a grenade? Will it explode if you pull the safety off? Many times, the protagonist is dismissive of power on the grounds that the protagonist can return to Earth at any time, saying that you have to be able to fight. The problem is that you yourself have mentioned the enemy's mysterious speed, and the warrior standing silently behind you. Doesn't this remind you of the assassin profession? Okay, even if you say you can't beat someone even if you practice martial arts, then you can at least delay it for a while, right? Even if you are running away, you can run faster to delay time, right? Even if you can return to Earth, you still have to be able to react, right? Someone comes from afar with a cold arrow, and you just pretend to be awesome without learning anything. How can you run away? If someone gives you some poison while eating and you don't have any martial arts skills, by the time you react, you will die even if you are running around the world! How can I give you so much time to run back to Earth? I have been here for so long and experienced so many dangers, especially living in a forest full of strange animals and poisonous weeds and insects. I just can't understand how he changed from a timid person to such a bold person. There are a lot of things I want to complain about, such as realistic plots, but I don't want to write about them. The writing style of the author of the novel is okay, the plot and so on are good, and the subject matter is also very good, but the protagonist is a trap. He wants to write a funny story but it turns out to be a slap in the face. I really don't want to watch it anymore, and I can't stand it anymore. It makes me feel depressed. I even wrote such a long paragraph.

The subject matter is a good one, and the overall layout is good. Except for the emotional drama, which is a complete mess, some are helpful to me in the future and some of them really like me, and some are just like me. As a result, I used various excuses to say that I have someone I like and I need to be loyal. At the same time, I decisively attacked the brothel girl and the maid I met several times, and even let the maid give birth to a child. Then there are things that can be explained in one sentence, just don't say it, just find something to force yourself to do, even if the other person is a few levels stronger than you, or a person with a big power and background, if you say something wrong, you will forcefully kill others or exterminate the clan, vomit blood... If it were not for the protagonist in the author's works, he would have been killed many times in real life. The original version of the Internet text routine from a long time ago is really unbearable, and the pirated version is skipping, and the more I read, the more depressed I can't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

The subject matter is very good, but I don't understand why the author must rub the reader's IQ on the ground →_→

I saw Chapter 79 and couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's personality is like a psychopath, and he always insults people casually. To be honest, if there were such people in reality, they would have been beaten up by the society. Even though I am a newly graduated college student, can college students really talk so stupidly? How did he spend his four years in college? Are you afraid of being beaten every day? Don't even think about making a single friend?

I can read the first 100 chapters, but the further back I go, the harder it becomes. The writing level and story structure are like a roller coaster. Do you want to write with your feet? In addition, there are a lot of bugs. If you want to continue reading, you must either be clueless or have the consciousness of Shen Nong who tasted hundreds of herbs. You can't afford to offend poisonous weeds. Take your leave.

I blame me for not reading the book review first. I have been poisoned to death. Goodbye.

It's really good, but the problem is that the ending is too casual. After meeting Princess Tianxin, I felt that the pace was very fast and urgent, and Tianyuan died like this. The ending is not exciting, but the whole story is really okay. Support

In the early stage, I thought it was a king, but the more I looked at it, the more substandard it became. The second half was not even considered a bronze.

After reading two to three hundred chapters, the subject matter is really good. . However, the whole article is full of weirdness and exclamation points, which will really make you feel poisonous after reading it for a long time. Furthermore, the male protagonist is defined as too funny, making it difficult for people to fully experience the world written by the author.

Message to the author: After spraying, my thoughts are clear. Terribly sorry! I'm not really bad, but I really like the book written by the author Lao Shi. I came here after reading - Renshijian - and saw that more than 600 chapters have not been updated. It's really a pity book! Maybe Lao Shi was not at his current level at that time, but from today's perspective, Lao Shi's progress was still great. In addition, I would like to give Lao Shi some immature advice. Survival is the first element of human beings. No matter who it is, the first thing they think about should be how to survive. The second is a sense of security. When people have no worries about food, they will consider their own safety. The third point is people's sense of satisfaction. This is something people will only consider when they are worry-free about survival and safety, that is, finding their own meaning, realizing their self-worth, and thus gaining a sense of satisfaction. When people arrive in an unfamiliar environment, the first thing is to observe the environment, and then formulate the most beneficial plan for themselves based on the environment, and then further implement it. For example, the protagonist in Human World is very smart and knows that as a child, if he does something astonishing as composting and increasing the yield, the consequences will be unpredictable, so he uses chicken manure to plant seedlings to avoid risks. In fact, many of us are empty, so we need excellent authors like Lao Shi to write interesting and entertaining stories for us to satisfy ourselves from the spiritual level. I am looking forward to Lao Shi's growth! I will continue to pay attention! A fan from Lao Shi

Overall, although the novel has some flaws, it is still readable. You can also complain while watching. After all, it can be seen that the author worked hard, and the work should be given some respect. I hope everyone will evaluate carefully. The first part of this book is slightly science fiction, but the second part is completely fantasy and immortality. In the early stage, it was obvious that the author still lacked scientific knowledge. I only know long guns as anti-materiel sniper rifles, Ballet, and all guns that can fire continuously are called machine guns. Pistols only know Sand Eagle. In the early stage, I wrote a lot about the transportation between the two worlds, but in the later period, I mainly focused on the other world and did not move much. As for the plot, from the moment the male protagonist leaves the Chen Kingdom, it is a bit skewed. Also, the relationship line was not handled well. The wife who came out of the earth for no reason was not mentioned much later. Several of the main wives did not get pregnant, but the escort maids became pregnant, and they continued to be pregnant for several years but did not give birth. . . In the fantasy world, it's okay to be bigger, but a dragon or wolf that's hundreds of miles long can beat a human that's less than two meters long. I think he can't hit it at all. It's just like humans hitting bacteria with bare hands. Can you kill a bacterium by pressing it down?

The subject matter is good and the writing is good. Just like "Mercenaries", there are mercenary wars and real life. What was originally a good book was ruined by an inexplicable Wang Qingyu. The author uses his obscure "high" IQ to try every possible means to lower the readers' IQ to the same level as his, and then defeat all readers.

The ending was not good, your mother was gone even before she was resurrected, alas!

This kind of pig's feet follows the trend~ As long as the emotional scenes here are deleted, it will be much better. Come on＾0＾~

459 460 Poisonous😰

I can't stand seeing 705 anymore.

It's such a shame about this subject matter. . He actually wrote about funny pig's feet...

Chapter 823: The protagonist's mother is dead The protagonist's mother was stabbed to death by a branch? ? ? The mother of Shinto Lord was stabbed to death by a tree branch? ? ? ? There are a lot of self-defense treasures from the women around the protagonist. His parents have eaten a few fruits and drank 2 sips of wine from the beginning to now. Knowing that so many people may target him and his family, they have become true kings and have no self-defense at all. The main character of the co-author just looks like a wolf? ? You might as well be Orphan Gambit, it makes me sick!

I've read a lot of novels about traveling through various planes, and I discarded many of them right away, but I actually read this one in one go. The first is the way to get rid of alien goods. The author arranged it very cleverly, through parents! Who else in this world treats you better than your parents? Secondly, there is the detail of language. Oh my god, so many time-travel novels are self-taught in the languages ​​of other worlds. Some authors have some brains to make a universal translator or use magic means to read the language center. It is really rare for someone to learn to speak in this book. All in all, this book is bound to be a hit.

Personal evaluation, don't criticize if you don't like it Personally, I feel that it is useless except for the creativity and line writing sequence, and it is a standard white text. The following points I think are the biggest poisonous points. 1- Based on real world price standards, the price of 1 million per milliliter for the lowest-end wine definitely shows the shallowness of the author's experience. The cooperative company with Song Daodao occupies 99 shares. This is the equity distribution that only SB can have. First of all, the price of this kind of thing will not be low. Ordinary people cannot afford it. People with a little money will not buy it often. Only the real rich will buy it for a long time. Even if you sell a bottle of 100,000, Songdao will get 1,000 bottles. After all the taxes and costs, Songdao will never make more than 300 profits. This is the poisonous point. 2-The character structure is too naive, the supporting characters have no IQ at all, and the dialogue is rough. The author positioned the protagonist as a wise man in a different world, but he turned out to be a retarded person, especially the reactions of Niu, Lan, and the two families after they destroyed the Che family. This is something that can only be written with such poor social experience. 3-The components of the cultivation system. As a pure cultivation civilization, it is inferior to a technological civilization in terms of cultivation theory and direction. The protagonist turns out to be a cultivation teacher with just two words. It is scary to think about it. 4-The protagonist's behavior is simply a retard among retards. Even a primary school student knows what politeness, dialogue, etiquette, and money concepts are. It is simply impossible to look straight at him. Although it is said that online novels do not need strict theme lines, they don't have to be so sloppy!

What can I say about this book? The subject matter is very good, but the author always tries to persuade you to read it. Sister Hua was taken as a hostage, and the male protagonist just killed me and I couldn't bear it. Su Xishui interacted with the male protagonist in so many chapters in the early stage, but in the end, her parents directly appointed Wang Qingyu, who had no foreshadowing in the early stage, to get married, and also used various moral coercion to force the marriage. The male protagonist actually tolerated it after meeting him, and finally arranged a kidnapping incident and their relationship warmed up. There is also an important supporting role, Shan Qiulin, who obeyed the male protagonist's advice just because of a poem. After he deceived the senior brother and broke his arm, he became infamous for killing his fellow disciples. In front of the male protagonist, he still said that I didn't follow your plan completely. After that, he followed the male protagonist wholeheartedly. The eldest brother and his junior sister were captured by the Blood Lotus Cult. After the eldest brother fell in love with each other, the male protagonist and his junior sister made a big fuss at the wedding. He knew that the junior sister would be killed by the people around him if he wasn't careful, but he didn't even give him the slightest telekinesis protection, so he was tricked and tricked into death by the bride. Okay, I can bear it. But when it came to the part where the male protagonist's mother died, it was outrageous. A storm was coming, but he actually insisted on risking his life and took his men out to inspect various dangers. After arriving at the beach hotel, knowing that a big wave might pass and no one would be there, he insisted on staying there. Originally, according to the setting at this time, you would have risked your life to go out for inspection halfway, so continue to inspect. No, the male protagonist's mother is like this The time comes when I can't go out and cause trouble, and then I am killed by a falling branch. At this time, the poison is really unbearable. If you go against the routine, just go against the routine. I can bear it even if I am drowned by a tsunami, but the male protagonist is really a gentleman. He has a bunch of useless low-level protective items in his hands. He is generous to his subordinates in the other world. When it comes to his closest relatives, Mao doesn't give any or arrange for protection. I really want to persuade you to give up. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye. This book has a lot of fun and counter-plots. Although it is poisonous in the early stage, I can still read it. In the middle and late stages, all kinds of serious poisons come. It is really unbearable. Finally, don't look at the various women in the book who fell in love with the male protagonist at first sight, and the male protagonist spanked and teased him in various ways. But except for Mao Mao and Wang Qingyu, the male protagonist didn't confiscate any of them. If you want to read a fun and refreshing article, you can read it casually before chapter 700. I really don't recommend reading it after that. It will make you die.

I've given you four monthly passes, so I'll give you the last one too.

The writing is completely broken. The author dug a hole and buried himself. The author has always emphasized the importance of merit and its incomparable power in the book. But what happened? The protagonist just saved the world, and the protagonist's mother ended her life in a very fucking way - being stabbed to death by a tree branch. After this incident, a scene of a filial son rescuing his mother and confessing his heart was very touching in the eyes of the author, and then the protagonist's failure to save his mother led to a drastic change in the character of the protagonist - it can be called a schizophrenia. (I don't know how many people abandoned the book because of this poisonous point) After indifferently ignoring the will of all humans and even all living things on earth, it forcibly changes the fate of all life - completely regardless of whether you are willing or not, and thinks that you are a holy mother, and finds a reason for yourself to comfort yourself "for the good of all living things on earth." This kind of demon hidden under the image of the Virgin is simply chilling. Alas, give it up, give it up.

Everything about this book is good, but the protagonist is too dissuasive. Why do so many books like to create such funny protagonists? Call it funny, I feel like a monkey jumping up and down, like a retard, talking like a tongue-tied woman, talking like a second-rate gangster on the street, it's so disgusting

I can't stand it anymore. China has no favor. Now it's back to the world of favor. You're so big-hearted. Your mother has written you off. You haven't taken good care of the people around you. You still have a shitty dojo. The development of things has no idea at all. It's so bullshit.

The author likes to go against the grain and go crazy for death. I wrote Hua Sanniang to death, Lan Xin to death, and the protagonist's mother to death. In the end, I succeeded in trying to commit suicide, and it couldn't be finished anymore.

The author lacks common sense and makes all kinds of logic illogical. I don't recommend watching it unless you have your brain stored first. For example, if you speed a motorcycle 8 times over the speed limit, you will be fined 3,000 yuan and deducted 48 points 😅. Skip to the main text. There is also a tiger who was shot through both eyes by an arrow and was killed instantly. The tiger's eyes are on the front, aren't they on both sides like those of cows and horses? Moreover, after three natives killed a tiger and saw a paper bowl of instant noodles on the ground, they didn't even want the tiger, picked up the bowl of instant noodles and left. Are the natives so rich?

I really can't watch it. The protagonist is a modern man. He knows that his physical strength is not good enough. He has the opportunity to learn martial arts to strengthen his body and has magical medicine to assist him, but he doesn't learn it. He doesn't put away the martial arts secret books. If he can't understand it now, won't he understand it in the future? If a woman throws herself into my arms, I won't do it. If she doesn't, I won't do it. So don't write every chapter.