Cross-Dimensional Surveillance
跨界监控
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 663k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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Synopsis
Stats
121Chapters
4.7kRecommendations
15.5kFans
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The writing itself isn't bad, but there's a lot of unnecessary rambling and complaining. It becomes unreadable after chapter 30. They're in another world, and they're still practicing martial arts, playing with incense, skeptical of this and that, and even needing to analyze harmful components. You might as well just remove the surveillance footage and write about analyzing the beneficial components in the book; at least the readers wouldn't feel uncomfortable.
I didn't notice anything else, except that the author is really good at padding the text; reading it quickly doesn't affect anything at all.
I don't know if it's just me, but I personally feel that there's a lot of dialect used in some places. I sometimes find it a bit tiring to watch, and maybe because I'm not a local, I not only find it tiring but also find it difficult to immerse myself in the story (this is just my personal opinion, please don't be offended).
Tao An, the male protagonist, experienced an unexpected turn of events in his ordinary life, which then made him extraordinary. The problem is, in a harmonious society, what can I possibly do with my limited skills? 🙂 Yeah? Where's the protagonist's skill going? Twenty chapters and not a single one has been revealed. 🙂
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The premise is good, but the protagonist is too indecisive and overthinks things. If he wants to keep a secret, he should do it perfectly; if he wants to sell something, he should do it efficiently. This indecisive and hesitant approach doesn't suit the current pace of life.
Most books are written for Chinese readers; this is the first time I've seen a book specifically written for a particular province.
A book of 100,000 words can be completely unaffected by deleting 40,000 or 50,000 words; you can imagine how padded it is.
The author writes very well, and I look forward to seeing more. If there are any violations, please revise them and keep writing; finding a good book is difficult.
95% Of it is nonsense; I don't know why there's so much nonsense.