Cross-Dimensional Surveillance

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but there's a lot of nonsense and a lot of complaints. I can't read it after chapter 30. It's a different world. I'm still practicing martial arts and playing with incense. I don't believe this and that. I still have to identify harmful ingredients. Then you might as well cancel the monitoring. You might as well write in the book to identify how many beneficial ingredients there are. At least readers won't feel uncomfortable after reading it.

I didn't feel anything else, I just felt that the author was very knowledgeable and could read ten lines at a glance without any influence at all.

I don't know if it's my problem. I personally feel that there are too many dialects used for communication in some places. I feel a little tired sometimes, and maybe because I'm not a local, I'm not only a little tired, but also not immersed in it (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Tao An, the male protagonist, an ordinary life begins to become extraordinary when something unexpected happens. The question is, in a harmonious society, what can I do with this little skill? 🙂 Yes? Where can the protagonist's skill be used? Chapter 20 reveals nothing at all🙂 Judging from popular conventions, either the protagonist is suffering from a disease and the seriously ill heroine needs treatment, or the spiritual energy is revived and aliens invade. The former can powerfully promote the development of the plot, but lacks innovation. The latter has a colorful plot, but requires superb writing skills. This book gives me a sense of tranquility and distance. The author pays great attention to some details and puts himself into the perspective of the protagonist to think about some psychology and perspectives. I think the author has a general blueprint for this book in his mind, so I will not make too many comments. If this book is calm and not entangled in the development of the plot, it is quite good to read it calmly.

The author suffered a sudden illness and has been under treatment for more than 20 days. Updates cannot be made for the time being. Please look forward to it. Thanks!

The subject matter is quite good, but the main character is too naughty and thinks too much. If you want to keep a secret, you will keep it tight, and if you want to sell something, you will sell it quickly. The naughty attitude of looking forward and backward is no longer suitable for the current rhythm.

Other people's books are all for Chinese people. This is the first time I see a book for a certain province.

For a book of 100,000 words, deleting 40,000 to 50,000 words will not affect it at all. You can imagine how frustrating it is.

The author writes very well, and I look forward to continuing to write. If there are any violations, just correct them and continue writing. Finding a good book is difficult.

95% Of it is nonsense. I don't know why there is so much nonsense.