Struggle in the Red Mansion

The first half can be called fairy grass, the middle part can be called hay, and some plots can be called poisonous weeds. I feel that the several crises that occurred were forced to suppress wisdom. Knowing that others want to mess with you, you write Yingning; Knowing that the emperor does not want to see you, you do not hide things in the capital and still attack the court with a fatal blow; Knowing that you cannot afford to participate in the seizure of the legitimate son, and in the end no one participates more than you; Knowing that someone is assassinating you, you still cooperate with the drill carelessly; Knowing that life will be difficult when you come back, you have to come back to face the emperor to mess with you just to see your sister get married. Those who know know that this is the plot arrangement, but those who don't know how to read it and want the protagonist to die. Anyway, the author can make a round shape with a pen, but you also have to consider whether the reader will find it stiff and forced, right?

It would have been nice to write more dramas in the garden at that time. The political battles in the officialdom that you wrote would be terrible even to my children. There is no logic at all.

If the book from Qidian is rated out of 10, this one would be about 7.8, 8.0 For good, 7.5 For bad. It's frustrating from beginning to end, including the end of the coup, and then it's long-winded, quoted too much, and shows off its talent. Life is indeed unsatisfactory in all likelihood, but the novel is written like this. I can only say that I don't have enough control over the entire article while sitting. I don't recommend it to everyone because I'm very angry.

I have read many books about Red Mansions, and this one really ranks at the top. The writing is good, although the plot is a bit broken in the later period, but it does not affect it. A lot of the writing is about stuff that forcibly lowers the IQ of the supporting characters, and the protagonist looks like a fool. This kind of subject matter is really not something that ordinary people can handle. I hope the author can re-open a Red Mansion.

Don't rebel if you wear it clean, chrysanthemum Sorry, I went to the wrong set,

I can't accept being with Lin Daiyu, and it has actually become a pure romance here. There must be a limit to opening a harem. It is acceptable to have a maid or the like as a concubine, but the two heroines marrying the protagonist at the same time is obviously a failure. It is neither realistic nor in line with the heroine's character. No matter how generous Xue Baochai is, he will not allow Lin Daiyu to have the same status as her, not to mention that Lin Daiyu is very sensitive and jealous. Furthermore, how many people in history could marry the legitimate daughter of such a big family at the same time? How shameless are they? I would rather see Lin Daiyu die as sadly as in the original novel, than see her and Xue Baochai serve the same husband together!

At first he said he wanted to leave the Jia Mansion, but then he decided not to leave. A bastard still insists on hanging out in the Jia Mansion. The benefits will not be shared, and the bad things will all be yours. Even if the Jia Mansion is really revitalized, it is better to set up his own business if he has the time.

I have read more than 600 chapters so far, and the protagonist keeps saying that he is in a very aggrieved state. As for the female protagonist. Currently confirmed to be accepted: Qingwen, Baochai, Ruyi (maid), Daiyu and Su Shishi, and one named Lin. The last two are original characters, and the female lead is missing. Possibly accepted: Qin Keqing, Ning Xiao (original), Li Wan (unsure), Xiren. Plot of giving away girls: Xue Baoqin, Jin Xun gave to Baoyu, Fu Qiufang gave to Qin Zhong, Xichun gave to an original character of Fatty (personally extremely disgusted), Tan Chun seemed to be married to the King of Wu, but it seemed that it was blown, the second sister You and Heping'er were given to Jia Lian, the third sister You was given to Liu Xianglian, and the others were forgotten for the time being. Poisonous points of the plot: 1. All the jewels and jewels were strengthened by Jia Zhen, and one of them was even strengthened to death. 2. Yuanchun gave birth to a prince, but the prince was killed not long after. He used the writing method of "the woman in the refrigerator" and used the tragedy of the female character to reflect the anger of the protagonist. Yuanchun should not dare to write the scene to death in the scene he is watching, and it is probably the Qingdeng Ancient Buddha. 3. The author seems to have thought about writing Daiyu to death, and still uses the same routine to express the protagonist's anger in this way, but the identity of this person was temporarily changed to Daiyu's aunt and Lin Ruhai's concubine. 4. The author's early writing of the protagonist was very awkward. He wanted to escape Jia's house in various ways. He wrote many plots in which Mrs. Wang, Wang Xifeng, and others almost ruined each other's career many times. Even Jia's mother made things difficult for her, and ended up making dumplings. 5. I wrote "special writings" on Li Wan and Wang Xifeng's body and appearance many times, but refused to accept them. I don't quite understand this behavior. 6. I don't believe that Jin Tong was sent to Baoyu's room without leaving any grudges when he almost died because of Baoyu's cowardice.

Have you read the novels of Feng Lazi, Qin Keqing, Li Wan, Aunt Xue, Mrs. Xing, Sister Ruan 123 and Jia Mu at the same time?

Nine and a half of the ten books in The Red Chamber are the bastard stream. The bastard stream looks a bit awkward. In the feudal dynasty, the bastard was born disabled. No matter how great his achievements were in the patriarchal clan, he could not surpass the legitimate son. Look through the history books to see which family's bastard can surpass the legitimate son, and see which online novel dares to use the disabled as the protagonist. There is a difference between the concubine flow and the waste material flow.

He is worthy of being the protagonist! He is so greedy! I look down upon him very much! I feel that except for some knowledge he learned in modern times, there is no trace of modern people in his thoughts and personality! And often slapped in the face! I'm not saying that in ancient times, he must be a couple for the rest of his life, but he shouldn't say that he won't be with her and then slap himself in the face soon after! Just think about it! There is no need to say so many words to cover up, it is better to be generous! And what I despise most about him is what happened between him and Sister Lin. First, he was sorry for Sister Bao (he and Sister Bao were already engaged at that time. Sister Lin is different from those prostitutes. She is a person of status, and she will pose a threat to Sister Bao.) Second, he is not in line with his original promise to Lin Ruhai (a bit like being a thief). Also, the male protagonist's outlook on life is incorrect! This is the first time I read a novel from the perspective of the male protagonist. Is it true that male protagonists in novels like to pretend to be bad and have a harem? Moreover, this male protagonist is quite like a holy father (he wants to save all the miserable people, especially women, in the original Red Mansions)

Seeing that Daiyu fell in love with Jia Huan, she gave up the article, "Dad Lin asked you to take care of your daughter before his death. This is how you took care of your daughter, and you still have to be a little girl. That's bullshit. I'm afraid my father will not rest in peace until he dies." If I were the male protagonist, I would definitely keep distance from Daiyu Baochai. People like to play solitaire poems, but the male protagonist only knows how to copy poems.

Don't call yourself a lover when you've already been a stallion. Isn't that disgusting? Take it! Sow the seeds! Come out, Daiyu powder, Baochai powder, and Qingwen powder. I'll go first! Is it wrong to write Sister Lin like this, a strange woman who values ​​love more than life, and in the end a hundred girls serve one husband? I regret spending 40 yuan to read a stallion story. Don't write this thing under the banner of Dream of Red Mansions. Finally, have you read Yin of the Burial Flower? "The essence comes and goes clean again, and does not let the dirty water fall into the ditch" is Daiyu's original intention.

I find that almost all those who write about Red Mansions are concubines. If they are not concubines, it seems they can't write? Looking at the books, nine and a half out of ten are the concubines of the Jia family! It's 2020 and the flow of waste materials is really no longer possible😖

After reading hundreds of chapters, I really can't stand it. Let me talk about my personal poisoning points: 1. He kept emphasizing that he was leaving the Jia Mansion. There was no need to save the Jia Mansion. Say a few words to show your attitude, keep learning and emphasize, keep emphasizing, and smile indifferently at every turn, which makes you feel sick to your stomach. And in the end, instead of saving the Jia family, I guess Wang Xifeng and Mrs. Wang both died a good death. Haha, the two people almost killed the protagonist in the first place. In the later stage, I guess the author's urinary behavior can be cleared up. Book friends, if you see the ending of these two people, please tell me. 2. Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, and writing official articles under the guise of the Red Mansion. It's exactly like "The Rebirth of the Bastard and the Rise of the Bastard", the path to the rise of the Bastard in ancient times. What kind of story is "The Red Mansion"? 3. I feel like the main article is abusive. 4. The most important thing is: I heard that I took in Lin Xue, two famous prostitutes, a few maids, and a princess..., Um, um, um, you don't want the gold hairpins, but you like the famous prostitutes? I can understand why Qin Keqing is the most beautiful woman in the Red Mansion and she and Jia Rong are loving and harmonious~ Is this the description of Jia Rong's character in the original novel? His father, Jia Zhen, took his wife by force, where were the others? That's about it, personal opinion.

Generally speaking, the early stage is frustrating, the middle stage is frustrating, and the late stage is frustrating. . . You get used to it. . .

Has anyone traveled through time and become Jia Zheng and smashed Jia Baoyu's jade to pieces? MD, what the hell is this?

From the beginning, the author wanted to write the protagonist into a transcendent state, but the method was too vulgar, which made the protagonist appear to have a superior arrogance, which turned out to be a failure and a bit poisonous.

I didn't want to continue reading, but after searching on Baidu, I heard that the author has many female friends, and my eyes lit up. It's worth reading! (By the way, don't you think it's very disgusting for the protagonist to be pure and self-absorbed in a woman's den?)

I feel that the protagonist is so miserable. He eats leftovers every day and is almost cheated to death by Baoyu and Jia Mu many times. He also has to wipe the butt of the Jia family and satisfy the greedy desires of the Jia family. In order to study, he spends all his energy kneeling in the snow to beg Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang. After finally being admitted to the Juren Examination, he meets an extremely mean and ungrateful emperor who is deeply prejudiced against the protagonist!

Gee, isn't there a Red Mansion that can be compared with this book? I shouldn't have read this one first. It tasted so bad at the beginning that I couldn't stand the other Red Mansions.

It can be said that the author who writes serious Red Mansions fan fiction is among the best. If you just look at the first half of this book, the protagonist Jia Huan takes the imperial examination and becomes a member, the score is at least 9 out of 10. The world of Dream of Red Mansions in the original book is vividly displayed in the first half of this book. I really can't complain about the second half, so I give it a 6 points! Stepping out of the world in Dream of Red Mansions, the descriptions in official circles are really retarded, yes, they are retarded. The protagonist explodes the mentally retarded emperor's head in front of all the civil and military officials. There are too many flaws that I won't go into. Why should the author exploit his shortcomings and avoid his strengths? The Red Mansion fan has written so well, so why should he jump out of the world of Red Mansions? To be honest, if the first half of this novel had not used the world of Red Mansions to create the protagonist Jia Huan, no one would have known about this book based on the description of the second half alone. You can also see why the author is so popular when he opens a new book. Really, the author came back to write about Red Mansions, and the prostitution party will support you for the first time in his life.

After chasing it for two years, I finally finished it. Countless scenes came to mind... Thank you so much!

The reasons are as follows: 1. Mr. Jiuwu fully grasped the biggest joy of Red Mansions: among a group of useless men and colorful women, the only man who holds up the sky is the male protagonist. I personally think this is the most exciting point of The Red Mansion. Anyone who has read The Red Mansion knows how the few helmsmen in the original work were successful and failed. It is simply not that exciting to have someone come to cleanse the old and welcome the new to protect the golden hairpin 2. All the emotional ones have been accepted, and there is no leakage of girls. I think the most important thing about harem novels is that the female characters have feelings. It would be boring to collect them like collecting stamps. It would be a shame to miss out and give them away if they have feelings. This is the most annoying thing. As for Jin Chai, it's understandable that I only collected a few but not all of them. I didn't meet the author xp and the author couldn't describe the feelings by force. Just write a good ending for them. 3. The story of a scholar's ​​study is quite well written. The choice of the protagonist is basically the only way out for a concubine from a feudal family. The hard study and hardships all the way have resonated with many modern students. 4. The Garden Opera is good. The Red Mansion is about politicians taking on politics. Fans who do not understand politics and do not understand politics cannot write well and can only be confused. The conflicts in the early stages of the book are well arranged. I remember one night I watched it without stopping at 2 o'clock in the middle of the night. 5. The protagonist acts steadily and strategizes with moderation. He has admiration for women but is not obscene and lustful. This is so important. If it is too greasy, I will not be able to stand it. The few Red Mansions I read now are greasy, and even the elders and sisters have read them. They are really unpalatable.

A burger with shi coated unevenly on the sandwich. It looks delicious, but a strange smell comes after you take a bite.

Although I know that most of the 16-year-old books are about the protagonist's counterattack, after reading the free chapter, I went out to read the subsequent 100 chapters. I won't talk about the book-selling part. The disaster relief part is really about ex. It's a lot for a nine-year-old child to make a lieutenant 🥚, and then there is a series of ex operations that kill Jia Zhen... The level of wisdom in this book is comparable to that of the emperor's poor champion among the books I have read. I'd better forget about paying for the train ticket.

The atmosphere in the comment area is so strange! I read this book 20 years ago, and I was shocked. This book feels very real in all aspects, whether it is the change of the protagonist's thoughts or the method of improving the protagonist's status. It is a little bit broken at the end. I skipped reading it, but I still think it must be the best one among all the Red Mansions themes, and it deserves a one-star masterpiece, so which one I am afraid that I have already read it, and I will suddenly think of it again six years after reading it when I read the novel on the theme of Red Mansions at the starting point. I want to see what book friends think of it, but few of them have good things to say about it. When I was reading it at that time, I remembered to read other novels about Dream of Red Mansions, and then other books were completely inferior to it. Is there any novel about Dream of Red Mansions that can surpass it? Can you recommend something?

I see that the comment section is full of trolls, so why does this book still have one star? I've read a few Red Mansions fanfics, and they don't seem to have much better results than this one. Can you explain it?

He has always talked about leaving the Jia family, and he talks about it once every two chapters on average. He can talk about everything, but he has never said how he plans to leave, and he has a seamless and arrogant attitude. He is just making money and causing trouble. If making money is related to the plan to leave, why not just tell the plan directly? You are not trying to embarrass readers, but driving them away. Just say wait a few years and make money first. Then she was punished by Wang Xifeng and directly resisted fiercely. Not to mention holding back for the sake of the plan, it was just a small thing to punish the male protagonist at the beginning. The more the male protagonist resisted, the bigger the problem became. Later, he was directly banned and unable to make money. The unknown plan was ruined. You are only seven years old. You said you wanted to be a transparent and obscene person while doing the opposite thing. The supporting characters are all pretty normal. It's the first time I've seen a show where only the male lead is cast down.

The protagonist is only eight years old, but it's outrageous that he can't stop obsessing over a mature woman.