Starting with Huashan Yuebuqun

What's there to write about in the Book of Swords and Enmities? If I could travel across the heavens, even if I destroyed the Manchu Qing Dynasty, I wouldn't know who the world would be for. Honghuahui is a bunch of garbage from top to bottom, maybe not as good as Manqing! Jin Yong's butt has been crooked since the beginning of Blue Blood Sword, and his outlook on life is seriously incorrect. Yuan Chengzhi is a typical representative of the traitor who succeeds more than he does, and is a typical representative of bad things. , And Yuan Chonghuan, Ling Chi is justified, it is simply funny. If Yue Buqun had the opportunity to clean up the family and destroy Mu Renqing's masters and disciples collectively, they would not have a good thing, and the Huashan Sect would be ashamed of their ancestors in their hands!

It's about qualifications again, don't make them up! Find a good reason to suppress the protagonist. The article "Easing Muscles and Strengthening Bones" is originally designed to improve physical fitness. As a result, I am not qualified enough to practice. Author, you are so funny. Guo Jing's qualifications are not much better than Yue Buqun's, maybe even worse. But Guo Jing has a sincere heart, a broad mind, good luck, and many noble people. What does being a great hero have to do with qualifications? Yue Buqun is a pitiful guy. He is extremely stressed and has a changeable temperament. He doesn't study Taoism and Confucianism, which is the wrong direction. It would be great if he can become a top ten master in Xiaoao. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ by​​​ If your qualifications are not good, your practice will be extremely slow at best, and you can't practice with all your abilities?

Write about Red Mansion, buddy, stop fussing.

Isn't the author confused? Let me go to Yue Buqun. When I was young, I was not imprisoned. I was still far away from being imprisoned.

Write about Red Mansion, my Brother Wu

If you do a good job of lightning protection such as missing a girl and sending a girl away, you will basically be invincible. I like the career of working hard in the Red Mansion

What's written about Red Mansion is really divine, but what's written about this one is really shit. Imagination doesn't matter, nor does combat prowess, but you just turned a martial arts novel into a harem stud novel? Can Ning Zhong let Lao Yue accept the harem? Can you have a harem if you are good at martial arts? Why does Zhang Wuji have a headache? Guo Jing collected Hua Zheng together, and Yang Guo, Xiao Longnu and Guo Xiang spent time together! Ning Nuxia is a female hero in the world. It is nonsense enough to get a maid as a dowry. Today is good. Lian Xue Sanniang, who has no emotional basis and is just greedy for body, accepted it obviously. She didn't know what to do next, so she gave up.

The inner strength of the protagonist in your story is gone after a few uses. Look at how long Huang Yaoshi, Zhou Botong, Ouyang Feng, and the Quanzhen Seven Sons of Shooting Condor Niujia Village fought. First they ran for so long, and then they fought for so long. What kind of endurance did Yue Buqun ask you to write about, so all the internal strength you practiced was wasted? Was it all in vain? It's really a bit hard to fight several young Wuyue leaders with so much effort.

Writing three books at the same time is exhausting you lazy dog.

Swordsman World's qualifications are useful, but they are not a decisive factor. Moreover, in the original work, Yue Buqun's mentality is distorted and repressed, yet he can still be regarded as one of the top ten masters in the entire martial arts world, which is enough to prove that his innate talent does not matter whether he is great or not. In addition, everyone in Lin Pingzhi said that he was not qualified, but after practicing swordsmanship for more than a month, he was able to trick the masters of the established sects and masters from beyond the Great Wall from the level of ordinary disciples.

Now there is really nothing for fans of Red Mansion to watch. It's time for Jiu Wu to take action.

It's a road to darkness. Not deleting bad comments is an advantage, but readers' opinions are never listened to. It's suitable to write about Red Mansions, and write about family affairs, but I just don't write. I like to break through myself. The problem is that even if I break through myself, I can't keep doing it behind closed doors. Don't listen to anything, just write by yourself, leave your grades here. Martial arts literature, readers don't want your writing to be over the top, just be logical. Martial arts writers are most afraid of inconsistency and the collapse of their combat power. The Bone Forging Chapter of the Nine Yin Book of Changes clearly states that it is for improving qualifications, but Yue Buqun is not qualified enough. Think about it for yourself, is there a contradiction? Does a technique used to improve qualifications still require good qualifications to practice? What's the improvement? Can't you improve your qualifications to become an immortal?

There are many extras whose names are hard to pronounce, so what's the point of writing them down? They can only make people look at them and make noise.

I want to ask Jiu Wu what he thinks. I still vaguely remember in the closing speech of Struggle in Red Mansions. You said that a gentleman is ill and has no reputation. Do you regret the wanderings of these years? It has been seven or eight years. If you had continued to write about Red Mansions and traditional history and culture, you could have rested on your laurels. It was cool outside the house and I wrote several books about Red Mansions before I had the confidence to consider transformation. Why are you doing this? I am really sorry to see you open a book again. I still hope your new book will be successful 🙏 Come on

I can't stand it anymore. It's not a problem that the story isn't exciting enough, it's a problem with the author's incomplete cognition, which jumps out to prick you from time to time. For example, the inner energy absorbed by the Beiming Divine Skill is impure, which is a secondary hypothesis of many fan authors, but this is a big problem like the problem that can be solved by expelling the indigestion caused by eating; another example is that the Eight Desolations and Liuhe Self-respecting Skill rejuvenates the youth after a certain number of years. It is also possible to refining the energy that has been refined over the years and feed it back to the body to prolong life; for another example, if Guo Xiang and Yang Guo have etiquette problems when they are together, but they are peers, where is the etiquette problem? Even if it is said that Yang Guo only has Xiao Longnu in his heart, and even Cheng Ying and Lu Wushuang, who can be said to have supported him half way, cannot tolerate it, he is afraid of being rejected to write a logical relationship, can't he? It's really uncomfortable to have these small details pricking me over and over again. I'm going to say goodbye.

When will the author come back to write Red Mansions? Your Red Mansions is so well written. I got my title from reading your Red Mansions. I can understand if you write other things. After all, the book is yours. Just do as you like.

Hurry up and open a book called Red Mansion. You can't even write a martial arts novel that's enjoyable, so why write anything else? The writing on combat power is a mess. You yourself are confused about the martial arts in the original book. What are you writing about?

There was also a time-traveling martial arts novel before. The protagonist arrived at the Snowy Mountain Flying Fox. He was already innate in the era of books and swords. He did not deliberately pretend to be a senior. He was unscrupulous. No normal person could think highly of the Red Flower Society. The Heaven and Earth Society still had some respect. The Red Flower Society was really speechless. They were a bunch of rubbish. He was dressed in the aristocratic clothes of the Ming Dynasty. He was very arrogant. What do you think of robbing treasures? , He swaggered into the palace openly, trampled on Qian Xiaosi under his feet, and said that the treasury was his money bag and he could take it as he wanted. If you are good at martial arts, you can do whatever you want. You are all pretending to be grandsons just because you have low martial arts skills, so that the whole world did not even dare to mention his name. The Manchus did not dare to treat the Han people as human beings like in history. This is called the time travel of martial arts masters!

He wakes up and holds the power of the world, but he lies drunk on the knees of a beautiful woman. A beautiful woman, a beautiful young woman, a beautiful mature woman, the favorite of married women, the character of Jian'an, the legacy of Wei Wu, the pinnacle of the world.

Man, it's actually good to stay in your comfort zone. Let's continue writing about Red Mansions

The author is still writing a book about Red Mansions. Just one request, don't stall. Farewell to Long Aotian.

The protagonist always measures others by the requirements of saints and treats himself by low standards.