Just When I Was Young

Has this author's account been stolen? Is this what Jiu Wu wrote?

I'll slap you in the face with my teenage fashion and take you flying

There is no doubt that the author's writing style is able to depict the poetic and picturesque Dream of Red Mansions. However, it may be that the author is too impatient. This book is in great contrast with the previous one. They are completely different. I strongly recommend that the author start a new book. For example, the fictional "Water Margin" is well-known, has a grand background, and has many outstanding characters. (Other historical farming genres are also acceptable) Let me briefly talk about the poisonous points of this book: Reborn in 10,000 years, traveling across the Southern Territory, the starting point of the protagonist is too high. Traveling across the earth for hundreds of years, the Southern Territory adventure is reborn (it not only enhances the reader's sense of immersion but also retains readers' expectations for the Southern Territory) 2 It's too fake to become a public enemy of the whole school by shouting the school belle's name while sleeping in class. It would be better to be ridiculed by the whole class for forgetting high school knowledge and getting a historically low score because of rebirth, and the class teacher's criticism is reasonable. 3 The plot advances too fast. It clearly chooses the time of rebirth in high school, but there is no description of daily life. There are only one or two forced pretending to be slapped in the face, and rocket upgrades (you can refer to the similar article "I'm Really Not a God") 4 The supporting characters have too many psychological activities, and they all look down on the protagonist first and then get slapped in the face, all the same. 5 The fighting plot has no novelty and lack of enthusiasm. It is an old routine of upgrading first and then crushing it. (Warriors are like warriors, they control their bodies to fight close to each other. Monks are like mage, they have high attack and weak health, and their methods are weird and changeable. Based on the advantages and disadvantages of the two and the protagonist's rebirth experience, the weak can defeat the strong or win by surprise.) 6 For rural ecology, relatives get along, and the only way to forcefully pretend to be X is to slap someone in the face, which is so poisonous that it makes you want to die. I sincerely hope that the author will regain his strength after waking up and achieve greater success again. To paraphrase "The New King of Comedy": As long as you don't surrender, you are successful.

Jiu Wu's writing style is naturally very high. Whether it's The Descendants of an Aristocratic Family or The Struggle for the Red Mansion, they are all beautiful articles. However, the harem phenomenon is serious. The protagonist in "The Family" has a double-digit harem, and the "Red Mansions" has a double-digit harem. The author of this book has made it clear that he will not be able to live in a harem. Of course, we also believe in the author's integrity. It is estimated that the two unofficial heroines of Mingyue and Shennu will not be exceeded. More than five, but when I saw Chapter 66, I suddenly thought that the author only said that he would not open a harem, but he did not say that he would not accept female apprentices 😃. Look, I dare say that the protagonist's female apprentices must have double digits. I will post it as proof 😃😃

Please, eunuch! Let's switch to historical texts

I can't stand it anymore The more I look at the world, the more dizzy I become. Background: Modern cities before the revival of spiritual energy? A foreign city dominated by aristocratic families that have regained their aura? Organizational form: Anarchy? Small government? Big government? What is the organizational form of national society? (It seems that Qidian is not allowed to mention this), since it has been emptied out, let it be emptied out completely. How are cultivators recognized by the world? Are cultivators everywhere? Or Are cultivators extremely rare? Plot characters are too templated Constantly pretending to be cool, where is the soul of the character? It feels like I've figured out the main plot and then pushed it forward with blunt details. There are no ups and downs, no ups and downs, all the way forward, no suspense. Hurry up and kill everyone who is blocking your way to see your bright moon. At the beginning, I thought that 95 was going to be about an old monster reliving his high school days. It was the beginning of an urban cultivator genre. He pretended to be a pig and ate a tiger in modern society, and accumulated silently in the mysterious world of cultivation. Then his aura revived, and he transformed into a dragon when encountering a storm. Now... I don't know what story 95 wants to write. I have come all the way from the Red Mansion and now I have no choice but to leave. I look forward to your next carefully thought-out book.

Let's write historical novels. I feel that historical novels are more suitable for the author.

I deleted it and stopped reading. It was obvious that the writer had changed. Mentally retarded.

Come back and write Red Mansions quickly, Red Mansions We need you. The first echelon of Red Mansions writers are the concubines who are romantic, struggling in the Red Mansions, conquering the world, and countless romantic figures.

There has been no update for many days. . . So annoying

Where has the promised new book after the National Day gone? Damn it, all the flowers you waited for have faded.

Already fully booked, stick with it✊

The author's writing style is actually okay, but it's a bit wasteful and disharmonious to write a novice novel in this style and use a bad plot. Although it is a novel, many of the details are illogical and painful to read. This kind of refreshing article requires provocative writing style to make people follow the author's rhythm, and many things will be ignored. But this actually doesn't match the author, unless you change the writing style. There is no need to cater to anything, you can write your own stuff and it will not be bad if you write it carefully.

This author ID has definitely been replaced! The depth of thinking in the previous book "Red Mansions" is absolutely impossible to write such an urban and novice novel! Looking at the introduction, it feels like a junior high school Chinese level.

It seems that I am not going to write it anymore What a pity I won't say anything else.

Well written. Cheers to the author.

Although the previous article is a little embarrassing, the green mountains cannot cover it, and it will flow east after all What's wrong with a cool article that pretends to be cool and slaps in the face Just do it if you don't accept it, just be happy Master Jiuwu will take us to continue to delve deeper into this scenery Good luck in the new year＾0＾~

I'm speechless, don't keep following the same routine, where you don't like the protagonist every time, and then slap you in the face, once or twice, it's okay, it's like this in every scene, I almost vomited.

Well? ? ? ! ! ! What's going on. . Didn't I say that I would write about the Ming Dynasty? . . Is this going to stop publishing new books for a while?

It's really awesome. I opened a new book yesterday. The previous books are not finished yet. It's no wonder that this kind of routine is so popular.

Emmmm, is this a eunuch? Unpinned

Can I not be a supervisor? To be honest, I don't know what's going on with the author. Anyway, I didn't read the book smoothly. The relationship between the characters in the middle was not clear. It looked incomprehensible. The chapter breaks were a big problem. There were big jumps between some chapters to the next, which greatly affected the reading experience.

Niu 10,000 years ago turned out to be Hunyuan.

Why do I suddenly want to write about the rebirth of the Immortal Emperor? This subject has been very popular in the past few years, but I have never seen a good book.

The routines used in the past few years are now being used again!

Up to now, it seems that the protagonist's IQ is pretty good, after all, he is a reborn old monster. But after watching it, I found that the protagonist basically has some involvement with every woman, whether she is being used or not, and it is still only at the city level. I hope she will not become a stud in the end. In addition, as some other readers have said, there are too many side descriptions and it feels weird. And for an old bookworm, some plot developments are exposed too early in the writing: for example, the problems of the Gu family, the problems of the parents, the fight between Chufeng and Qianlongbang, the battle in the ancient tomb, etc. Are missing. It depends on how the author handles these events. I hope there will be something brilliant. Having said that, it may also be related to the fact that the number of words in the chapters is too small. If there were hundreds of chapters, I probably wouldn't have so many complaints. Sorry, I really can't keep up, so I'll just keep it up for now~~~

After reading more than 30 chapters, I felt uncomfortable with the character of the male protagonist at first and couldn't figure it out. He seemed to hit and kill anyone he saw. Later, I suddenly discovered that the ones who were beaten were all minions who took the initiative to provoke, regardless of whether they were rich second generation minions to the protagonist. Although he killed decisively, he did not kill innocent people indiscriminately. He would call his childhood teacher by his nickname when he saw him, and he would still pay when he went shopping for food. He was a standard knight-errant. In fact, when talking about this kind of metaphysical rebirth article, two people come to mind. One is Xu Yan from "One Word Can Teach Heaven", and the other is Nie Li from "The Chronicles of Demon Gods". Here we mainly talk about Nie Li. To be honest, my first reaction when I first read this book was, isn't this Nie Li? However, after reading it, I found that the characters of the protagonists in the two books are completely different. First of all, Shen Yu is not that affectionate and does not show excessive tenderness to other women. Even if he has contact with women, it is either between friends or as a passerby. Secondly, the purpose is clear and the killing is decisive. This is what I like the most. For more than 30 chapters so far, the protagonist has actually done one thing well and made every effort to improve his strength and start the path of mystical cultivation. The beginning process is to fight all the way up. In fact, the setting at the beginning also said that this is how he fought up in the previous life. In fact, if you think about it carefully, the protagonist of this book is like an old monster who has been widowed for nearly ten thousand years. The old monster who has been single for ten thousand years is based on Illidan. It would be good if he does not become a madman. There is no unnecessary tenderness. Overall, the reading experience is okay. I support it. I hope it will be the same in the future. Come on!

Tofu nao actually has sugar added. It turns out that the author is a heretic.

Finish this eunuch and start a new one

Doesn't anyone realize that the main character on the cover of the book is handsome?